Uncle Ma Is a Good Man

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Little Yaya and her mother move to a new house near a big forest, next to a strange house where a strange man lived. Everyone calls him Uncle Ma.

Curious Yaya can’t resist and decides to sneak into Uncle Ma’s house after he catches her spying on him.

[This is a short story, only 4 short chapters long.]
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马大叔是好人
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Nom de Plume
Nom de Plume rated it
April 27, 2022
Status: Completed
This is the story of a young naive girl curious about her reclusive yet handsome neighbor Mr. Ma. She gets up to some mischief trying to figure out his ‘secret’ and they become friends of a sort. The first three chapters fully reflect the perspective of a child. There are many details missing that she only reflects on in hindsight as an adult in the last chapter.

The final sentence is “This is Uncle Ma’s house” to her daughter. The natural response to this question would be “Who is Uncle Ma?”... more>> This combined with the title leads me to believe that this story is one she shares with her children. The sentence she starts with must be, “Uncle Ma is a good person.”

This is a tale that leaves you with more questions than answers, and that’s okay. Stories that leave you thinking are some of the best.

Mistaken assumptions I made before the final reveal:

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I thought he might be either her dad (he cries while eating her mothers cookies) or her first love (no other men appear in the story) or something. I didn’t expect him to remain her neighbor and truly be a good person straddled with a sad backstory.

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I think the translator may have misunderstood one point of the story after reading their concluding remarks.
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Context for those who haven’t started reading: Mr. Ma is a widower.

Note at the end states that we never get to see Mr. Ma’s wife except for ‘one glance through the telescope’. I thought at first that maybe I missed a description of him drawing his wife or something. I reread the end and the beginning and have come to a different realization. The extra pair of legs we see through the telescope are not human, but prosthetics.

The end reveals that an accident took his wife and his legs, but the child never once mentions a wheelchair. She notices details down to the scars on his hands and his good looking eyes. I reasonably suspect that she simply didn’t understand what she was seeing and could only describe it as ‘sitting on the edge of the bed and a pair of feet next to him.’ It could have been the wife’s feet like the note presumes, but she snuck into his home only the next day. The timeline is too fast for it to make sense for the wife to have still been alive in the first chapter (unless I am wrong and the note writer thought he kept the corpse on the bed????).

He was a recluse because of his grief and the little girl noticed him because he was a recluse. He carved the bannisters in memory of his wife and they were already complete when she snuck in. That kind of hand carving takes time especially while disabled. His wife must have already been dead for many years.

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What we don’t know and what I would like to know:

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Does Mr. Ma have a happy ending? She notes that the home doesn’t seem to have been lived in for many years. Has he died or has he moved on???

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About the tragedy tag:

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I was hesitant about replacing the romance tag with the tragedy tag. The protagonist herself seems to have a happy ending after all. However, the protagonist exists only as a narrator to present both a tragedy and a love story she discovered in her childhood. In truth, neither belong to her as the story teller. I opted for the tragedy genre, because this is a tale revealing only the conclusion of a tragic love story. The author doesn’t show the process of falling in love or being in love at all, so the romance is only a subplot. Yay for the romantic subplot tag!

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In conclusion, this story is worth a read even if it will be even shorter than you are expecting. <<less
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seemanta rated it
November 5, 2021
Status: Completed
It's a sweet and sad short story. Took me 3 minutes to finish. It was a bit confusing but there's a note in the end that cleared my confusion.

Anyway, it's about a small kid venturing into her new neighbor's old and mysterious house and meeting him. The ending gave me a bittersweet feeling. It gives a similar vibe as The Old House by Hans Christian Andersen. I recommend to check that out too if you're interested. I read it when I was a kid and I still love that story.
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