After Becoming the Stand-in for the White Moonlight

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After becoming the stand-in for the ‘White Moonlight’, the real ‘White Moonlight’ has returned.

Qiao Wan has always understood that she is the substitute for Mu Xiaoxiao, the younger martial sister of the Kunshan Sect, whom they found as a replacement after Mu Xiaoxiao passed away.

Her martial uncle, elder brother, and elder martial sisters cared for her mainly due to her resemblance to Mu Xiaoxiao.

Despite how others said she wasn’t as brave, adorable, or smart as Mu Xiaoxiao, Qiao Wan didn’t mind that her own worth was erased. She doubled her efforts, hoping not to disappoint the expectations of her sect.

One day, the dearly beloved and long-gone Mu Xiaoxiao, the true younger martial sister of the Kunshan Sect, returned, reclaiming everything that belonged to her.

As the stand-in for ‘White Moonlight’, the counterfeit Qiao Wan felt embarrassed, indignant, emotionally broken down, she angrily flipped the table and ‘left the mountain’, declaring that she wouldn’t continue this substitute role.

For so many years, she had been living for others. Now, Qiao Wan just wanted to live her life in a dignified manner for once, and not to forget, to crush those foolish people who tried to manipulate her.

Content Tags: Time-traveling, Xianxia cultivation, Book-traveling, Leveling-up
One-sentence: After becoming the stand-in for the ‘White Moonlight’, the real ‘White Moonlight’ has returned.

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After Wearing a White Moonlight Stand-in (mtl)
穿成白月光替身后
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novem
New novem rated it
May 16, 2024
Status: c347
I'M GOING TO WRITE A COMPREHENSIVE AND VERY LONG REVIEW!!!! Extremely passionate about how surprisingly good this was.

TLDR: review includes all the arcs - including explanation - for people who just want to read this without reading the novel. Idk why you would do that but I wrote it for you.

To begin with, I cried a lot reading this. Maybe I'm just a crybaby but the ending WITHOUT the extras was... oh my god dude... this novel needs to be marked with a TRAGEDY TAG. But thank god for extras,... more>> where all the loose ends were tied.

I will note that this is not a romance heavy novel. The identity of the ML is left up in the air and it literally was not until the last ten chapters where I was like oooo okayyyy so this is probably the ML then... Purely just because there's a lot of men who show up throughout the story but they all play friendship characters and there's no hint of romance, pursuit, or love beyond friendship from the FL.

I could wax poetry about this FL. To begin with, she's not a 'she's not like the other girls' FL that I think novels with badass female tropes tend to fall into. I think the author consciously tried to avoid that. All too often I find that other novels step on like the weak green tea whatever girls to make the badass females seem more masculine. No, the author establishes that the FL is beautiful but her actions distinguish her. And the girls who just rely on their own beauty are not wrong for doing so, but that ultimately, you should learn to rely on yourself.

Major spoiler about the original FL (Mu Xiaoxiao) of the world that the MC FL (Qian Wan) transmigrates into that and how she changes throughout the novel.

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For most of the novel, I really hated Mu Xiaoxiao because she was the type of female who solely relied on her looks. The author emphasises many times that she relies on men and that, while talented in cultivation, actively chooses not to really focus on her cultivation. But that's okay because the men and her original harem of men all spoil her and they always place her at the top. So that was annoying. But what I really liked was that the author emphasises that her character is because she is written like that in the original novel of the world.

The author notes that she's written like a shallow FL, and it is because of the plot that she's like that.

The MC tries throughout the story, not really to fight back, but to tell the original FL Mu Xiaoxiao to rely on herself. But there's always a conclusion by other characters that Mu Xiaoxiao, who has never faced hardship and doesn't know the world, just can't understand.

It's not until the very end when EXTREME SPOILER (Mu Xiaoxiao dies) like the veryyyyyy veryyyyy end like 300 chapters + end, where Mu Xiaoxiao is cast from her gilded cage and forced to see the war and live hardship. Only then (and this is still after days of starving and sobbing for someone to save her) that she realises she can only depend on herself.

I also liked how Qiao Wan notes to the original FL that her character of pandering to men and cuddling up to them is not her original face but a mask she wears to continue enjoying her privileges. But the original FL just wants to continue enjoying her life so she doesn't want to change - even though she knows its precarious. #Relatable. But sadly, she faces life, and in her last actions, does she try to redeem herself.

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So there's this like subplot that surfaces every now and then with the original FL.

Back to the main character. I love how Qiao Wan develops. DEFINITELY not a started strong-ends strong. You see her progress and you see her get pushed down a lot. You see her unconventional modern nature showing up in her actions. But my favourite part of this (aside from the plot) is probably the interactions with other characters.

There's so many extra characters that support her throughout the novel, like every arc she gains a couple new people, but I actually remember all of them because she reminisces about them even after they've parted and they also keep showing up.

Even though this book is only 300 chapters, which I thought was quite short actually for a Xianxia novel, there's a lot of meat into it. A lot happens in just 90 chapters. I'll try to briefly go through the arcs, if you don't mind spoilers. I might forget some though/mix up the order but approximately here:

ARC SUMMARIES HERE:

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Backdrop about the world: there was this demon-cultivator war like 600 years ago where they sealed the demon emperor.

Beginning: world building. Qiao Wan establishing herself in the sect/she remembers that she's in a book, the usual. Mu Xiaoxiao comes back (original FL) comes back and Qiao Wan is forced to confront that yeah she's just a sub. Yeah, she's treated a lot worse than Mu Xiaoxiao. Yeah, she should have no allusions. She meets a couple friends here (Gao Nan <3, Ma Huaizhen (more like a teacher whatever) etc). She dream walks into people's dreams and meets people.

Mudstone realm Arc: secret realm that the FL gets them wrapped into. It's here that Qiao Wan loses her already shallow reputation (bc everyone knew she was a sub except her). Apparently she has some demonic energy in her or something. Qiao Wan is ousted from the sect essentially/loses her cultivation which was pretty bad and restarts. Fakes her death.

Demon emperor intermission: I think this is what's next. She meets the demon emperor. I was like ooo possibly ML??? They fight. This isn't really an arc. She goes into a new cultivation style: body cultivation!!

Cen family arc: This arc is pretty long. She's working as the maid of a family and this is kind of the first exposure to like cultivation world political drama through families. The family gets attacked, there's like so many chapters of the family getting attacked by another family and demons and some of the disciples from her previous sect show up and realise she's here!!! This is like kind of her badassery coming into play. Introducing Cen Qingzhou or something. Cen something. Forgot. But Cen.

Another sect like heavenly light or something its called arc: Qiao Wan has some demonic energy in her that keeps showing up and she, with Cen, go to find Cen's master - some hotshot cultivation master #1 buddha monk guy - to help her. The master helps her. Turns out he was her dream mentor. He beats the sh*t out of her to control the demonic energy. It doesn't really work. He just beats her up in a cycle to make her pass out. whatever. Dream mentor guy is called Miaofa.

CROSSDRESSING COMPETITION ARC: Loved this. There's this competition at the heavenly light sect that shows up every 10 years where all the sects come with their disciples. Usual stuff. Qiao Wan wants to compete but her demonic energy keeps hindering her so she gets taught to split her consciousness into two and she makes like a separate avatar of herself that she can control. She calls it her second account lol like gaming. Anyway, she also makes her second avatar a MAN!!!! And she also makes her **** huge lol. Anyway this side identity of hers is called Lu Cixian. She's lies and tells everyone she's a lone cultivator and makes a huge impression in the competition!!!

Ghost town arc: Don't really remember this. It's just another stage in this competition and crazy stuff happens. Like people getting sacrificed, people dying. Lu Cixian makes hardcore bros here because she/he so cool like that.

Sad Cen arc: Cen is revealed to be the vessel of the blue-eyed buddha. So he's like the reincarnation of some super strong OP demon guy who has terrible karma and everyone hates him and thinks he should die because of it. Cen is forced to like give himself up to a sect for peace and Qiao Wan desperately tries to save him but unfortunately she fails. Cen also gives her a bodhi seed to thank her for being his good and only friend. Also Qiao Wan almost dies.

Buping arc: Qiao Wan gets recruited by this super broke and tiny sect to be their headmaster. She's like wtf why and they're like u blood pacted it when u were about to die. And she's like shitttt ok. But the Buping sect has this one mysterious old master guy who like teaches her pretty good - Luping or something. He tells her to go back to her OG Sect to vanquish her inner demons and she's like I dont want but he's like no go and she goes.

Back to the OG sect: Qiao Wan... a lot happens here. She's here to get this sword manual from her old master. Also a competition is happening at her OG sect and a lot of people who knew her as her male identity Lu Cixian rock up. She uses both her identities concurrently. Wipes the floor. A lot of people are like omg I didn't know Qiao Wan was so strong and also HUHH She's dating this guy called Lu Cixian wtf?!?!? Because they don't know that's also her. Some more relationship turmoil with the OG FL and Qiao Wan and the guys. Qiao Wan learns again that even though sm happened and they thought she was dead, they still instinctually favour the OG FL more and try and cover her. Even when the OG FL is blatantly wrong.

Mini fairy realm: In the competition of the OG sect, it goes wrong and the realm is like corrupted. Crazy monsters rock up. Bunch of people die. Qiao Wan almost dies. Some political drama with the cultivation world families happens here. The OG FL frames Qiao Wan AGAIN but this time it fails. And then like the demon world rocks up, turns out they're behind the fairy realm stuff, and Qiao Wan's uncle - the current prime minister of the demon realm - shows up also. He showed up in the beginning arc but I was lazy to type it. Qiao Wan almost dies and in her mind-death place she meets her dad.

Spoiler about her dad.

Turns out Qiao Wan's father is one of the demon army general's who went missing ages ago. He defected and created the Buping sect casually. Wanted to live life lowkey. Found Qiao Wan's wandering modern soul and used his own flesh and blood to make a body for her, so she's his biological 'daughter' kind of. Before he died, he sealed like a part of his soul into her spiritual consciousness. Which explains a lot.

Anyway, Qiao Wan gets super strong with the experience from her father talking to her and uses sword manual to kill her uncle's army. They freak. Qiao Wan reveals that she's also actually Lu Cixian!! People freak. Then Qiao Wan is like super injured from the sword manual backlash eeps.

War arc: This confused me because I thought this was the extra but nah. Qiao Wan has amnesia and wakes up, thinking she's just transmigrated into this world, and there's a second demon war happening. She introduces modern weapons but like spirit powerifies it to compensate for the lack of technological advancement, which helps the war a lot. Unfortunately, cultivators are loosing really badly.

In the end, the demon emperor gets resurrected. Her dream mentor guy Miaofa kills the emperor and Qiao Wan has to kill him because Miaofa is basically the buddha reincarnated. Which is good because he's super powerful but its bad because he's super powerful and can't control himself from entering his buddha state and killing everyone. Basically, he can see the good and bad karma of everyone and his inner buddha self is like KILLLLL everything especially cultivators who steal Qi from heaven and are therefore also evil!!!! So Qiao Wan kills him.

Unfortunately, a beast tide shows up when the army is like about to perish and Qiao Wan sacrifices herself to kill them.

So cultivators win but Qiao Wan and Miaofa are dead. THIS IS WHY I WANTED THERE TO BE A TRAGEDY TAG!

Extras: So this is where I am now <3 turns out Miaofa and Qiaowan's soul scattered and can be found but it takes years. Except they can't find Qiaowan's soul. BUT they realise she's in the modern world and they cross worlds to get her!!! After her sacrifice, she woke back up as a college student like wtf!!! Except she's a college student who's super powerful, super fast, super etc!!

Extras are now just Qiaowan ferrying between the modern world and trying to graduate and the cultivation world where she's like a level 10000 idol to everyone for saving them.

That was all the arcs. I skipped a lot of stuff that is important, like the side characters and their development and tried to mainly focus on Qiaowen.

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I'll also drop a spoiler here about who the ML is.

Spoiler

It is technically Miaofa but there's basically no like actually getting together until the extras.

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I'll drop a spoiler about their romance timeline. This spoiler is short, dw.

Spoiler

He rejects her because he's technically like the Buddha and strongest cultivator, but in the extras after they f*ck!

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I'm trying to think about what else is mentioned.

Well, just read the tags. Definitely put more emphasis on cross dressing which I LOVEEEE some Mulan stuff soooo fun and emphasis on BAMF MC. I usually read only romance but this was sooo good you don't even notice. I even waded through MTL for this.

Hmm... running jokes through the novel I liked was Qiao Wan's accidental picking up of erotica and other characters finding out. Like someone is like I'll tell you gossip about famous cultivator they're trying to find if you buy one of my products! She's like urgh and takes a product randomly and hears important plot information. And then finds out that she accidentally bought erotica of that cultivator and then later that cultivator finds out.

This was a really long review lol but I really liked this novel ! <<less
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dayana11412
New dayana11412 rated it
April 26, 2024
Status: c130
Surprising because its another strong female lead story. The first 100 chapters were interesting but the romance is really extremely slow. I skipped to the end to try to find the male lead and she actually meets him eaely on but not even a kiss for 100 chapters. The slow burn is a bit painful
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just.checking
just.checking rated it
October 29, 2023
Status: c33
I don't usually write reviews but for how lowkey this is, this is a really good novel. Instead of relying on others our MC, focuses on herself and self improvement. She doesn't care what others think about her but she is completely focused on getting stronger and to become self reliant. Her interactions with other characters are also interesting and the pain, suffering, and bad social circumstances are intriguing to watch unfold.

I am writing this review with hopes that it becomes more popular and *fingers crossed* makes the translator release... more>> chapters more frequently. This novel is definitely worth reading if you like the xianxia trope and like self sufficent characters who don't get everything completely handed to them from the plot. <<less
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ChocoMTL
ChocoMTL rated it
October 6, 2023
Status: c106
Overall, I enjoyed reading this novel (around 100 chapters [still haven’t finished reading the whole novel])

P.S. This novel would be a disappointment if you were looking for romance

MC has a strong and independent character which would make the reader want to cheer for her.

There were some parts which I found unpleasant to read

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It was ridiculous how MC was driven to a corner at times

Once, when she left the sect, how many elders wanted her dead (imprisoned) just because she was possessed (pure blooded demon) even though one of the original male leads is a pure blooded demon and was accepted despite that just because the original female lead brought him

A second time when she released the seal on her magi/magic/demonic qi in order to save everyone and had to recover alone in order not to get possessed but that was ruined because the original female lead and the phoenix original male lead came to see her. When the phoenix saw her real face which was similar to the original female lead, he immediately wanted to kill her and called her fake even though he already knows that she left the sect and cut ties with her master so she basically has nothing to do with the original female lead anymore! Anyway, seeing the original female lead along with the phoenix trying to kill her, MC ended up getting possessed again and in the end had to leave right away (and no one blamed these 2 for entering her room while she was recovering)

Of course, in both times, there were people on her side but hey, she had to leave in the end.

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Spoiler

This is personal, there wasn’t much Romance

The main focus is on how MC wants to cultivate and save/help people and her character development as she meets people and get acquainted with them along the way.

as I was looking for some dark romance (kidnapping, confinement, escaping, r*pe...), I couldn’t appreciate it 100%...

There are many potential male leads... but they all don’t seem to have romantic feelings for her (except for the original male lead who is MC’s ex-boyfriend) and MC isn’t interested in romance at all, she is only interested in cultivation, getting stronger and upholding justice.

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D_darkness
D_darkness rated it
October 7, 2023
Status: Completed
Overall was good but the ending wasn't satisfying. It felt a bit rash especially romance between MC and ML.
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in extra, MC was suspicious drug/plotting by nonexistent monsters (?) out of nowhere and sleeping with ML then there no more details

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another point that upset me the most is, from the beginning to the end of story MC always been abused (to the point I wondered why wasn't she blackened yet) and there no one truly there for her
Spoiler

When she cultivated to golden core there are no one celebrates with her, she ended up drink alone on rooftops talking to herself

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A-Zedel-Zong
A-Zedel-Zong rated it
November 6, 2023
Status: Completed
Oh way okay. This novel is superb. While finishing the 300+ chapters, the only ‘flaw’ which actually doesn’t really matter, is the lack of actual romance. There are multiple love interests, such as OG ML and a dragon man. She does have a ml, but it is near the end, I won’t spoil. Regardless our MC here has a

a great character growth. She is devoid of emotion, cold but ultimately, hurt due to the many instances in which people push her into a corner. Though I will admit this novel... more>> had my heart in motion reading it. One certain scene
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when she leaves the sect, and kneals in front of the master, destroying her cultivation

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was the cherry on top. What a heart warming experience. Despite this “coldness” and ‘ruthlessness’ that she shows, she also feels like a person. She is not completely stoic, she feels emotionally isolated even though she knows important information about the OG novel, she still has lingering feelings for all, despite denying it.

From the beginning to the end, our MC constantly is put through hardships, though unlike other reviewers saying this is a con, I find it actually a good plot point. As despite this, she grows and matures into a stronger person, which as it is a cultivation novel only makes sense. <<less
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twilight-sky
twilight-sky rated it
January 27, 2024
Status: c102
It was great for the past 100 chapters. Then it was like a huge chunk of the story went missing. I'm not sure if this is the case or not, but after chapter 102 none of it made any sense.

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Spoiler

After trying to get Cen Qingyou back and failing, people approached the FL and offered to help her IF she did them a favor. Suddenly, it switches it a scene where the FL is speaking to all these people including ones from her past, but there was no indication of a time skip. After that, it goes back to the time where FL was previously and gives the impression that she might be trapped in an illusion within her own head and her body is being controlled by darkness. However, none of this is addressed. To my knowledge Cen Qingyou never appears again, and all of a sudden she's hitting on the ML and running away from him when he was trying to help her get rid of the dark energy.

Plus, there is a part where a woman feels up the FL's male clone and the FL doesn't resist thinking she wished she had stuff other girls had. That really threw me off. The girl is goofy but she isn't s*upid. It was explained even before she regained her memories of her previous life, that she was exposed to inappropriate things at a young age. This may be mistranslation becuase it was on MTL, (I went to check chapter 124 and so on to see if it was an illusion), but it wasn't to the point where I couldnt understand what was happening.

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This hasn't happened before and I'm not sure if the translation team would make this type of mistake, so if the novel really is like this then I'm disappointed I wasted time reading it. <<less
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wereturtle
wereturtle rated it
January 2, 2024
Status: c230
Pretty great. The MC is very strong, determined and truly harsh on herself. A lot of funny moments. What I don't like is the fact that is the fact that it started out as not-a-revenge-fantasy/p*rn and then turned towards that. It's always worse when they give you hope.

? Contrary to other reviews I don't see the MC as unfeeling? She's also yearning for romance. A lot of the humor comes from her straight face and muscles but girlish inclinations. She also spends a lot of time thinking about her crushes.... more>> I don't mean it as a bad thing. Just saying she's pretty romantic and there is foreshadowing. I just didn't like who the ML is lol.

So I dropped it for personal pet peeves. It's still a 4 out of 5. <<less
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Eeria
Eeria rated it
January 20, 2024
Status: Completed
Its a 3.5

Story is packed with action and events as well as some funny moments but is really thin in romance. There is also this tendency to go towards reverse harem setting which is not well developed. There are romantic thoughts but romantic developments are bare for the FL or at least not well expressed.
FL is hard working but also quite goofy.
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