This story... is impossible to read.

It's as if someone had taken a trivial and boring story, had broken it into many pieces and then had given the task of putting it back together to a child who is still unable to read.
Words placed at random, sentences that have no connection with the previous and subsequent ones, exclamations and dialogues without rhyme or reason: if I didn't know that it is the usual hackneyed story of the protagonist that changes the whole plot of the book and then amazes greatly that the plot has changed, I would not know what the heck I have read in the last ten minutes (and especially why I wasted 10 minutes of my life like this)

Like the other comments said, I went a little cross-eyed reading this. It's definitely a translation issue probably stemming from the author's writing style and how they broke up their story.

Honestly, the plot itself isn't bad. Reads like an experiment pilot scene to see if the prompt would peek interest, but the writing itself is painful to read.

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Spoiler

It's the cliche 'reincarnated MC acts differently therefore the ML/FL falls at their feet in love' plot. Another cake that people would gladly eat but it turned out to be raisin brand with extra brand

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Usually I give stories the benefit of the doubt since people can exaggerate. But this did physically hurt my eyes. Just a little bit. <<less

Well, I didn't expect much from this story since the rating was low but I still felt my brain hurted after reading this. I don't know if it's the problem of the original writing or the translation but it's so hard to make sense some dialogues and narrations in this story. I could still understand the overall story but it's not a pleasant reading experience for me.