Steel, Guns, and the Industrial Party in Another World

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Magical beasts trample, dragons roar, wizards curse, and the dazzling light of magic illuminates the beacon of knowledge!

Emperor of Gabella: The Imperial Legion is invincible on land.

Orc Chieftain: Each of our tribal warriors is worth ten of any other.

Elven King of the Emerald Realm: Our forest rangers never miss their mark.

President of the Horn Bay Alliance: The Alliance fleet reigns supreme over the seas.

A Mysterious Organization: The prophesied era will eventually arrive.

Paul Grayman: I’m not singling anyone out, but everyone here is tr*sh.

Embark on a journey with firearms and cannons, crushing the low-magic planes…

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SGIPAW
Steel, Guns and the Industrial Party Across the World
钢铁,枪炮与穿越异界的工业党
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Recommendations
Release that Witch (2)
Black Corporation: Joseon (1)
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Latest Release

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04/26/24 Etude Translations c222
04/25/24 Etude Translations c221
04/24/24 Etude Translations c220
04/23/24 Etude Translations c219
04/22/24 Etude Translations c218 part3
04/21/24 Etude Translations c217 part2
04/20/24 Etude Translations c216
04/19/24 Etude Translations c215
04/18/24 Etude Translations c214
04/17/24 Etude Translations c213
04/16/24 Etude Translations c212
04/15/24 Etude Translations c211
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04/15/24 Etude Translations c209
04/12/24 Etude Translations c208
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Review
6 Reviews


Drakonus_
New Drakonus_
Apr 24, 2024
Status: c219
I don't know why this is so lowly rated. Most of the issues that I'm assuming make people rate it so low, is probably about the MC's political biases. Thing is, those political views are barely mentioned, and only mentioned in the very first few chapters. I expected this to be really bad considering the ratings, but it's just not.

If you actually read this novel properly, this novel is more like a militaristic Release That Witch, but without the infertile superpowered witches, and more like actual witches and wizards. It's... more>> not even bad writing, so the 3.6 rating of this makes no sense. I can at least rate this a 4/5, but since I've enjoyed it a lot more than I expected, I'll give it a 4.5/5. <<less
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jplauy
jplauy
Jan 13, 2024
Status: c83
A very well writed written and translated story. It remember the other famous novel of "Hunt the wich", we have kingdom building, guns, Campos, conquest, New tech's develop. The only thing that I don't like is some marxist/comunist/mao ideology bulsh*t but is not so much to get on your nerve if you don't added to that ideology.
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roriconknight
roriconknigh
Dec 27, 2023
Status: c100
This novel reeks of "modern tech always win against unenlightened medieval masses." Our MC reincarnated as an heir to an exiled Count in remote wilderness to the far north of the kingdom. His first order of business was to invent muskets and reorganize the army with modern terminology. He also introduced paper making to cover his military expansion - common business recipe in reincarnation field. Needless to say the story is your usual reincarnation on a low fantasy setting - they just introduced there was a:

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Arcane Society (Secret Spell Society?) that basically a collection of stray magicians.

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The author does seem to only have superificial knowledge at many stuff he touched upon and this is where immersion will fall apart for some. They could do a bit more digging, but "eh, good enough" feels strong.

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My first gripe were the way the technologies being introduced. Musket for better or worse, was invented far after cannon and have hand cannon and arquebus as preliminary inventions. It is far difficult to create a smaller barrel back then due to the lack of know-how on steel making back in the middle ages - this is why damascus steel was very famous. The first cannon were made out of bronze - and author acknowledged it after MC making his first musket - for it easier to handle and withstood gunpowder's punch much better than a pig iron product.

From doctrinal perspective, musket at best is a direct replacement for crossbows. Archers require a dedicated training for most of their life to strengthen their arm muscles. The training-intensive archery tend to be unpopular as most of the populance back then are busy with farm works. Crossbows on the other hand despite being a much more complicated machinery, it allows minimal training as long as its the light version or we put a c*cking device into play. It may reload much slower, but once reloaded all you need to do is to aim and pull the trigger. Musket make life much easier by dropping the often cumbersone device and lighter on the logistics despite their susceptibility to moisture.

If you compare this novel to something like Release That Witch, you will realize that Roland invent muzzle-loaded smoothbore cannon before dabbling firearm. Additionally, he literally used Anna as precision tools to aid in firearm productions.

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Despite its fault, it offers some fresh stuff that often missed in other army building novel: morale. The author give MC his first failure by having his army comically charged and subsequently routed despite all of the discipline training.

It is also a fine detail that MC did not just chug his knowledge at his subordinates. He invited multitude of talents from across the continent to aid in realizing his vague ideas. It is something that other "inventor" novel always skip over. It would be a great hurdle for a single leader to micromanage every single research, construction, and administration. It is a great way to show that our MC is a human.

Characterization is totally bland, so far we have 2 kind of character: 1) the important ones; 2) yes, men. The yes men are people that acknowledge saying they are genius or shocked in realization as they get their rear beaten by the important characters. It would be much more enticing if each and every character have their own agendas and quirks.

Writing can be polished for a bit, for some reasons the Princess always came up a few chapters after MC perspective even though she contribute little to MC's story. Sure the chaos in the royal capital do increase demand for a certain resource but the effect was glossed over on MC side - business as usual. Additional context would be best to be set on extra chapters or on its own "section" within the volume instead of going back and forth for no good reason.

The pace, what pace? I'm at lost at how fast they do stuff in 3-4 months. Events often happen too quickly or too slow messing up the sense of distance and time. I do wonder if folks magically have better stamina after 1 month of training and protein-laden foods.

Translation is good and I mean it.

All in all, its an OK time waster but don't expect much. <<less
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ce05
ce05
Feb 22, 2024
Status: c32
its not a bad story per se, the problem with it is the simplicity, it feels like I am clicking trough a civilization game.

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the MC arrives in the new world and just says, ok, make gunpowder weapons. No regard is given to where the resources come from, where the money comes from or anything else. There are so much nitty gritty details to make a musket work, that are simply disregarded in the novel. It simply works.

similar with canons

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so what you are left with is just a senseless 'clicking trough a techtree', MC says: 'make gunpowder' -> 'gunpowder aquired', 'make canons' -> canons aquired. Etc. No build up of a real industry, no timeframe of hard work until you reach your goal, no build up of skillpools and no regards for a monetary budgeting etc.

all in all, I am reluctant to call this a kingdom building novel and more a 'tech aquired' simulator <<less
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azuron
azuron
Feb 19, 2024
Status: c22
This is a breath of fresh air compared to tr*sh cookie cutter OP MC novels. The world building, character progression and plot are truly laudable, and I didn't expect such a high quality of writing from a chinese web novel. The MC grows through hardships and setbacks and he isn't an all knowing Gary Stu. The side characters seem very real and not like one dimensional caricatures. Overall, a very very strong start and immense potential. Will recommend.
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janaby
janaby
Dec 31, 2023
Status: c57
Although I do have some gripes with it here and there, the pace of the novel is something I really vibe with, considering the quality of other Chinese novels of the same genre.

I have no qualms with the world's setting overall, and although the novel incorporates incredibly cliché tropes in every medieval fantasy novel you'd see out there—it isn't shoehorned in nor is it done in an overly blatant way; i.e the Church, magic, & non-human characters.

In terms of the technological aspect of the novel, although most things are just... more>> barely touched up upon, they still contain some semblance of realism, enough to be an enjoyable read without being too much of a slog like a wall of text.

I have more to say about it but the words are stuck behind my head, so this'll make do for now. <<less
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