This oneshot shoots straight to the heart. It shows the perspective of both the MC and ML. It doesn't have much plot but nevertheless will surely give you the feels and would make you wish it was a series rather than a oneshot.

It's sooooooooo fluffy and cute!

I'm so sad that this was only an oneshot as it is actually an interesting prompt to start writing the story, but then it has it's own merits.

The story itself is not a "story", rather, a poem (?) as it only humbly describe how each characters feels. For those who's searching for a time-passing fluff for you to read, this is the one for you!

It took me a short time to finish reading but the feeling is still there. I'm now tempted to write a book... more>> with a similar prompt! <<less

This story is gentle and sweet,

Putting aside the abrupt insert of the unnecessary "heroine",

It's quite simple, but exudes nostalgic warmth, like a bunch of homemade cookies.

I wish the boy would be able to convey his feelings to his fiancee.

Nooooooooooooo ???

I WANT MOOOOAAAAAARRR

this was so so sooooo pretty, written like poetry.

Definitly worth every second I spent on it.

I hope they could write a series !!

when I read this my heart ache. Really I felt sad at one point. Ugh, why didn't it continue. I wanted to read more. Wanting to know if their relationship deepens more.

I second Ginko Biloba's review this thing is so cute both the leads are awkward but they still act to show what they feel and the translator was right it's really like poetry a beautiful one, it made me want a full 100 chaps so read it!

I love this story so much. It's actually a typical otome game story where FL was just a cannon fodder and ML was a capture target. Although she thought that ML will end up with the heroine someday, FL still treasured every moment with ML as much as she could and also told him that she loved him everyday like a greeting. I hope this story could be longer so MC could know that ML loved her too and she didn't have to worry that the heroine will snatch ML... more>> away someday. <<less

It's a really cute story that gives you a warm feeling mixed with a bit of nostalgia and also a tiny bit of sadness (caused by the end of this gem).

It's certainly worth the time since it was written in such a pretty, and poetic, way.

oh how interesting! I love how it's written kinda poetically and that

Cute but not a lot of plot, just like a summary for a story x'D

Absolutely adorable. Both MC and ML are clumsy and cute I want to squish them. Honestly I want more but this left me feeling fluffy.

3.5/5

It was a pretty good prompt, it would've been nice for it have been written into a novel. Too bad it's really just a one shot.

It was a cute short read nothing much to it really

I misclicked it was supposed to be 3.5