This is an interesting fanfic.

The prose (not the translation) its kinda odd, it doesn't capture that mystical whimsy of the og. Also, this story doesn't have any distinct characterization. Like, the main character is the main character and that is it. The same with the side characters. The plot is interesting enough, but its poorly written; it's a mystery in that there isn't enough information, not that it's possible to figure it out by yourself. In combination of poor characterization things just seem to happen? Like spontaneously. There is no... more>> flow.

Tbh, I'm a bit confused by the tags, there is a system for the mc's golden finger, but its not listed. I am concerned about the world hopping tag, I never seen it done well. <<less

This is one of the worst translation sites on novelupdates. Not the translation, but the literal site... the whole sites in a mess, and there is also no next chapter button, and you can't change by url...

As for the actual story, the mystery plot was a bit interesting, as the world is different from the original Harry potter world, but everything else was mid. Especially the characterization. The main plot was okay, but I lost all hope for the small events in between. As we already got a Chinese type... more>> antagonist cliche if Malfoy and him being the hero in shining armor defending himself and Hermoine.

I also never like fanfics when they meet the main cast within the first few chaos, can't they have some buildup or make their own story that intertwines into the story for God's sake? <<less