An Ordinary Night

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Xin Yi and Ke Han had grown up together, but later Xin Yi was indirectly killed by Ke Han. Ke Han liked Xin Yi’s boyfriend, Sheng Fan, and used a secretly filmed video to threaten him into dating him.

* This is a 3-hour story about being reborn and exacting revenge

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一个普通的夜晚
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Drenlith
Drenlith rated it
May 28, 2022
Status: Completed
Protagonist: Xin Yi (gong)
Villain: Ke Han (gong)
Shou: Sheng Fan
An >eye for an eye< revenge story.
The story starts off from Ke Han's point of view with the beginning of the countdown to Xin Yi's 3h long revenge.

Well-written, nice complex atmosphere, detailed scenes, and food for afterthoughts.
Spoiler

Xin Yi was mu*dered on an ordinary night on their way back home from a class reunion meeting by his best friend, Ke Han, who seemingly had snapped under the influence of alcohol coupled with his long-term jealousy over Xin Yi's fortunate life and seemingly perfect relationship, impulsively committed an unredeemable act.
After this unhinged move, Ke Han fully derailed from morality and plotted to steal (NTR) the man whom he begot for the longest time by blackmail (first, the incriminating footage of the manslaughter of Sheng Fan killing his father and afterward, their forced s*xual intimacy).
The picture-perfect relationship of Ke Han was so envious of seems superficial at the end.
The man he loved, Sheng Fan, in the end, still valued himself the most and gave up on giving his deceased lover justice in order to protect his dignity, reputation, and future career. He shamelessly, though begrudgingly, spent his days next to Ke Han until a rebirthed Xin Yi exacted his revenge by seducing Sheng Fan who was reborn with a new identity as their new work colleague, Mo Li.

The first flashback showed the toxic relationship between Ke Han and Sheng Fan: Ke Han, after obtaining Sheng Fan, didn't seem to treasure him too much. He wouldn't give Sheng Fan much face, even in a public setting with work colleagues and people of higher business management.
Ke Han openly displayed his jealousy and controlling habits while Sheng Fan had already shown some shallow signs of cheating by defending Mo Li whom Ke Han belittled in secret.
Under this new identity as Mo Li, Xin Yi gained access to the truth of his death and betrayal of both lover and friend.
The indication of Sheng Fan in the shower while, Xin Yi (Mo Li) was using Sheng Fan's phone to call the entrapped Ke Han to mock him was an obvious sign.

Xin Yi made sure he returned the favor with interest and a poetic style.
Both traitors were left unspared, one tortured with mundane annoyances, horrors, and uncertainty til certain excruciating death of the same style as his own.
The other was left to face legal justice they've been escaping and avoiding, which was initially just manslaughter now was topped off with concealment of another homicide, all within mere hours on an ordinary night.

Though both were unworthy of this effort, I doubt it's something anybody could forgive if they were in Xin Yi's shoes. As inevitable as Xin Yi's unlawful act of revenge was, I hate that he had to be tainted by such sins.
Morally speaking, there are no good guys here.
To vanquish evil, one must become a greater evil.

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kislanyk
kislanyk rated it
May 16, 2022
Status: oneshot
For anyone confused about the ending, since the story is so short that nothing has been properly developed (although the author hinted at things throughout the story).

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Spoiler

Basically, the MC was reborn as another person. He knew that the ML had a habit of writing every little detail of his life in his diaries, and he knew that the password was his own birthday, so while at his boyfriend's apartment (as the new boyfriend, Mo Li), read his journals. This is how he learned that after he was killed, the boyfriend, instead of avenging him, took the cowardly route and got together with the MC's killer.

So once he was reborn, the MC organized the double-revenge against his killer and against his scum boyfriend.

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dday0425
dday0425 rated it
May 18, 2022
Status: oneshot
This is a short revenge story that shows how terrifying the human heart can be.

No one in this story is a good person, including the MC, who has already blackened at this time point.

The author sets the tone really well, making it both horrifying and captivating. However, as a laws-abiding citizen, I kind of feel conflicted about finding satisfaction from this novel. I mean, what the MC did is absolutely illegal, but it's satisfying as f*ck. That garbage Ke Han and Sheng Fan deserved this punishment (maybe even more).

Nonetheless, it's... more>> nice that the MC wasn't blinded by revenge and went overboard with handling Sheng Fan's case or turned into a ruthless killing machine. Overall, I rate this novel 4.5/5 stars since this kind of dark narrative is quite novel to me, and I find it intriguing (-0.5 because I feel like the author could push harder during the climax). <<less
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starryskies
starryskies rated it
May 17, 2022
Status: Completed
The story starts with a man called Ke Han waking up and realizing he's been kidnapped. He immediately tries to escape. But the farther he gets, the more it seems that his kidnapper is closely connected to a certain someone in his past, or he could even be that person. But how is that possible when that person is dead? As the story unfolds, we see the wrongs Ke Han has committed and how the present scenario mirrors the past as Ke Han falls for the same fate he once... more>> consigned his best friend to.

This is purely about revenge so don't expect any romance. If the story feels difficult to understand, I highly recommend reading the spoiler from kislanyk's review that explains things easily and concisely. <<less
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Peli
Peli
June 26, 2022
Status: c1
Such a short one but very impactful. It was complete with no open endings for me. Funny how all throughout the read, I kept thinking " I would probably do the same".
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