Started as a typical wish fulfilment porm novel but story started to expand to much more and it is well written and immersive.

10/10 would reccomend

Likeable mc

Smart mc

3d supporting charecters

Harem members carry their own weight

No misunderstanding

Op mc

Good world building till now

Surprising good, the MC is smart and cool. The harem is likeable, the s*x part are good, the power of the MC is weir but good there not much of background about the world yet.

Sadly the author put the novel on hiatus as is having writer's block, so better puting this check and wait for the resume. The TL is good and didnt have any problem reading this, so kudo for them.

What would happen if a virg*n knew how to write an erot*c novel well?

This.

The story is basically Japanese zombie apocalypse ero meets Korean ability users. There's a lot of "plot" (if you know what I mean) and it's early on, and there's also some plot that makes it more than just written p*rn.

Again, as I said in the beginning, I am pretty sure that the author is a virg*n. He did well writing s*x scenes (enough for me to pitch a tent numerous times while reading), but you can tell... more>> from the way they are written and from the way female characters act that the author doesn't have a lot of experience with women, or at least doesn't understand them well. Or maybe he denies reality and wrote his pure fantasies.

To me, it's basically a blue pill dude (not that many red pill dudes actually understand women nearly as well as they think they do) writing an okay story.

Anyway, the story is readable. It's definitely better than your average p*rnographic novel here, much better. However, it doesn't overwhelm. The setting, plot, and characters are just okay if we go beyond wish fulfillment. <<less