Sage Monarch

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Yang Qi was the son of the patriarch of a wealthy family from a small town.

Believing himself to be in love, he stole a pill for his lover, only to have the girl betray him, by taking the pill and leaving him behind.

Caught, his dantian was crippled and left to die under the lightning.

This lightning helped him to recover his lost martial arts and also helped him gain a new, divine-like cultivation technique.

After this second chance, he gains more power as he sought revenge and also to find about his missing mother….

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Sage Emperor
Sheng Wang
圣王
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erorr404
New erorr404 rated it
July 21, 2019
Status: c260
This novel almost an avrage xuanhuan cultivation novel, it has all the tropes and generic writeng ie. MC is OP and easily kills opponents x amount of reals above him, one dimensional female characters, MC isunreasnably ruthless but somehow still moraly superior to everbody else and so on.

My bigest problem with this novel is the casual use of discrminating and dehumenasing language. I dont understand the need to bulid such a distorted world view, if you want to establish the MC as moraly superior and justify the exesive use of... more>> vilence you can do it without relying xenophobic sentaments and the dehumanisation of the ¨out group¨ ie those MC percives as opponents. <<less
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Drag0n
New Drag0n rated it
July 5, 2019
Status: v1c213
Akin to what others stated, I began reading and sponsoring this work on account of Deathblade translating it. AWE, ISSTH and others were all incredible reads. I don’t know why he would choose to adopt Sage Monarch, however.

You can expect everything to fall into the MC’s lap in this novel. He’s not smart, crafty, savage, funny or other beneficial trait that would make him superior to everyone else. If you ever read Renegade Immortal and follow Wang Lin’s journey, you’ll understand how inept, lucky and unworthy of his domination Yang... more>> Qi is by comparison. The author paints him to be brilliant, but he’s really just the best by nature because he is the MC and any schemes are paltry. There is no jubilation to accompany any progress in his cultivation because it doesn’t feel earned. Yang Qi has the overpowered nature of Yun Che from ATG paired with Lin Ming’s sometimes dry personality without any of the intelligence, humor or plotting abilities of an Er Gen character.

I have tried but struggle to read this because it actually fulfills all the mind-numbing tropes you could expect from this genre. Revenge motives, super-powerful and borderline invincible assets, sect conflict, so on.

Maybe Deathblade knows something I don’t and it will become good in 600 chapters, but as of right now, it is nothing to write home about.. <<less
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Jeebus
Jeebus rated it
April 28, 2019
Status: c94
I started reading Sage Monarch because Deathblade is the translator. He did a great job with A Will Eternal, so I figured I'd give this novel a chance. Deathblade's translation of Sage Monarch is a cut above most other translations. You can't polish a turd, though, and the source material really stinks.

There are a host of issues with this novel. The primary problem is that the author does too much telling and too little showing. Rather than the author putting us in the middle of the action, far too often,... more>> we are just told what happened. The majority of it reads more like an encyclopedia than a novel.

Another gripe is that there's no delayed gratification. The MC is both invincible and unimaginable lucky. Other than what happens to him in the first two chapters, he experiences no setbacks. If he needs something, he already has it, knows someone else that has what he needs, or stumbles upon it in the following chapter. With only one exception, he immediately resolves any grudges, sometimes even in the same chapter that the grudge began. Because of this, the novel never builds tension. It's always just kind of flat. The author just tells you that the MC is awesome as he does random things that somehow increase his cultivation.

To top it off, because he practices an insanely powerful cultivation technique, he can fight people many cultivation levels above him. There's no reason to have cultivation levels at all if the MC can just kill anyone, regardless of their cultivation level, with little-to-no effort.

My final issue with the novel is that the MC is just unlikeable. His character is flat. His motives are vague. Instead of taking principled actions that propel him towards a goal, his actions are largely dictated by random, external circumstances. The result is that there's not much of a story or character development. You're just told the MC did random stuff that doesn't really matter in the greater context of the narrative.

TL;DR: The writing style is so poor that it feels like the author didn't even try. There's hardly any action; it's all just expository narrative or dialog. Further, the author does nothing to build any tension or action. The end result is that the whole novel is just a boring powertrip.

Worst of all, the MC is a Mary Sue. The author does little to endear any character to the reader, including the MC. The MC doesn't really seem to have any goals. The MC is so OP that cultivation levels are irrelevant to him. Between his godly cultivation technique and his uncanny ability to just find everything he needs immediately, he encounters no bottlenecks or cultivation issues.

All of these issues culminate in a boring novel where you don't care about anything or anyone. <<less
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LeapTallNovels
LeapTallNovels rated it
April 27, 2019
Status: c11
I know that 11 chapters in this kind of stories is not considered even finished the prologue, but I couldn't bare reading further, yet that doesn't really matter, because the author managed to put every Xuanhuan cliche you can think of in those first few chapters. However, I'm not even going to talk about them, there is really no need, they are just the tip of the iceberg.

So, let's review "the plot"
Our MC, Yang Qi, is the 3rd son of the leader of the pretty much most powerful and... more>> wealty clan in their city, he's recognised as a promising individual and his father cherishes him greatly, so the obvious action he takes is to try and... escape. Why, you may ask? Well, because of a girl who told him to steal one of those great-dragon-great-power-great-giving-great pills, which is in the possession of the biggest dude around and of course he not only agrees, but also manages to do it. How? Well, take a look at that quote:
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"Yang Qi was very well aware of what a Latent Dragon Pill could do. It was a first-class medicinal pill that was supposedly refined from the blood of dragons. After consuming it, one's blood would gain traces of dragon power, which would increase both physical strength and lifespan.

The city magistrate had originally possessed two. One of them he had used to break into the Master of Energy level, and the other he had kept locked up in a private chamber. Yang Qi had somehow bribed the guards to gain access to the chamber, stolen the pill, and then given it to Yun Hailan. Of course, his attempt to win her over was a complete failure, as she betrayed him."

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As you can see, his plan was a masterpiece, so obviously it worked out. Well, not really, his great love betrays him, takes the pill and leaves and of course suffers no consequences for doing so, while our MC gets the punishment and all the blame. The guys that find him don't even bother asking where the pill is, they just f**k him up real quick and start looking for payment from his clan like the pill doesn't even exist anymore, even though the girl escaped litteraly 2 seconds before they showed up. Anyway, from then on is the tipical Xuanhuan, he gets a power no one else has, trains in it and surpassess veterans in mere days, gets underestimated, beats 2 guys, surprises everyone, challenges a 3rd guy and starts training. That's where I dropped it.
For people who are into Xuanhuan it may be more than 1, but to the people like me, who are fed up with all that repetitive sh*t (seriously, if I read the word "cultivation" a few more times, I will be the one to transcend into divinity) don't read it. <<less
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Devil_Cry
Devil_Cry rated it
May 4, 2019
Status: c370
I can't understand why Deathblade chose this novel for translation. The previous novels picked by him were too good in quality especially ISSTH. When I saw this novel at Wuxiaworld and saw It is translated by Deathblade, I had thought it will be an amazing novel like previous ones. But all my hopes shattered after reading 50+ chapters. Then again I thought may be after some chapter there will be good plot and character development. So I chose to read Raw chapters as well. I read till 370 chapters and... more>> I can only say one thing : This novel is not for me why? Let me tell my thoughts.

Spoiler

MC is too dumb he reveals his secrets to others like it is nothing. He knows there is danger but he still insists to live there and go there. He doesn't even warn his aunt. In this novel it seems author doesn't like female characters because most of the women will be killed by stupid MC.

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This novel had potential and author could have developed story in a good way but he didn't.

I am sorry to say but this novel is complete sh**.

I only hope Deathblade will choose a good novel in future like previous ones not like this one. <<less
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DragonSlayer13579
DragonSlayer13579 rated it
April 30, 2019
Status: c400
Don't try this series, it's nothing like A Will Eternal or ISSTH. Even for a generic xuanhuan series, its pretty mediocre.

The story is as generic as it can get, betrayed by his love interest, op cultivation technique, mysterious background, an ridiculous amount of plot armor.

The fights are pretty generic, nothing mind blowing, the MC is broken as fluf with his op cultivation technique he can easily defeat even those 5+ lvls above him (in the same realm). The MC's cultivation technique is the same as the technique that the MC... more>> from Dragon Marked War God has, but it's not with dragons but with elephants.

The MC is dumb as fluf, he gets used and tricked a lot, he doesn't become smarter as he becomes stronger, he only becomes more ruthless and the MC is kind to unsatisfying lvls. For example:

Spoiler

The MC is part of the Celestial Academy, the headmaster of the academy is a piece of shiet. He favors the crown prince (the antagonist, and not because of his talent, like later on he can clearly see that MC is 1000 times more talented than the crown prince, but because he had some relationship with the crown price's mother) , and treats MC like shiet. He send the MC to his death 2 times, and if the MC didn't had the God Imprint (the weird thing in his head) that protects him, the headmaster would have killed him. The elders of the academy are all part of the crown prince faction and attacked/bullied the MC multiple times. And when the MC finally has the chance to take revenge on this sh*tty academy that treated him like shiet, he decides to not do it, and to become the next headmaster of the academy ?like wtf, why would he do something like this, after they treated him like shiet... in the whole academy he only had 1 elder that was on his side (and pls don't get me wrong they weren't that close, like that elder barely helped the MC 1-2 times, but it was nothing major, so it's not like that elder was the reason why he decided to stay at the academy, he even repaid that elder later on), so I can't understand why he would waste the effort on some trashy academy like this, since he is perfectly capable to start his own academy. The MC himself even said that he wants to create his own academy for his family, so for me at least his decision made absolutely no sense.....

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You might doubt me, just a 1 star rating ???for a series that's so popular ? (at the time I write this review, the series is ranked 16th) but trust me my good brothers, this series only is somewhat decent at the beginning, but everything becomes utter garbage after the tournament arc.I think that we can all agree that the only good thing that this series has is that this series is more or less satisfying, like even thou the plot is trash and generic, its at least satisfying. But even this, completely disappears after the tournament arc.

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So the MC fights in the tournament, and gets into the finals, where he fights with that bitch that betrayed him at the beginning of the story, the MC wants to kill her, he fails but still wins the fight. And when he wants to claim his prize for winning the tournament, the Crown Prince randomly appears and nearly kills the MC, the MC can't do shiet and no one besides his sworn brothers help him. And all of this happens in front of all the elder of the academy including the Headmaster. The Crown Prince had clearly broken the rules, and no one does shiet, FFS he nearly killed the MC in front of everyone, The Crown Prince's excuse "Power is above rules, as long as you have power you make the rules". He broke the rules in front of everyone and nearly killed the MC who was the winner of the tournament........ ok, ok I can understand. And what do you think happens fkin later on in the story ???? When the MC is finally strong enough, and does the same thing as the Crown Prince did (the MC killed a couple of elders that bullied him, it was self defence...) , the Headmaster of the academy decides to punish him by sending him in a place in which he should have died, (of course because of his broken and godly plot armor he survives). So when the Crown Princes nearly fkin killed the rightfully winner of the tournament in front of everyone just because he wanted to do so it's ok, but when the MC wants do to the same it's illegal. I call this pure and utter bullshiet. This is how the only good thing that the series had for it died.

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The only good thing left that this series has is a good translator (Deathblade). Also I've read the series till chapter 400 and till that point at least there was no romance.

For me this series was a sh*ttier and less satisfying version of Dragon Marked War God, try this series only if you have absolutely nothing better to do. <<less
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edoc
edoc rated it
March 21, 2018
Status: --
I read this years ago and I loved it, the greatest part is that his family isn't forgotten as the MC works hard to increase their cultivation. In fact the way he does it is something I haven't seen in any other novel and works great.

Be advised, I remember the story having a slow and rather cliché start.
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happyfanatic
happyfanatic rated it
April 26, 2019
Status: --
I started reading this because deathblade was translating and he's translated both I Shall Seal the Heavens and a Will Eternal which I found to be entertaining. (Hey at least the translation is well done) I even forced myself to keep reading for a little while but it never got any better. It's extremely formulaic with no redeeming qualities to make up for that. Privileged young master gets betrayed and "crippled" but not really because he immediately gets struck by super special lightning. What are the chances?! And then... more>> follows the standard trope of special secret trump card which enables him to beat other people at higher cultivation levels etc.

Lots of twirling mustache one dimensional villains etc. <<less
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ZUN
ZUN rated it
May 1, 2019
Status: c96
TL;DR -Terrible generic novel with little to nothing redeemable about it.

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Does the following sound familiar?

... more>> The MC is a cripple/untalented young guy with no personality to them except for being ""righteous" and has a parent or parents with a mysterious background who's origins he needs to uncover?

He receives a ridiculously powerful cultivation technique that allows him to be stronger than anyone else, able to control every element, makes him immune to all poison, allows him to absorb any type of energy AND acts as the plot armour vehicle for him to do anything the story needs?

The entire novel is limbo of him perpetually insulting someone of status only to kill them, thus insulting someone else in a domino like effect?

THATS RIGHT!

You have read this novel before!You have most likely read it 10 to 15 times if you are into this genre.

Its the same boring uninspired garbage written by someone who supposedly never spoke to a living person long enough to figure out how dialogue functions, but when you see what they actually write in their novels you are not surprised normal people are keeping safe distance.

There is nothing interesting about the novel and its generic enough that it makes me wonder why it exists every time I read a paragraph.

The story is uninteresting from a narrative standpoint and a wider perspective, the writer never makes you invested in anything nor does he pique your interests with a fleshed out world.

The writing style is something that would get you kicked out of a writing class and the dialogue just makes me cringe because its always between these onedimensional stereotypical characters that seem like they were programmed NPC's that got half of their lines cut due to file corruption.

Honestly there is nothing redeeming about this novel and as I have read these 90+ chapters out of respect for Deathblade, 80 of them felt like a chore I had to force myself trough.

People at this point say this is something you read when there is nothing else to read because at least its not PMG but at just chapter 90 I can already see plotholes and consistency bursting at the seams to the point where I am not comfortable doing so.

Save yourself the time and do not read this, because chances are that you already have... <<less
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ArgosYesu
ArgosYesu rated it
December 20, 2016
Status: --
There wasn't really anything exceptional about the story. I read up to when his family destroys another family and then got really bored. The use of Elephants as his system of power is... fun? I think. While I could understand its background, I couldn't really get into his training system much. I forgot which chapter this was, so meh.

Also, the tag, Second Chance, was used incorrectly for this novel. Dying and reviving in the same body in the same timeline does not make it a Second Chance novel. Second Chance... more>> is if the MC returns to his old body and is allowed to start his life over from there, AKA, having a Second Chance at his life. <<less
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LeaningMaple
LeaningMaple rated it
May 28, 2019
Status: c152
I respect everyone's opinion, but I can't help but feel like many of the reviews here are just completely unfair. They exaggerate SM's flaws and don't talk about any of its strengths, and rate it 1 star.

Here is a realistic overview of the positives and negatives of this novel. And yes, I don't pull my punches, I criticize it too, but I also explain why I'm quite fond of it:

Positives:

    • The pace of the MC's cultivation is very fast. In fact, at the beginning, it's at practically a breakneck speed. There are 9 levels within major realms, and it's not uncommon to see the MC only take around 5-10 chapters to achieve the next breakthrough. This is great because you have constant satisfaction of seeing the MC become more powerful, coupled with the author's prose describing in an exaggerated faction how powerful the ancient megamammoths are.
    • Constantly seeing the MC slap the faces of enemies, and defeat or kill them. Honestly, it's a bit of a running joke how often random idiots pick a fight with him (see the "negatives" section) but it's satisfying and serves to show how strong the MC has become since his last cultivation breakthrough.
    • Intelligent MC who tries to think ahead and be cautious. Yes, he's intelligent, though not a genius. Much of the narrative deals with his inner planning, because he has to come up with ways to further his cultivation and avoid attracting the wrong kind of attention or reveal his secrets, along with protecting his family and friends from internal and external threats. And the solutions he comes up with are usually decent.
    • Beautiful translation from Deathblade. If nearly any other translator tried to handle a novel like this, which utilizes many fantasy cultivation terms that are defined largely by their context as well as countless entities within a vast continent, it would honestly seem like a blur. But DB does a wonderful job making the prose flow smoothly (always fun to hear about how badass those megamammoths are) and also cleaning up redundant parts of the original Chinese text (part of the economics of meeting word count quotas in web novel writing) and fixing frequent small technical errors on the part of the author.
    • This is just becoming apparent in recent chapters, but he's building FRIENDSHIPS with other side characters. They're not just becoming either his sycophant subordinates or enemies determined to kill him. He even turns enemies to friends. This is always a positive, because it's a breath of fresh air after all the times in cultivation novels (including this one) that some random incident causes a blood fued between the MC and some powerful faction.
    • Solid, above-average writing. It's not perfectly meticulous in every way, but it's far better than many I've seen, balancing its breakneck speed with adequate explanations/rationales for plot developments and visual descriptions of fantasy elements. According to Deathblade, the author Divine Dreamwalker is actually more reputable than Ergen among Chinese readers who've read his various works.
    • For social readers like myself, it benefits from a very active comments section, getting a minimum of 20-30 comments and frequently reaching closer to 60-70. And still going strong; chapter 145 had 71 comments. The full novel has 1600 chapters, so I'm looking forward to seeing it grow in popularity.
Negatives:

    • The power levels are a bit loosely defined. By power levels I don't mean literal power levels, as those are more or less clear, so much as the relative power of various organizations, or the explanations for why certain people don't attack others. Sometimes the author will sort of forget what he said earlier, or he'll qualify it in some way, or in rare cases outright have the MC realize he was mistaken. For example, in chapter 1XX, the villain says: "Yang Qi is back from ***. Now is the perfect opportunity to make a move. The only reason we didn't dare to do anything to the Yang Clan was that he was holed up in ***. If we wiped out his clan when he was away, he would never let the matter drop until he got revenge." But then a few paragraphs later, he says: "Although, our orders were to kill Yang Qi in front of all the other clans of Yanhaven. If we strike fear into their hearts, and show them that we don't even care about ***, then they'll definitely acknowledge allegiance to us." Those two statements don't seem contradictory at first glance, but if their orders are just to kill him in public as an example, why would they be so afraid of his revenge? Thinking about it a bit more, someone readers would probably say, "It's because they expect him to hide himself and increase his cultivation strength, or try to borrow the influence of *** to strike back, which would be inconvenient to them." But since it's not clearly spelled out, it's left the readers' imagination. In another case, it's not clear why the Sage Ancestor Dynasty would acknowledge and send congratulatory gifts to a place that had rebelled against them implicitly, but readers could guess that it's because they are so politically weak they're currying favor. And in another case, a certain person was unable to leave their current location due to "enemies" yet at the same time were able to act as a deterrent to a different (weaker) enemy faction, and that was never fully explained (yet--we still don't know who those "enemies" are). But still, it's not like it's impossible to come up with an explanation, it's just too much to expect that of readers. So anyway, if you like to nitpick, you'll probably notice some pseudo-plot holes.
    • The fights are just the MC smashing enemies with his overwhelming energy arts and/or devouring their cultivation bases. No real strategic elements at all, beyond the interaction of different attributes of arts like godly versus evil. And he's practically guaranteed to achieve a breakthrough in every mildly challenging fight, because that's how his "godmammoth" cultivation technique works. Well, the fights are admittedly still fun to read/skim, because the author utilizes vivid imagery.
    • The apparent biggest one: Many Western readers of cultivation novels have fairly different tastes from mainstream Chinese readers of cultivation novels. In particular, they love calm schemers. Whereas the MC here is the orthodox type, a hotblooded youth who pursues power constantly, which is probably easy to identify with for younger Chinese readers. He's the type of person who, before he kills an enemy, will reveal one of his big secrets just to see the look of despair on the villain's face. And whenever this happens, the commenters on WuxiaWorld basically FLIP out and call him an idiot, because they are paranoid that someone will overhear it! Even though it's been established that his energy arts let him monitor the surroundings. It would almost be funny, if it wasn't also kind of sad... that this trope of having someone "overhear the MC's secret" and then run away to tell a senior is so prevalent, that readers have been traumatized by it. Anyway, the MC is a teenage kid, who will even do things like angrily tell his enemy that he's looking for a chance to kill them covertly later, unlike some other cultivation novel MCs who will act aloof until they suddenly strike like a shark beneath the waves. So yes, many Western readers of cultivation novels obviously HIGHLY prefer the latter type of protagonist. But still, the MC of Sage Monarch is far better than, say, Lin Dong, because he has a sense of wit. He's not the sort of "thug/murderhobo" that people use as a joking description of a cliched cultivation novel MC, either; he honestly tries to NOT make enemies. Though frankly, he still does "stand up for himself" a lot.
    • So far, there have been no emotionally compelling plotlines. It's largely a story of the protagonist adventuring and obtaining strength amid various obstacles and enemies, without any touching plot elements.
    • Cliches. To be completely fair, I actually had to list "cliches" under negatives, but cliches are a staple of the cultivation genre. Yes, it's the same basic start as novels like WDQK and BTTH and Invincible and ATG, where the MC is crippled but finds an OP secret item/cultivation technique and proceeds to rapidly cultivate and slap the faces of scheming fellow clan members. And yes, people constantly arrogantly pick fights with him. And yes, there's a high-handed ex-fiance-like character who he's targeting for revenge. And yes, his mother has a mysterious past and was forced to disappear when he was little. If you really dislike these tropes, don't read this novel! It feels like 90% of the negative reviews here amount to "*gasp* It's a power fantasy that utilizes a lot of cliches!" Well, I can respect that some people legitimately hate that, but the rest of you, just admit it, power fantasies are the reason you read cultivation novels.
Anyway, I highly recommend checking this out. If you love well-translated novels and don't mind orthodox style stories, you're missing out if you skip Sage Monarch. Sorry for the wall of text, by the way, that's just how I roll.
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rdawv
rdawv rated it
March 22, 2016
Status: --
Impressions as of Ch.22.

The first chapter sets up an intriguing premise: a teenage martial cultivator was deceived by a girl, bringing calamity to himself and his family. His cultivation ruined and tied to a tree like a criminal, he was struck by lightning and infusing him with a golden fairy and the essence of unimaginable strength. Vowing revenge against the girl who had betrayed him, the MC found his clan beset by problems internal and external and had to gather his strength to resolve a tightening noose around his immediate... more>> family first.

As for the plot, I have no idea whether it would be a long term goal like “Battle Through The Heavens” or just a stepping stone for the MC to be given super powers for a usual xianxia story. Not too many characters have been developed in the 20 chapters translated thus far, at least there are intriguing hints about an aunt who is just a little older than the MC, and an ambitious mayor/city lord who still bears a grudge against the MC.

The writing is standard, the dialogue is average and the translation is passable but unpolished; hampered by the author’s terms that sound so awkward in English (eg: “Divine Elephant That Suppresses Hell”). There is also a wall of info-dump initially.

What is available thus far is average and from the pace of the story, seems to take a long way to get going. Have to wait for more chapters before recommending it. <<less
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Zores
Zores rated it
June 17, 2019
Status: c340
Well, this history is really bad.

Beginning is somewhat good, there is interesting plots, rules of word established. MC is good temper boy who was betrayed and need to change to become strong.

And if you think, what in such initial plot there will be interesting changes in his character, you are wrong.

He is deus ex manchina, who will never ever get in really bad situation. If there will be someone stronger than him, *BAM* - he will get immediately power up and destroy everything. And there is main problem of this... more>> novel - hero almost don't do nothing to get power. He is very arrogant and never use his mind to resolve problem. If there something, that he can't resolve on this moment, sudden power up help him to kill or retreat. But don't worry, even if he retreat, then next sudden power up, and he will kill people, that threaten him. I'm read ~340 chapters and stop on moment of logical end. There reason, why I'm even don't want read this novel:

Spoiler

Crown prince became very powerful Great Sage. Our hero can't even kill weak Great Sage. He returns to his academy and Principal set him 100 days deadline to begin fight with Crown Prince. MC with his almost godly luck get several very mighty power ups. But no matter that there too short in time.

After 80 days Crown Prince returning, he is even more powerful, than was predicted. And has party of 18! Great Sages, most of them more powerful, than standard Sage. Some of them even from higher plans! MC has only one powerful Great Sage on his side.

So, MC never fight with Great Sage, has lower cultivation level and only one helper. That he will do to win?

NOTHING!

He is really simple became very powerful, say to his Great Sage not to involve and singlehanded kill 18 powerful enemies. Simple kill so many overpowered Sages. He is even don't get any damage! Longest plot with many injustices was resolve with sudden power up. He kills every of his enemy, don't trying to talk and establish friendship with them, only kill everyone. Many of plots were cut with such illogical way. And this was finish of his revenge and many chapters, where tension is built.

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So, if you want short review - can't kill somebody, get sudden power up, can't get somewhat powerful artifact, get even more powerful artifact. So, you are in desperate situation, pff, get sudden power up and kill all enemies.

MC don't get any development, don't do anything, but always became more and more powerful without any logical standpoint. He is very young, only one time was in academy library (it was said in novel, and author forget about it), but he knows everything, that he needs. There sometimes is wrote, that he will need several years for next level - forget, he will get sudden power up in next chapters.

With good beginning Sage Monarch very fast became very simple "kill everything without any logic" novel without really interesting plot development. All problem will be resolve with power, MC will never ever use his mind to do anything creative and unorthodox. <<less
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kaluk1321
kaluk1321 rated it
May 3, 2019
Status: c100
I'm disappointed that deathblade got such a sh*tty novel after years of success translating the better wuxia out there, digging the gems out of the pile of crap that usually is all those chinese webnovels.

I'm not in the mood for writing everything that is wrong with this novel, but one thing that strikes the most is the lack of proper writing in character development and lackluster world building. As people have said villains and allies are ONE and I repeat ONE dimensional characters, they are the DEFINITION of that. If... more>> you ever read in a review the term one dimensional characters and never understood what that is, just read this novel and you'll understand what that is. <<less
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Rockbear
Rockbear rated it
May 15, 2019
Status: c114
I won't go into too much detail but as a previous review said, no matter how good the translator, you can't polish a turd...

I didn't start the novel with high expectations but I did have expectations. Which proved to be a mistake. A few of the many issues are listed below.

1) One dimensional characters

... more>> 2) Below average plot

3) Ridiculous plot armour (the character basically knows everything without having to put any effort to achieve it. He's in a pickle? No problem. His technique has it covered. Whether or not this was introduced in previous chapters. He just HAS and KNOWS the technique.)

4) The main character has no redeemable features.

You just cannot get into the story at all. Don't get me wrong, there's much worse novels out there. But just because there's a bigger and stinkier turd doesn't mean this turd shouldn't get the 1* or 2* it deserves.

Save yourself the misery and give this a pass. So many novels that are far better than this. <<less
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Velast
Velast rated it
April 29, 2019
Status: --
Well I wish DB had not chosen this novel to transtale. He's such a talented individual - his quality is top notch and I believe he can reach a pro level in translations but not with these kind of novels: (

Overall this novel is so so. In my opinion in terms of quality Er Gen's works hold the first place on a pedestal with Tomatoe's works being on the second and as for this story it's nowhere near the third one.
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Milkboost
Milkboost rated it
June 26, 2019
Status: c212
Lots of pointless and repetitive exposition which results into less action and plot progression.
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Ancient_Devil
Ancient_Devil
June 3, 2019
Status: --
What I hate in Chinese cultivation novels:

1: fighting enemies with cultivation a lot more the you.

2: be very young but still stronger and smarter than people millions of years older then you.

3: heals limbs and his whole body easily even when he becomes a lot stronger.

4: Cultivate with a unique technique and become so strong the cultivation levels don't matter (one of my favorite things in novels is when he enters new cultivation realms so my favorite movels Re the ones whose cultivation is the same as everybody alse
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scribbledoutname
scribbledoutname rated it
May 31, 2019
Status: c160
Great story. My only regret is that I didn't start reading it much later, as I'd have more chapters to binge!!

Whether it's story quality, translation speed or translation quality (Deathblade is working on this!), there is literally no way this story is worth one star, and so you can judge for yourself whether the low ratings are accurate or if people are just sulking because this story isn't an Er Gen clone (I wonder which it is?).

Er Gen is Er Gen, and other authors have their own stories to tell.... more>> This happens to be an excellent story about an OP MC without any navel-gazing, so if that's your thing, don't miss it because a subset of Er Gen's fans can't shift gears. I love Er Gen's stuff as much as the next xianxia fan but... come on.

PS: I think it's hilarious that a few people are complaining about the MC becoming OP when seeing an MC stomping assholes and becoming OP is literally the main draw for a lot of xuanhuan readers. OPness only sucks when the story is crafted badly, and that's certainly not the case here.

Each to their own. <<less
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kazzzz
kazzzz rated it
May 17, 2019
Status: --
The first few chapters were remarkable only for their bang on job of making clear that this is super derivative and kinda mindless. It has loads of repetitive dialogue, a massive cheat for the MC, zero world-building and the usual bunch of idiot villains. It also goes from 'i'll hide cuz i'll doom myself otherwise' to the MC beating up people levels over him in 3 chapters.

So yeah, this is a hard drop for me.
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Kurokazin
Kurokazin rated it
May 6, 2019
Status: c107
I'll say this now, the novel (so far) is a solid 3 stars, I gave it an extra star to offset all the Er Gen novel fanboys that were expecting some slapstick-humor power fantasy and gave it a series of 1's and 2's.

I read wuxia novels pretty frequently. Actively reading 5 (including this one) as well as 2-3 on the backburner that I found the synopsis interesting. You can do far, FAR worse than this novel if you're looking for something to fill the gap between the more interesting reads.

One... more>> thing to note is things progress quickly. Unlike a lot of other chinese novels, this one wastes no time powering up the MC. I imagine this is because the "world" he starts in will be rapidly out-stripped by higher tier planes he'll eventually end up in. It's hard to tell at this stage how good the novel will turn out to be, 100 is not much of a sample size when these tend to go on for 2000+ chapters.

So far there have been a few interesting characters, many one-dimensional but there's only so much you can expect from a xianxia-esque novel. I pity the poor author that tries to write unique characteristics for a cast of potentially hundreds of individuals. There's reasonable criticism and then there's just incessant whinging from people more accustomed to japanese media vs chinese media. The grander scale necessitates more generic, one dimensional roles for a cast that's constantly shifting as the MC propels himself into higher levels of existence and leaves his less talented buddies behind.

Otherwise the novel is in a pretty decent state right now. The cultivation levels are easy to follow and understand, the MC doesn't insta-discard his die-hard brothers every 100 chapters, and the world-building isn't nearly as bad as people are trying to make it out to be. We're constantly being reminded and revisiting areas that have been developed in previous chapters.

Honestly, my only gripe about the novel is that the author breezed through the prologue. I would've liked a good 10~ chapters establishing the MC and the Yun chick before sh*t goes fanward. <<less
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dansweb
dansweb rated it
May 31, 2019
Status: c161
Like all the other bad reviews, I started reading this because of the quality of Deathblade's translations and the previous works he has done (ISSTH, etc). The story of Sage Monarch is not like any of those and is relatively nonsensical and at times forced. It reads as a poorly written Martial God Asura. In the first 2 chapters, the girl who tricked him and is meant to be the antagonist hasn't done much of anything wrong. She tricked the MC into thinking she loved him so that he would... more>> steal a pill but other than that the MC was never under any illusion that his stealing the pill wouldn't destroy his clan. So the real villain here is the MC who betrayed his own clan for some random girl. The MC then fixates on her because she tried to destroy his clan (nope that was you).

Spoiler

This has continued for the next 150+ chapters with the MC professing his plans to kill her every time he sees her. The author makes some additional poorly written attempts to make her seem like the villain but once again she is a really passive character and so she still hasn't done any terribly damning acts.

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Other the a weak main plot premise, the fights are more like fan-fiction works or even summaries than descriptions of actual fights. Like many have already said, other than the first 2 chapters, the MC never again experiences any difficult scenario that can't be resolved before the end of 1 or 2 chapters. Also, the story has too many nonsense phrases that are meant to mean something but are just throwaway lines only used once in a fight.

Spoiler

Yun Hailan is apparently has Seagod blood and Dragon blood which somehow makes her like a Dragon in the sea. What does that even mean... Every fight will have some new phrase about how this sword skill is Heaven ravishing or some other some nonsense used in just 1 chapter never to be mentioned ever again. Its like the Sage monarch world has some infinitely large list of slang phrases that every character is keyed into but that they are restricted from ever using them more than once... I'm calling it, Sage monarch world has an urban dictionary.

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In summary, if you enjoy MGA, you could probably partially stomach this because of similar themes and because the translation quality of good. If you want something more dynamic and well thought out, try Monarch of Evernight, Godsfall Chronicles, Mother of learning (this is amazing), World of Cultivation, any Er Gen novel, or any IET novel.

Sorry Deathblade, I know you said it gets good but I couldn't last past ch 160 or so. I tried. <<less
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