As I said earlier, the story started out really good. However at chapter 55, the story started being messed up. The author started weaving up messy and complicated entanglements of the MC's life. Those messy entanglements were also fast-paced, not narrated gradually, and piled up there in a haphazard manner. Added with the low-quality translation, I had difficulty understanding it. It's like the author wants to convey a complictaed past. However, she doesn't know how to write it. She doesn't know how to bring up those elements that can slowly and gradually bring up the MC's past; to reveal those hidden conncetions behind the picture. She brought up those events in manner that can't be understood easily since it was haphazardly done. It's like you know the solution to an Engineering problem but the thing is, you don't know how to start explaining it towrds someone since there are factors that must be considered and certain rules and exceptions that must be followed. Therefore, you just started explaining in a half-hearted manner, not following the chronological order.

In this case, the person can just use an empirical formula. But unfortunately, that doesn't exist. In the absence of empirical formula, the person can explore a simpler and less complicated solution that will reach the same results or answer. That way, it can be understood. However, the author didn't do that. She didn't make a draft or a plan on how to better narrate those messy entanglements starting at chapter 55.

Moreover, the ending was also rushed up as if the author herself wants to get out of this mess she made and just wrap it up completely. After narrating those complicated connections in a fast-paced manner making you unable to keep up, she just ended it hurriedly. There are also plot holes like - I didn't know what happened to the remnants of Sozeur and that unnamed Incubus demon (they are a pair, unexpectedly). It was just mentioned that Evans took them away. There is no disclosure for these extra characters at all.

I was also expecting a major confrontation between Angels and Demons. However, it was just a battle that came up because of that sore loser named Luo Lin (I also don't know what happened to this bastard.) But that's fine. If and only if the translation quality was better and the author wrote those entanglements in a better and organized manner, the story will be much better.

Lastly, the Extras - I was expecting that the author will patch up the plot holes but it's just an Alternative Universe story for Han Tian (ML) and Qiao Xi (MC) and a single first person POV for Evans. I would like to know what happened to our beloved characters after the conflict was resolved - like what are the opinions of the respective realms.