An Exile Amid Humanity

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Exile No. 239: thirty-something, male omega, first degree felon. One day, he comes home to find the alpha girl Yasha sleeping in his bed.

The unwholesome love story of a bashful tyrant girl and a listless young man.

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An Exile Among Humanity
Ren Jian Liu Fang Zhe
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cyyanmk
cyyanmk
October 23, 2021
Status: c18
On JJWXC, alongside the relationship categories of 纯爱 (BL), 百合 (GL), and 言情 (m/f), you'll see a fourth category of 女尊. The category also goes by GB (standing for girl x boy, as opposed to BG standing for boy x girl), "the fourth love", and other names, but the general idea is that it's f/m where the girl tops the boy, whether through pegging, omegaverse, or some other means.

This book, in my humble and extremely biased opinion, is the absolute best work of GB out there. There's nothing else like... more>> it. It's twisty and twisted and incredibly compelling, going to extremely dark places while retaining a deep humaneness in its outlook. To say anything more would risk spoiling the experience.

Definitely check the content tags if you have triggers. But this is one of my favorite webnovels ever. <<less
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Pahpie
Pahpie rated it
April 29, 2022
Status: c3
Okay, I don't know what people like about this but if you're like me, you'll probably puke because of it. I think I've gone as far as chapter 3. I can't go further.

what I was expecting;

I was expecting to see a female alpha. Which means she has female parts and acts like a girl but a bit tough and dominant. While the omega has a bit of a weak side but doesn't stand up for oppression. I was expecting to see emotions blossom. Not just s*xual oppression for the... more>> omega.

what I got.

so this book is like bl but with a big fat arse pe*ophilic plot point. The most disturbing thing is that there is a 15 plus age difference between the two and the younger one is 15 while the older one is 30- something. Speak of a predator trying to play a victim. Label him an omega then it becomes okay? It's the same as saying that a woman has the right to go onto a 15 year old boy simply because gender associated weakness or because the boy seemed willing. Like come on. You're seriously going to put a 15 year old in such sh*t and say the novel is good? What are you people? Twisted? Then the guy is thirty something. (My guess is that he is probably 38 and the author didn't want to creep people out too much.) That threw me off like to mars. then they painted the little girl as a s*xual savage. Like bleg (vomits. I seriously puked)

what got me reading to chapter three was the fact that I was trying to figure out what was happening with their organs. It seems everyone has both female and male parts. Plus, clearly the author was focusing on male parts. They should have just called this book bl and not confuse us please.

I also don't like the sense of oppression of the omega at the end of chapter 3. I believe in equality in any relationship. Dominants shouldn't feel that's it's in their rights to gain a reaction from submissive and hence go as far as causing them pain. (The alpha is getting all twisted wanting to see blood from the omega's organs. Like what? Isn't the book gross enough already).

But the world build up is amazing. I really wanted to see what the outside world was about an leave the main characters in their pe*ophilic toxicity.

All in all, I would recommend this book to pe*ophilic bl novel lovers. Thank you.

Chinese books normally do this kind of sh*t. In addition to normalizing r*pe, the normalize pe*ophilia. apparently we are supposed to say okay when a 15 or 16 year old child is paired with an adult simply because the book says it's okay. this kind of romanticism should be abolished. People, you can't accept this. Like seriously. What the f*ck is 5 stars? so what if it's a different world setting? We live in the modern world, whether or not it's an alien planet or ancient China, you should have the decency of being civil. There's nothing wrong with making the partners 20 and above. Nothing wrong!!! It's literally just an alter of a few lines like

"twenty is the legal age." Then continue with the 1284846 chapters of your book. Seriously! Don't support pedo. No harm intended. <<less
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MeineMeow
MeineMeow rated it
December 2, 2021
Status: Completed
Is this a love story?

Yes, a maniac obsessive creepy unhealthy filthy yet so pure love story. The plot is great, the writing is top notch, the smut is hot. I thought this was just a smut apocalypse story, but the plot hidden is marvelous.

Is this recommended? ABSOLUTELY!!! Especially if you’re a smut lover like me.
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Eggsnsyrup
Eggsnsyrup rated it
April 24, 2022
Status: Completed
Honestly there are so many things that make this story great.

First, the translation is spectacular, the translator really put their all into conveying all the incredible emotions and making the whole story seamlessly smooth to read.

Second, the worldbuilding and how that intertwines with the main romantic plot is soooo good!! It's a mix of dystopia and omega verse, and they nail it just right to create this society readers can easily visualise without needing to go into into heavy detail and deviate from the main plot. The plot twist at... more>> the end? Delicious, chefs kiss, 10/10.

Thirdly, the characters feel REAL. There is no Mary Sue, no perfect heroine or lover. Both characters are deeply flawed and scarred in their own way. Yet their desperation, cravings for each other is so viscerally beautiful to read.

The dynamics between the couple might not be for everyone, but personally, I really love it!!

Thankyou author for writing something so amazing 😭 <<less
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izzywawa
izzywawa rated it
January 10, 2022
Status: Completed
Its gritty, bloody, and dark, but the story weaves beautifully and you're entrapped in fascinated horror. The work is translated like a dream, I can really believe this story is held close to the translator's heart.

I originally just wanted some GB smut but I stumbled upon a goldmine.

Caution is advised, its not a content for everyone.
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Pommie
Pommie rated it
December 31, 2021
Status: Completed
Omg that was so dark and twisted but lovely and romantic at the same time. I am still in shock at how brilliantly the story was written. The story protrays the imbalance and cruelty of life in such a vivid and telling manner that can immediately hook a reader's attention. I enjoyed it very much.

Ps. This was my first time reading explicit s*x between a female A and male O. I think I fell in love in this kind of genre.
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mahina
mahina rated it
July 21, 2022
Status: Completed
Jiminy. This is deeply messed up, but the writing is beautiful. I do mean it. Not only are the characterizations exquisite and thoughtful, but the quality of prose is five leagues ahead of most of the rubbish on this site.

To the people confused about the "biology" this is set in an A/B/O verse where females with the secondary A gender develop penises during puberty and males with O grow wombs in their anuses. No, that does not make this BL, but it is pretty queer. It's sci-fi, so roll... more>> on.

Regarding the age gap, yes, it is messed up. It does raise questions about statutory r*pe,
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because the rapist is the minor (putting aside the stated age of consent in the story and the line between dubcon and r*pe).

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Fortunately this thing is behind an age barrier so while it is thought-provoking drama it is not one to share what the kiddos. <<less
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Usermin18
Usermin18 rated it
July 14, 2022
Status: Completed
Wonderful wordbuilding and plot. Creative use of non-traditional abo dynamics. The author applied a very rarely used type of alpha female x omega male relationship and transformed it into something Excellent. The site used is also AO3 which is a plus for me. Translation is 10/10. I really thought the original language is English from how good the grammar and verbose used is. Full of mysteries in a dystopian setting. Love the use of psychological mindf*ck aspects. Right amount of p*rn and plot 10/10 would recommend. Can never guess why... more>> it's rated so low smh <<less
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natsume_serenade
natsume_serenade rated it
January 11, 2022
Status: Completed
I cried so much. Well, not a lot. Like, 6 tears. But they were heavy tears. This was such a good story. It can't be for all. The female alpha is a dick, but she's so endearing, and warm towards him, who was feeling such emptiness. It is a great story for a cold evening, I terribly recommend it!
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SavingRemedy94
SavingRemedy94 rated it
November 15, 2022
Status: Completed
This story is f***** up. I will not pretend that it isn’t. A very powerful but underage female takes advantage of the impoverished and unwilling much older male protagonist. He becomes “willing” as the story progresses, or at least as consenting as someone can be when the person initiating the relationship could kill him without anyone batting an eye. If this is going to disturb you, don’t read it. There is no light and happy fluffiness here.

That being said, I can only say it deserves the full 5 star rating.... more>> There is so much depth here. Every moment, you know that there is this increasing disparity between the two characters, but you still hope that they can be together. It’s a study on the power imbalance in this relationship. It’s thought provoking. It’s dark in all the right ways. The main character can never decide if it’s love or dependence that they feel. The lover can never decide if it’s love or obsession. I think one part that really throws it on it’s head is the reversal of gender roles. The girl—and she really is just a teenage girl—takes the lead in the relationship and essentially forces the male into the relationship. The male main character is on the receiving end and has no choice in the matter. It’s interesting to read, especially after reading so many bl omegaverse stories. It’s very different, but it’s very well done. If you are not triggered by they age difference and r*pe, I recommend you try out this study of an imbalanced love affair. <<less
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Uruchan2009
Uruchan2009 rated it
September 27, 2022
Status: Completed
I think this story is really great.

I really like the word "unwholesome" about this story, just like the meaning of "anti hero".

Because this story is actually really warm and romantic, if you saw it from another angle. But of course in normal common sense it's really twisted and weird.

... more>> Even, the main genre about the top female and male bottom could easily be ignored after a while. And I just saw it like a tragic MC x yandere.

I recommend the story so much!!! Can't believe I could cry but also feel so warm in my heart while reading this after read the tags.. Lol <<less
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FrostyDragon
FrostyDragon rated it
June 19, 2022
Status: Completed
I would really not recommend this to anyone unless none of the tags for this novel makes them hesitate to read. Also as a reader you shouldn't have a problem with a very dark, very smutty story where the FL tops the male MC.

First time I've read about a female alpha x male omega - I confess I don't really get the logic behind it, but it's ABO, so one shouldn't think too hard about the biological implications of men with wombs and women with penises. Leave your critical sense... more>> behind and just enjoy a good story.

Anyway, this is actually a really good story - I was very impressed both with the writing and the translation, both are top notch, thank you so much to the translator for picking this up.

The plot is very dark, and the romance cannot be called healthy or sane - and that's the whole point. The world building and character setup is great, by the end of the story I could completely understand why both characters did what they did, and could root for them despite the FL being pretty much insane.

I guessed the FL's identity pretty early on - it was kind of obvious I think - but the plot twist I only guessed quite late, the author left hints, but was subtle about it.

It's a love story that explores a relationship where one party holds all the power, while the other party has no power at all. I thought the ABO elements worked well for the setting, it made everything even more dystopic and horrifying than it already was.

About the mpreg:

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It's just mentioned, it doesn't actually happen in the story.

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About the smut - part dubcon, part consensual (somewhat - under the circumstances it would be hard for the MC to say no at any point). The FL has the dominant (top) role, while the MC is the bottom.

The FL is an interesting character, the yandere tag is well-earned, but gotta say I respected her by the end - she was at least very, very committed in every way you could be. It's nice to read about female characters who aren't just generic 'badasses' but has as many flaws as the male characters. <<less
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seemanta
seemanta rated it
August 1, 2023
Status: Completed
sh*t is insane...

Forget about female alpha or male omega. This novel puts more emphasis on the psychological side than the physical. It's more about 329's mental state and journey. The age may make it controversial but that hardly plays a big part. I'll have you know that age or gender doesn't change anything about the perpetrator. Also, Yasha maybe underage in our perspective but in their society, she's of age to commit s*xual acts.

This gives me kinda the same vibe of The Handmaiden. Except 329 has totally utterly given... more>> in to despair and makes no attempt to free himself unlike Offred. I feel absolutely utterly uncomfortable. There's a r*pe tag and even gangb*ng. But that wasn't what traumatized me the most. What I felt the worst about is that 329 is so utterly absolutely devoid of anything that he gives in to Yasha even though he knows she's a psychopath. He wants and needs that cold twisted hope she gives him. He doesn't have anything else beside that. Nothing. I can understand why he did that but it still makes me wanna vomit. I don't hate him or his choice but it hurts me.

No comment about Yasha. I thought I was relatively lenient about yanderes but Yasha made me feel cold. She's just terribly cold. Her warmth is like the sun amidst a hot, humid and rainy noon. It's not cold, not hot. Just a gross, sticky and humid brightness that's worse than cold and cloudy sky. But she herself thinks she's being warm. Disgusting.

Their characters are built really well. So well that I could feel the despair from 329 and Yasha could make me feel terrified. A very beautifully written piece of literature. I very fascinating piece actually. I admire the writing and the author. But I wish I hadn't read it. If I was depressed before reading this, I certainly would've been closer to thinking about su*cide after reading this.

Also, the smut is more of "what's going through their head as they f*ck" rather than "what's happening on the bed". It's great writing. But it's not very enjoyable in a smutty way imo. At least it gets less and less enjoyable as the story progresses. I feel complicated about it.

It's a great piece of literature but I don't want to recommend it. Especially to people who're dealing with mental traumas and similar issues. <<less
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