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Alpha Yan Qiu bumped his head and unexpectedly transmigrated into his nemesis Ji Xinglan’s Omega fiance’s body.

【Before Marriage】

Ji Xinglan leaned lazily on the couch. “Renouncing the wedding? Impossible.”

The man smiled wickedly, overturned Yan Qiu on the sofa, and suddenly lifted his shirt. “Your stomach bears my child, how could you forget about that?”

Yan Qiu looked at his belly and suddenly felt the heavens fall and the earth rend! (idiom; rocked by a major disaster)

… Ah, I’m pregnant! This pair of male dogs!

【After Marriage】

Inhibitors couldn’t be used during pregnancy, so feverish Yan Qiu, with no choice, could only let Ji Xinglan repeatedly torture him.

Having to meet with my arch-nemesis is indescribable. I’m going to die!

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Only Ji Xinglan knew that he had never touched his Omega fiance at all.

He was going for Yan Qiu from the beginning.

A few months later, Yan Qiu looked at his still flat belly, gritted his teeth, and slapped Ji Xinglan’s face.

“Go away! You f*cking cheater! ”

“This Laozi demands a divorce!”

Ji Xinglan smiled calmly and took out a piece of paper from the drawer.

“Sorry honey, it’s too late. Now you really are pregnant with my seed.”

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PomPoppu
New PomPoppu rated it
November 25, 2024
Status: c61
I would not recommend this novel because the characters are shallow, the scenes incoherent, and the plot nonexistent. If I were to summarize, I'd say it's a story about two guys making out and sniffing eachother in different places. Over 60 chapters in and not much else has happened.

The translation is OK, but the writing is actually really bad as far as setting up scenes or characters. Scenes will jump around randomly. The characters will be getting out of the car and going into the elevator to... more>> the apartment, have an interaction with a lady there, and all the sudden the ML is back to unbuckling the MC in the car? It's not just once. This happens frequently, like the author forgot to add a scene break or just plain forgot where the characters were while writing.

The romance is really dull. Each "romantic" scene is basically the same scene played out again and again in different locations. The MC gets his arms pinned up and forcefully kissed while he comments on the ml's long legs.

The story is censored in really random parts? The author goes to lengths to mention exactly how large each character's "member" is down to the centimeter, but when the ML has a spicy dream he actually dreams in mosaics cause he's too "pure". And when the characters do get to anything beyond kissing, the scene skips ahead or has parts omitted from it. The author clearly wants to write a spicy novel but also seems afraid to write spicy stuff. There's nothing wrong with this, except that there's no real climax to the tension each scene tries to create.

As other people have said, the characters are extremely dumb. The MC takes over 40 chapters to figure out what everyone else knew by chapter 4. There are tons of plotholes and characters are shallow. The only reason the characters seem to like eachother is because of "beauty" or "pheromones". They are characters with no hobbies or interests aside from their gender and love life... The ML is pretty weird. I see people saying "well it's cause he loves MC too much". But why does he love mc? Aside from the MC physically assaulting him once and smelling mc's pheromones, the ML has no reason to like the MC. Likewise, MC loves ML cause he is pretty and smells good. He also said that ML is a gentleman cause if their roles were reversed he would've already r*ped the ml... so even though the ML forces himself on him all the time and pulls off his clothes in public, it's okay cause he would've done worse himself if he were the ml? Very shallow.

The side characters and initial premise/setting actually wasn't bad. But the premise falls flat very quickly. Even the title "marked by my enemy" fails to deliver any tension, as the ML is not marked for a long time, and when he is, the mark is like a first-aid type of procedure and nothing happens. When he is supposedly in heat and you expect some sort of tension, the author just forgets that he's in heat and he just continues going to school like normal after relaxing at home for a day with minimal side effects.

I might skim some more chapters, but the story is a rather dull read. With so many great novels out there, I wonder how this one got so popular. Maybe because of the constant tension? But after failing to deliver any sort of climax to that tension for 60 chapters, I fail to see anything special or unique to this story to keep me reading. <<less
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katiethairu33
katiethairu33 rated it
August 20, 2020
Status: Completed
IT IS WORTH IT.

I know the MC & ML's personalities make it borderline messed up to imagine a healthy relationship. They didn't have a healthy relationship at the beginning. One of the reasons I liked this novel was because they never portrayed it to be healthy to begin with. It's not cute how the ML is manipulative. The ML is portrayed as crazy and it is not normalized. You need to read to a certain part to know exactly how much trauma each of them have had in their past... more>> to have become so twisted. There's a reason why each of them behave the way they do and why MC tolerates ML's absurd behavior.

ML is completely paranoid after MC died. He's obsessed. It's not even the sweet kind of obsessed. He's yandere. He's a manipulative jerk for the most part but he's trying so hard not to lose it when he's with the MC. It's actually very heart wrenching. He didn't permanently mark the person he loved to the extent of madness even though the person was literally dangling in front of him with pheromones indicating how much MC loves him. And that redeems him to a certain extent in my view. He certainly didn't leave enough room for MC to leave him completely but he wouldn't have gotten away with what he did if the MC didn't let him. From the beginning, whatever ML does that crosses lines was due to the indulgence of the MC. For ex, you know what the MC thought of when he found out the pregnancy was fake?
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He wanted ML to sleep on the sofa for a month, changed it to a few weeks and then lowered it to a week. He's so smitten he doesn't even know how to draw lines. He just indulges him way too much but that was because he feels guilty about how he was when he was alive.

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MC loves him enough to let him get enough security in their relationship because he literally became insane after his death. He legit got help!! He went to a psychiatrist. It's not all, 'I love you, so I need you under my eyelids 24x7'. He changes and grows. There is significant character development. But you need to have the patience to get there.

Coming to the MC, he's s*upid to begin with but even worse was that he was poor. Not only in terms of materials but mainly emotionally. He was an orphan and at most, he had a few buddies. He didn't even have anyone who he thought wouldn't be ok with his death. He is deathly afraid of wanting things. How messed up and lacking must your childhood be to fear wanting something? He literally brainwashed himself into not liking the ML & even ignored blatant indicators because he didn't dare to imagine someone as pampered and excellent as the ML to like him back. To make it worse, he was a complete shit-head to the person who loved him when he was alive. How should he come to terms with that? At one point, the MC wished ML didn't love him so much so he wouldn't suffer so much. He has issues. He has very low self-esteem. He realized he was gay as an Alpha and never came to terms with it. He's different from normal people in too many ways and he tried to fit in too much. And it became a disaster for both of them. They hurt each other too much because both of them didn't dare to be honest. He's immature and rebellious and his s*upid actions of bullying the person he likes blew up in his face and he spent the rest of his second life making it up to the ML. MC only seems normal on the surface. He is messed up on the inside too to have such so much self-denial. He had identity issues like many closeted gays and he had no one to help him be ok with himself.

ML doesn't use pheromones to suppress MC often. He even kissed him without pheromones but MC behaved the same way he did without them and ML even pointed it out to him to make the MC realize his feelings. He did go crazy at one point and suppress MC when he wanted to leave and that is when they make headway into their relationship - as in, they realize how messed up it was and that they needed help. ML is a vinegar jar but one that is self-aware!! You know how ML gets jealous of MC? He's like a child who knows he can get away with things to a certain extent because of pampering. He picks on MC and acts jealous just to get benefits. He even acts more jealous than he actually is just to kiss him some more and have some smexy time. He's s*upid. And the MC is s*upid to keep giving ML chances. They're both naive idiots. It's just a play between them. ML doesn't stop MC from being with his brothers. He just doesn't let him hug them as if he was still an Alpha and that is within his rights to expect from his wife? Even though he got the wife through lies.

They don't have a normal, healthy relationship at the beginning. There were too many scars that needed to reopened and scab over to eventually get to a somewhat normal relationship later. It is a HE and they don't get there easily. Even though MC was oblivious to the extent of being infuriating, at least he had a spine. He recognized that ML had issues and their relationship was pe*verted from the start. They even have elements of BD*M. But it's not full blown sub dom relationship. So it's messed up af. But, but I think I enjoyed their journey a lot. ML had too much obsession as well as too much respect for MC? It's a weird balance. He didn't permanently mark him but he did manipulate MC. He lied in many uncomfortable ways but he did fess up later. He recognizes his own mental state. He doesn't think he is a-ok. And that is so much better than MLs who literally trample on their lovers in the name of love. MC eventually gets to a place where he is ok with family and love and his identity. He grows. ML too, gets a lid on his madness. They loved each other enough to get through the hard part. <<less
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elvira12
elvira12 rated it
April 29, 2020
Status: Completed
I really have to praise Chrysanthemum Garden for picking up novels that are truly a gem!

Found this today with only one chapter out yet. It was really interesting so I mtl the rest and it was really good!

But I'm going to wait for the translation and read it again. I'm pretty sure Chrysanthemum Garden will finish this in no time. They are very reliable in completing their projects, so kudos to all of you!

... more>> As for the story, the MC is named Yan Qiu while the ML is Ji Xinglan.

The MC was formerly an Alpha but died 6 months prior. The ML love the MC even back when he was still an alpha.

The body that the MC transmigrated into was the current fiance of ML. ML's mother was the one who insisted on this relationship because she was worried about ML's psyche after MC original body died.

Spoiler

When MC transmigrated on the fiance body, he was quickly discovered by ML. So this started the plot of the ML to trick the MC that the fiance body was pregnant even before he transmigrated. The MC being not familiar with omega physiology easily believed the ML because there was a time where the MC experienced 'morning sickness'.

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Then everything was a push and pull scenario of fluffiness. My only complain is it could have been hot if the snu snu was there. =. = I like the MC and ML's character. They slowly developed their trust.

Will definitely come back again after complete translation. ^_^/ <<less
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hy-d-ra
hy-d-ra rated it
May 9, 2020
Status: DROPPED
During first chapters it feels not bad.

After rading to almost a half you start to consider smashing your head.

Status: DROPPED. Reasons why:

    • Oblivious MC, to the point of hurting your brain. I don't like oblivious people who dangle on the verge of being s*upid. Even after being extremely intimate to each other, several confessions, I mean even damned pheromones convey those feelings, with excluding s*xual interc**rse though, yet for some unexplained reason MC thinks ML doesn't like him, because he assumes ML hated him. It's solely MC's s*upid conviction, because there is no proof and he never bothered to get proof. He just sees, makes assumption and this is the end. This is his acting in many situations. Constant MCs yammering how he's still alha and he's still hetero (with not once having wet dreams, being satisfied with kisses etc). I understand the inability to embrace your new body and contradictions it brings, but it feels weird how he goes through everything, but clings to the idea stubbornly and more than that, he accepted that he is pregnant and needs to deliver this child, so all it is a big messy bundle.
    • The s*upid loophole that many "conflict" situations are based upon: ML knows MC, since he feel in love when MC was still alpha, I believe he'd definitely find out people MC hangs out with. When MC is now omega he found his buddies (pheromone is like a fingerprint, MC started to smell differently from original owner so they recognized him no biggie), but ML drinks vinegar regularly because of his good buddies and MC saying they're just friends never helps. Sure thing he can't explain that he's not his former fiancee, but he doesn't want to switch on his brain as well, like there're so many changes he doesn't want to aknowledge.
    • ML is considerate? I disagree to extent. In some cases he acts really considerate. But do we forget the emotional trap and that is - a lie about having a child? ML realized who MC is due to pheromones. For whatever reason heat-inducing drugs were used in soup the very first day, I mind you MC fell on his head and they give him that without his knowledge, even though ML controls himself, but. ML actually plays with MC a lot and doesn't consider that he was once an alpha. Like every alpha, like any human being actually, comes with a sense of pride, not to mention that now MC is bound in a body that positions him under other person, but there are many instances where despite wanting to slap MC's s*upid head I feel sorry for him.
    • The overturned ABO rules where biting is a temporary mark... wut. Same-s*x marriage is not a thing (while MC and ML registered a marriage no biggie). The world-building of ABO verse is really... so-so. Like the school is actually co-ed, which is basically potentially dangerous.
After reading to half, my patience failed me, I read few last chapters and was like - that's it? Not satisfied witht his silly novel.
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X1NK3R
X1NK3R rated it
June 6, 2020
Status: c36
This book is meh in the first 20 or so chapters, but goddammit I can't stand it anymore.

I just can't understand why some people like 'black bellied' MLs, because they are absolutely f*cking infuriating.

The ML repeatedly bullies the MC, kissing him without consent, stuff like biting, hickey in revealing places so the MC has to hide them, doing that in risky situations, and being completely inconsiderate. Like, he maybe agrees once or twice to the MC's requests, but basically never when it comes to stuff like 'I don't want to... more>> kiss' or 'I don't want to hug', and bullies the MC if he's 'disobedient', aka he's being misunderstood.

For example,

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Once the MC wanted to go for a walk with a cat they adopted, so he gave him a little bell on his collar so he wouldn't get lost. Guess what, the ML also put a bell that only he can remove on a collar on the MC's neck that once again, only he can remove, and forced the MC to beg to take it off.

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He shows no consideration to the MC's feelings, be it in big or small things, and repeatedly bullies him, and people mistake that sh*t as 'fluff'. God f*cking dammit how can people like this sh*t without a humiliation fetish???

Since this has already turned into a rant, I might as well say about how shitty the entire setting of ABO is. What the f*ck kinda steps do you have to go to go from a population having two genders, to six, with a useless gender (betas), as well as a gender who can actually have children but still have a dick? Where tf is the logic??? And if it was somehow genetically engineered, then why tf can't people decide what gender they want to be? Why can't they have reliable suppressors, or stuff like that? You mean to tell me an entire intergalactic civilization collectively forgot so much???

All in all, this novel is awful imo. The setting is overused and illogical, the characters are bad, the fluff is nonexistent, and we have a s*upid MC as well as a bullying, control freak of a ML. <<less
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Houzyfutz
Houzyfutz rated it
July 19, 2021
Status: --
The translation is fantastic. CG did a wonderful job with translating and editing, truly great work.

That is as far as my praise goes for this book. I only got to chapter 29. If I read any further it is because I'm hate reading.

MEGA SPOILERS re:- MC AND ML

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First and foremost, the ML cons the MC into thinking he's pregnant. MC has only been in the body for less than 48 hours so he has no choice but to believe him. ML throws out all of the medicine to stop heat because of the doctors orders. The good doctor just goes along with his deception too wtf! It's all a ploy to actually force MC into a omega heat in order to 1) really and truly knock him up and 2) permanently mark him. ML has no qualms about his own behavior. (What in the hell????? How is ANYONE supposed to like this love interest after all that?)

If you couldn't already tell the ML is too possessive and abusive. He hates that the MC has his own space to shower and sleep to the point where ML sabotages the pipes in both rooms, forcing the MC to rely on him and sleep in the same bed. He hates the very idea of MC living in a dorm room so again he forces the MC to live with him in some random apartment. All in order to occupy the MC's space, time, and mind. ML even hates the kitten that MC brings home bc it hogs the MCs time.

He takes every opportunity to humiliate the omega/shou/MC and uses pheromones to oppressed him into obdience. ML then flaunts his right to r*pe the MC under marital and omega law any time he is unhappy which is ALL the f*cking time because the ML is only happy when he has complete and utter control of MC.


So basically the ML tricks him into marriage, gives him a collar he cannot remove, and tries to control every socialization the MC has. Friends are certainly out of the question. The only person who is allowed to make contact with MC is the ML himself. And just to prove it ML sniffs him daily to make sure he's not "cheating" with others. Which could be anything from hand shake, a hangout, or a hug. ML is primed to use his abusive behavior at any chance he gets, regardless of who walks in front of him.

And the MC just goes along with it. He seems to be missing that alpha backbone the author swears he has. Sure he puts up a few messy fights, and swears he will do something better next time, but ultimately caves for the ML more often than not. Why fight for his own independence? Why even try? (At this point the ML has conned everyone into thinking he is the next messiah and no one doubts him. So MC's frustrations can be understandable if he f*cking HAD THEM TO BEGIN WITH!!! He doesn't. He just gives up and accepts things for how they are.) He even winds up kissing the ML just to keep a f*cking kitten. God forbid when an actual child (of r*pe) comes along. ML will likely fight for dominance over his own kid for f*cks sake.

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This ML is psyopathic. This MC is suffering from Stockholm syndrome. There is nothing redeeming about any of it. Don't read this book at all.

(Edited bc spoiler tags are hard work.) <<less
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frozenlimabeans
frozenlimabeans rated it
May 1, 2020
Status: c20
Its not a bad novel. There's fluff and interesting characters, I would suggest this to anyone who just wants to read a cute novel.

The only problem I have with the novel? The CP's relationship is just so... unequal. ... more>>
Spoiler

The ML uses his pheromones pretty damn often to kiss the MC and scares him into obeying like to stand still and not run away when he's approaching. The ML sort of uses scare tactics to control MC like: saying he would punish him and shows his desire to bite him (when MC doesn't want it), lies to him about being pregnant, using his male God status at school to indirectly make him a target for others

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The MC kind of has no actual power in the relationship, even if I'm only part way through the novel, it seems like the relationship dynamics aren't going to change either.

Its so-so in terms of couple dynamic and relationship. <<less
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bingpupschewtoy
bingpupschewtoy rated it
March 7, 2021
Status: c45
The ML is just awful. Reading this is just reading textbook ab*se. He’s kind only sometimes, then other times will humiliate the MC, blackmail him, lie to him, and make the MC so confused about what’s actually happening. Their relationship flip flops constantly which makes it cumbersome to read. I feel like two stars is too high, but I kind of liked the MC and really wanted to see him get a happy ending.
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Rutabaga
Rutabaga rated it
January 28, 2021
Status: Completed
Yeah. Can't say it's good, but it's not bad. It seems that the reviews are pretty divided.

Its true that the first half of the novel is pretty bad, and the novel does get better later on, but it's not really my cup of tea.

A typical ABO, with some fluffy CP moments, and some Possessive Alpha Male moments that I honestly don't like, but it's an ABO novel and it's in the tags.

There are fluffy parts and there are rather weird parts. There are some really good parts and there are... more>> some really bad parts. There are some deep parts and there are parts that are straight up lowering my IQ just reading it. The MC has mature moments, but more than half of the time he is s*upid as f*ck. The ML also has gentlemanly moments, and moments that are straight up freaky. Because of this, I can't really decide whether it's good or bad. There are parts I liked and would give a 4 star for, but there are parts that I disliked and would give a 2 star for. Its a weird novel.

I dropped it, I guess. Not my type of novel. Perhaps I'll pick it up after a month or something.

Edit: I picked up from where I dropped off (Ch73) and finished the novel. I personally think it got a little bit better than the chapters before, there were less bad parts, but the overall story was still not very good. After finishing, I don't think it was as bad as I thought before, but I still don't consider this novel as good or deserving of 4 stars. Sorry for the bad English and have a nice day. <<less
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newcumber
newcumber rated it
June 23, 2021
Status: c39
The translation quality is the sole saving grace of this novel and why I rated it a 2 instead of 1.

Also, to be fair, I did drop this novel at ch. 39 instead of finishing it because I was too frustrated to continue reading.

While I understand that terrible, possessive, and unreasonable male leads are not uncommon (and can be quite good when done well), I hate the lack of understanding and shallowness of this male lead in particular. He is very 2D and extremely hypocritical. He claims to love the... more>> MC but his actions show he only wants to f*ck him. He gets turned on seeing the MC panic - true panic, not just being innocent and flustered. The MC is not used to his new body, and I wish this novel had explored the change of sexuality and gender transition that the MC went through instead of just making him immediately extremely (traditionally) feminine. The MC claims to be quite masculine but his actions prove otherwise. This isn't consistent with his character when he was still an alpha. I also feel like it would have been quite refreshing if MC and ML had been able to switch roles, as the MC himself gets turned on when imagining himself on top.

Their relationship is not romantic, and I quite honestly feel very grossed out by the creepy and r*pey vibes of the ML the further along I read. Furthermore, I truly hate relationships where the ML gets jealous over MC having friends or pets. I can take this situation if the novel is well written or the characters well developed, but realistically, it is the first step towards an abusive relationship if your partner is cutting everyone and everything you love out of your life. This thought kept popping up while I was reading this novel and as a result, it was much less enjoyable while repeatedly taking me out of the flow of the story.

I had to drop this out of disgust for the characters. There was no attempt at understanding from the ML and when the MC got pushed wayyyy beyond his comfort level. MC never had a break down or snapped back in any way. I want the choices characters make to have consequences, which was AWOL in this novel.

Basically, I thought this novel had good potential but it stayed very stereotypical and surface level in terms of every conflict (ML vs MC, MC vs himself, ML loss of OG MC). This coupled with little to no consequences of actions being taken (ML forcing MC to do something he doesn't consent to or want resulting in no change of behavior or real reaction from MC other than blushing) make this novel frustrating to read, predictable, and boring. <<less
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SAddict
SAddict rated it
September 1, 2022
Status: --
This is exhausting to read although it was so well written. There's no character growth or profound conflict. It's not even heartwarming. The constant jealousy, denial and misunderstanding is toxic. It's pure high school amateur drama.

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MC is in denial that ML likes him even though ML kisses him, does not mind going public with him, texted him, hugs him, told MC he likes him, wrote him a love letter and proposed to marry him. Even when they conveyed their emotions to each other MC is still skeptical and gets physically abusive to ML because he still thinks he's straight. He'd push ML away then cry about it blaming him for it. It became so unrelatable. Not much detail or peeking in their snu snu. It just says they did it. It's just so frustrating. I'd beat MC myself if I can.

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Lilyxd
Lilyxd rated it
January 3, 2021
Status: c45
When I looked at the reviews I taught this would be bad but I actually enjoyed it given the negative comments Ii thought I would enjoy but I found myself reading more and more.

So even though it has bad reviews give it a chance
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Radishhh
Radishhh rated it
November 15, 2020
Status: c105
Tbh, I expected it to be bad considering the rating and reviews.

But it was act cute and sweet. Previously, I was reading another abo novels, and the MC is much worse than this ones. More naive and s*upid and doesn't realise his own feelings.

This novel is fluffy so give it a try. The ML lie for a reason. So I can accept it. He was considerate to the MC and loves him very much. Thats all I need.

The MC may seem s*upid for being manipulated but what can we expect... more>> for someone who is an alpha bfore and suddenly woke up in an Omega body. He doesn't have anyone to rely on. He's cute too, a bit tsundere but I love it. <<less
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Corgibutt
Corgibutt rated it
September 18, 2022
Status: --
This novel started out solidly mediocre. I don’t mean that as an insult because I’m fine with predictable junk sometimes as long as it’s entertaining. But it soon got so boring, repetitive, and brainless I had to tap out. All the characters are s*upid, and at first I thought maybe that’s the point, but now I think it’s just that the author isn’t smart. Some examples:

• By chapter 36, the MC and ML have had the exact same “are you cheating on me with [best friend]” conversation three times. There... more>> is so little plot that the author just has to keep recycling the same scenarios in different locations.

• There’s multiple chapters stuffed with their rescued kitten that make me think the author has never actually been in a room with a cat in their life.

• None of the alphas, who are known for peak physical performance, are willing to run 2 kilometers because it’s too hard. An absolute beginner to exercise can walk-to-run 2k in 20 minutes. The MC, who earlier in the week beat up 4 alphas single-handedly, fainted partway through the 2k. <<less
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Kaylee
Kaylee rated it
April 27, 2021
Status: --
I tried my very best to read this. This is the third time I tried to read! But, big NO.

-The MC is just too stvpid. It's like his brain is gone the moment he turns into omega. Or maybe, he's originally brainless, he only has muscle in his brain.

I love this novel's idea, and so I tried to finish it, but everytime, every single time, everything that comes out of MC brainless mouth and action madg me confused, eye rolled, and finally plain annoyed by him and the story itself.... more>>

-I still dont understand, how'd MC friends could recognize him, a seconds after they talk!? And just plainly accepts the fact MC is still alive. I guess, with a brainless boss, comes brainless subordinates.

-ML is just the usual alpha overbearing type. Nothing to say. In the world of ABO, ML is alpha, and all his doing should be correct and allowed. So yes, nothing to say.

-The world building of how ABO chemistry reacts with each other is really too much. Just because you're omega, you'll surrender your body and soul when being pressured by alpha or just smell pheromones can get you high and low. I still suspect the one who invented ABO and all its requisite are having fetish of dominance and rapist. <<less
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Novelsiast
Novelsiast rated it
January 24, 2024
Status: --
Congratulations, this is the first novel I have ever written a review for since I joined NU mostly because I've read lots of masterpieces and gems that I don't feel the need to. Until....... yes you read me, until!!! I read this one. But once again, congratulations, for this is also the first novel I have ever dropped since I started reading novels from here and here are the reasons why:

Firstly: This is purely a love story that's very biased towards the ML, like if the MC doesn't accept him... more>> and "love" him, then he's nothing.

Secondly: common sense doesn't exist in this world so if you want to see some power omega then I'm sorry to say that this isn't for you otherwise you'll feel uncomfortable at how utterly weak and powerless our MC is in front of the ML, heck the ML is so yandere that he dares to use pheromones to suppress him. Ok imagine falling for someone and then that someone dies and you're so hurt by their death that you literally lose your mind and get help. But then that someone transmigrates and you immediately recognize them, would you use pheromones to suppress them? Would you manipulate them and trick them into marrying you under the guise of pregnancy? Would you restrict their contact with their former friends while knowing full well that they have a platonic relationship with those friends of theirs? Would you unnecessarily get jealous and lose your temper and threaten them with marking?

I don't know about you guys but that's not how a person who lost their love should act, for f*cks sake your lover died (well, one-sided lover lol) and suddenly came back, I would surely cherish them to death, dote on them, and since it's obvious that the MC was very resistant towards the ML at first after transmigrating, he should have at least taken things slow at first so that MC can become accustomed to his presence and not just outright mol*sting his "true love", even if the ML is not entirely ok upstairs, that's not an excuse for him to manipulate and be excessively domineering and a complete control freak, heck he's even better than my mother. Such relationships in real life is where you hear people advising you to "Run"

Thirdly: It seems to me that everyone other than the ML is dense and dumb as f*ck! MC inclusive, I'm not just spouting nonsense on this, I literally mean this. One time is when the ML told MC that MC was carrying his seed, like bruh.... you know pregnancy rapid tests exist right? If you don't believe it, you could have at least taken a test to confirm, but no, coz that's how oblivious the author made our little dense MC to be. Another time is when the ML wanted to forcefully kiss the MC at the back of the school and was caught by your typical patrolling teachers, they both ran and lost him but the MC came back claiming he was forced and teacher believed it and consoled him. Like teacher, couldn't you see that he was the one flashing at break-neck speed and literally running away hand-in-hand with the so called "pe*vert who forcefully kisses omegas"

Another incident is when after the almost-kissing incident, they hold an assembly about self defense and invite the ML to demonstrate some techniques, yet the ML starts demonstrating CPR on the MC and starts stripping him in public for the "chest compressions" and just because he doesn't go all the way to the end and doesn't kiss him, people call him a gentleman!? What!? Huh!? How thick is your f*cking filter!?

The above was bearable until he almost forced him to beg him to mark him, yeah I couldn't tolerate it no more and just dropped it, yeah there's plenty of novels out there that suit my taste, why waste my time trying to power read through it..... I'll just look for something else.

This is my personal opinion on this novel, read it and see your opinion of it, after all... no minds are alike, my thoughts and yours are totally different so don't be biased towards one perspective and look for multiple perspectives. <<less
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Accellia
Accellia rated it
October 24, 2021
Status: c50
3 times picked up. 3 times dropped, for real this time. My evaluation hasn't changed eventhough I tried to fast read from c26 to c50, still bad because no progress from their situation at the start.

most of bad things come from personalities of ML and MC: braindead MC. Once I thought he was tsun and still refusing his new 2nd gender change, but no. It was just pure s*upidity. manipulative abusive psychopath ML. I sometime read crazy personality like this one too but JXL is purely unreasonable and often contradicting... more>> himself like wtf. In previous chapters JXL hates YQ skin shown to other people but then in podium casually open YQ uniform in freaking public?? Pls choose your stand clearly you freaking bstrd JXL

it has blurry world building: co-ed school with high potential it goes wrong if some O got estrus, confusing ABO rules, military is just a tag for boosting ML coolness with so few things mentioned (training routine? Forget it)

also one weird occasion when author forget what they wrote in one chapter that got me confused and laughing:
Spoiler

in early part of chapter written JXL will show self defense but he instead do CPR??😂 😂

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cinlky
cinlky rated it
November 29, 2020
Status: Completed
While you may feel a little cringy that ML common sense drop when dealing MC or why MC is so unbalance... but then who is 100% sensible when in love. Its cute as hell and hopefully they get HE.. (crossing my fingers). YUp a HE book..🥰🥰

Aaaaah the journey of discovering love and building trust, the "bullying" and the "vinegar jar".....

I also wanna have those feelings >_<.. Envy Envy

Came back to edit status and I was surprised with the bad rating. Give the book a real try. It was full... more>> of sugar. The fumbling trying to go through their first relationship. Who started with a prefect first relationship anyway.

Come on.. a girl can be strong and get period during certain and become weak. Just accept there are strong time, there are weak times. They are only humans. <<less
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maboroki
maboroki rated it
April 11, 2022
Status: c34
i really tried to like this, but I just couldn't get past how unsatisfying and frustrating their relationship is in the beginning chapters. Whether or not it gets better I don't know, but I was sick of the dynamic around chapter 10 and praying for it to get better for another 20+ chapters and it just didn't. My main issue is with the mc: he's portrayed as having a complex about still being alpha-like even in his new omega body, but doesn't stand up for himself in any meaningful capacity... more>> and just rolls over whenever the ML demands anything. It's really frustrating especially because the premise is enemies to lovers, and the kind of tension and respect I usually want out of the trope is nowhere to be seen. It feels more like a hostage situation than anything else. And honestly, if the ML spent more time trying to woo the MC and convince him in any way that he is a good partner besides just being hot and coercing him into making out with him and suppressing him with pheromones I would be okay with it, but the ML isn't good enough to make up for the mc's flaws <<less
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Talker09
Talker09
May 3, 2020
Status: chap 34
Liking it

The alpha cares more about the feelings of omega than himself.

Alpha tries court the idiotic omega and prepares him for the upcoming sex

... more>> Till now no s*x only kisses and hugs.

Though the alpha tricked omega into relationship

But I feel certain feelings that omega doesn't recognise

He feels jealous if anyone gets touchy with alpha

Doesn't hate alpha kisses or touch

But hates other alpha courting him

So till now I don't think alpha does any thing bad to omega

And point to be noted omega needs are more prioritised

And alpha when angered only kisses omega and some unharmful threats

He uses the technique of candy and the stick. <<less
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Magz84
Magz84 rated it
August 30, 2023
Status: c61
At first I really liked the first few chapters. But as I kept reading I found myself annoyed and bored on occasions. The main couple are Slow to get into an actual confirmed relationship although they had a physical relationship early on. Nothing really happens and the entire plot for over 50 chapters of the novel, it revolves literally around the MC's s*upidity and confusion regarding his relationship with the somewhat yandere ML.

MC keeps calling himself an alpha but he is absolutely useless when it comes to dealing with anything... more>> and oblivious to everything going on around him.

Although the novel is somewhat funny and at times cute, s*upidity by no means is! I don't know why the author made the MC completely blind to the truth but that really annoyed me.

I am not sure what kept me going. I guess the somewhat smutty occasions and ML's possessive yandere personality and the fact I kept telling myself : one more chapter, next chapter they'll sort it out and get together... It will get better.

I don't really like how it portrays omegas. I have read several different novels revolving around omegaverse and this one has a setting I like least. Omega seems like a decoration and too dependant on alpha.

In the end I dropped it as I was bored of it. Nothing exciting happens, it like the same chapter on infinite repeat. Too bad cuz Chrysanthemum usually has really good novels. <<less
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