I honestly expecting much more from this as I didn't see any review and the last time I read something without review, it was quite good.

I just read for umm 2 or 3 chapters I forgot.. it was... hmm.. boring 🪴

Maybe it's slow paced writing just not fit with my impatient temper. Thought I truly feel like, just imagine this..

... more>> "You are a servant waiting on your master. Suddenly an imperial decree come to summon your master. You become panic cause it was so sudden and abrupt but your master still sit in his comfortable chair while comfortably sipping his tea.

You can't calm down but also can't urging your master as you have low status but your burning gaze keep looking at the seemingly listless master. He doesn't flinched and keep spping on his tea.

1...2...3...4...

Your heart keep counting and finally your master looks like about to stand up. But as the joy shone trough your eyes, your master, the listless bastard took a glance at you, sighed beautifully, and sit down again. Reading his book and sipping the tea.

While you could only scream (inside)."

Well that's just typical case of a certain proverb that I forgot the sentence.

The scene got cut here and there. Like a movie. Maybe seemingly to add a mysterious feeling but instead it make me soooo confused as I have memory skill of Koi fish.

It's not the first time I read a cut-scene writing style. But the way author write as if they are a student college making random notes in the middle of seminar. Utterly incomprehensible except for themselves.

They also add too much description like "... rustling leaves.. bird chirping... sky with a little bit of light.. Amazon forest.." but unlike other common Chinese novel, I can't feel. the environment in this one.

Idk. This review maybe because I'm rushing with my homeworks so I need some speed quick loving-action. But I will try this another time again.. anyway it's not that bad. I'm not a picky reader after all... <<less

There was no effort put into anything, it has the quality of some random fanfiction written by a 12y old.
Either the writer is a young minor and simply didn't care about learning the basics of writing because it's all just for fun, or it's a cash grab trying to get on the zombie train.

All characters are stereotypes, adults behave like young teens, no one has much of a problem with accepting that the world has been filled with zombies overnight, and there are a lot of holes.
The first ones pop up in the initial chapters, then their number rises further and further, the writer obviously had no outline and made no notes to keep her world-building stable.
She wrote whatever she wanted, otherwise I can't understand how anyone can lose track of their own story in the span of only a couple of chapters.

ML and MC know each other for two days and already act like teens in love, including blushing, sudden care for the other, fearing for them, and so on.
ML is an elite soldier. That makes it even more cringe than it would normally be.
One of the side-characters is a walking trope, probably meant to be the comedic relief, but it's done so badly that he isn't just extremely annoying, he would have gotten them all killed if the writer would have wanted to produce anything remotely believable.

The world is black and white, you have the absolute good-guys, and the absolute villains, nothing in between.

You won't find any unique ideas either, it's "inspired" by other zombie novels, sometimes a little too closely for my taste, so close that you can easily say it's straight up stolen.
Like in MC's case, which is identical to an older novel.
Apparently that's not the only part that has been closely replicated/stolen from other novels, if some comments on Chinese sites can be believed.