It was getting annoying after chapter 60. It seems like the author was just dragging the story.

I didnt mind the FL and ML's weird interaction. They are actually cute but seems insidious. I know they both know that they are not real siblings and just hasn't confronted one another. They act like siblings but newly married. Its creepy and weird when FL only wants brotherly love, yet ML is thinking otherwise. FL acts tough and all but suddenly gets dumb when ML is involved.

Also, YMQ was just a pain in the head yet they still just let her be. When they could've just solved her right then and there. As I said. Author was dragging the novel. It puts me off that I have to put a review. I stopped at chapter 76. 🤷🏻‍♀️

premonitory dreams belivable but what made the story weird for me was that the FL was 25 when she transmigrated into a 10 year old body, she schemed just fine so she wouldnt die just as she got there but all along she was like 10 years old older than ML and tho I get that she didnt want the brother-sister relationship get awkward and stuff she didnt refrain from siting on his lap and Kissing him and stuff even tho she knew he was thirstyyy for her, my problem with this is not her but how others perceeve her as a good-rebelious-but-holly-saint, like is that what the good fate the budists from the future bought?? And how come the protagonist was such a wreck?? I mean I didnt tought she was such a Bad person, I mean she is, she kills everybody and all but the thing about how she was a jinx turned her into a victim at least to some extent, like she tought she was kidnapped from her Beautyfull destiny, anybody would do something similar unless they got stockolm right?? The shengs where like yeah we robed you but it wasnt out fault so wait till we feel like it to take you to your real family.

At last The most awkward for me was the before jiji? thing like big brother was giving her all the sings, she is playing s*upid cuz they ARE brothers and still she gets groped on daily basis at 14 by a 20 something gardian, i mean grandma!!!, if it was a modern drama it would be more like yeah they are brothers, doesnt matter if they are REALLYYY close, but it is an ancient time novel!!, like grandma get a grip, he is grabing her ass to your face! Besides it was OMG so grafic that I don't understand how she didnt notice...

Finally, what happened to the brother from the future? I would like to think he isnt her brother and that is why her mother asked for her heart and that he somehow got into the book too??

- That MC does not have awareness between male and female. Literally. Perhaps the MC is just low of EQ. Or she was also still a child before she transmigrated. But... after both characters are in open relationship, the MC became provocative and seductive.

- 14-years-old but still clingy and touchy with the 20-years-old ML. Why the grandmother didn't admonish them? Hm? When she realized, yo too late.

- After transmigrated, MC is fast-adapted to the new life.

- Reading comments, yo where is Fan Jiao-Jiao? Even the 9th Princess got the epilogue.

The monk at the beginning of the story really infuriated me. The self-righteous behavior really put me off. Even tho he did give FL great luck in the next life why would he choose a novel where she'll encounter so many trials and I wish we saw more of this monk at the end

It was kinda weird reading the FL & ML's sweet moments when they keep referring to each other as little sister-older brother without them realizing they unconsciously love each other as lovers. lots of s*xual tension and that part about the FL getting her period was creepy af.

The antagonist... omg the antagonist... shes like a c*ckroach. She just wont die even if you nuke her and definitely one the most annoying antagonists ive ever read. Tho it is disadvantageous on her part that she was born with bad luck it was stated clearly near the end of the novel that she wouldn't have this luck if she wasnt so evil and greedy therefore I have no sympathy left for her and she deserves her ending.

I hated Lin shi so much Ive never had any expectations to her character since the beginning but she still disappoints me. She isnt the main antagonist but my god every time she's mentioned in a paragraph I would always assume she dug herself another inch deeper into her grave.

Yu Si yu thooo omg im so glad she had her character development and I had to pause reading for about an hour when she tried to drown yu miao qi because I had to s c r e am lmao

In her second life, she was destined to have an extremely good luck and sometimes, she could have a premonition about ML's future and with it, she saved ML's life several times. She also could grow any plants in any seasons, incuding a rare medicinal plant. Too bad author didn't explore this much in this novel because I believe MC could do more with this ability.

In the first few chapters, MC mentioned that she only read the beginning of the novel before she transmigrated into it and didn't know its ending yet. However in other chapters, she was aware of the ending and even made a plan to change it. It's so confusing.