The Devious First-Daughter

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A lonely soul, which was placed under the care of the Lord Protector’s Manor, ended up having her lover stolen by the family’s eldest daughter and dying tragically the day before her wedding.

Somehow, she was reborn in the family as their 14-year-old first wife’s daughter, Ning Xueyan, with a startlingly familiar face.

Step by step, she will ruthlessly scheme to seek revenge as well as uncover the mystery of her tragic death.

Her former fiancee, the flirty crown prince and the bloodthirsty prince, will now bear witness to a vengeful Ning Xueyan becoming the peerless lady of her generation…

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嫡女有毒
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speracles
speracles rated it
July 6, 2019
Status: --
Some stories are like potato chips. They have no nutritional value, but you crave them anyway and suspend your disbelief about their validity as a food item. Don't expect potato chips to be a full course meal, but you can rate the tastiness.

Interesting flavor, very salty. A little more unique than other mainstream flavors. Not realistic in any fashion. Like other potato chip stories, so enjoy.
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KichiX
KichiX rated it
August 29, 2020
Status: c479
This is my guilty-pleasure novel. It's certainly not the best, but it keeps me reading so...

In tone, this is like a cross between The Rebirth of the Malicious Empress of Military Lineage and Genius Doctor: Black-bellied Miss. Unlike the former where every chapter is high tension, this has more breathing room - it allows you to feel like the FL isn't in constant danger of losing her life/reputation every second; whether that's because she has maids who can think and act by themselves, interactions with the ML that take her... more>> away from the backyard, or because she is investigating her former life. Of course the great scheming abilities of the FL help too... A large portion of the drama is just waiting for the face-slapping to start...

The multiple story threads are a strong point. The mystery surrounding the FL's former life is drip-fed, and you can tell that the author had the novel planned because things don't just spring from thin air but are natural consequences of actions or information. Likewise, there are very few messy ends - the author doesn't have selective amnesia, nor do they forget what they've already written (I'm looking at you, cultivation novels).

Some of the characters have s*upid expectations though: one of her sisters loses her c*astity but still thinks she can be the wife of a prince? I'm willing to let this go as some of the characters are very self-aware - her evil half-brother himself thinks his mother is losing her touch in scheming; the maids of the evil adopted daughter often bemoan the fact that their young lady is no longer acting rationally...

The ML... I actually like. Come on, how many times are MLs described as being "ruthless", "terrifying", "blood-thirsty" but as soon as they're in front of the FL they act like obedient little school-children, ready to please? In this, the FL is scared of the ML, the emperor is scared of the ML, the princes are scared of the ML - and it's not just "oh, he's so scaaaaary" - it's legitimate fear that affects their actions. He is so scary that I actually couldn't see how the FL was going to fall in love with him.

The FL I won't really talk about -

despite magically becoming a top-notch schemer, the trauma she suffered when she died in her last life is present throughout the story and represents a motivation for her actions.

All that being said there are some negatives:

    • Re-readability: probably not high. The chapters aren't exactly filler but they're not as stream-lined as, say, Malicious Empress. While it's great to read first time around, I think it would be frustrating to re-read as you know the result but have to wade through the intermediary chapters to get to the satisfying bits.
    • Scheming: Often the FL's schemes/counter-schemes work out because she has predicted, down to the sentence, what the antagonists are going to say and do. It's impossible to do this, you know? Maybe you can have a general idea, and can nudge them to work in certain ways, but to have the degree of control the FL has... not possible.
Conclusion: one of the only stories like this that I eagerly await new chapters for. Maybe it's cliched and uses the same tropes as every other story, but it's executed well and has more depth than others. <<less
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muses of a dreamer
muses of a dreamer rated it
August 19, 2019
Status: c92
Though this story is your typical revenge tale I would say this one of the best revenge stories yet. The female lead isn't OP, she has her flaws and makes mistakes. How she retaliates against her Official Mother and half-sisters is amazing. Her interactions with the male lead are very interesting (reminds me a bit of Chu Wang Fei) and very delightful to read. I would highly recommend this story to any person who is mourning the end of the Rebirth of the Malicious Empress and needs to read something... more>> that has the same feeling. <<less
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CRY_
CRY_ rated it
September 24, 2021
Status: c58
The mention of revenge as very annoying. It kept being mentioned almost every chapter. Like I get it but do we need to be reminded in EVERY chapter.

Was interesting for the first 50 chapters but soon became super repetitive.
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Blackcross013
Blackcross013 rated it
January 29, 2020
Status: --
I like most part of the story. Like most stories of this genre, you need to turn off certain parts of your brain to appreciate this. But unlike most, this story has one of the most unlikeable Male leads. He is not just a sociopath, he basically assaults the female lead every time they meet. Male lead literary says he does not care for what female lead thinks or like. She is just a pet to him. Female lead of course cannot resist him as she is no match for... more>> him physically and in any other way. Though others find this romantic, I find it quite disturbing. Other than that, it's not a bad story. Just be prepared to skip parts of it if the ML bothers you. <<less
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Ainslee
Ainslee rated it
January 14, 2022
Status: c55
A very shallow story.

You can't just turn into an expert at scheming just because you wanted to, especially when you used to be an ignoramus.

Without no guidance or background, MC could turn herself into a completely different person once she died and revived into a different girl.

... more>> With that, everyone around her either fall into her scheming or fallen in awe with her new demeanor.

I tried to tolerate the plotline but only survived up till chapter 113 then skip to the last chapter just to give myself a closure.

I'm glad I did. <<less
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azureaume
azureaume rated it
December 1, 2019
Status: --
I like every bite of this story. It just the plot dragged to much. It quite annoy me. It feels like what she done had not inpact at all.

And THE ML.

God!! Every time he came i'll skip that chapter. Every chapter that contain the ML i'll just skip it.

... more>> He just annoying and didn't give me any good point about him. He made me lose interest to read that I can even get annoyed to the novel. Even the mention of his name will make me hate that chap.??

But I really like the FL.? <<less
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Chillyboba
Chillyboba rated it
June 25, 2019
Status: c37
Not bad so far. Typical revenge set-up, but the female protagonist isn’t ridiculously OP or s*upid. She’s taking matters into her hands at a good pace, and the antagonists aren’t complete blockheads. I also like that there are unique events in the story.

Plus, although the we already know who the ML is (due to the exaggerated descriptions of his beauty), the interactions between the protagonist and him are pretty interesting. The ML doesn’t fall in love with her at first sight, and the female protagonist actually fears him to a... more>> certain degree. <<less
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gryffinpuff
gryffinpuff rated it
March 3, 2023
Status: c121dropped
Couldn't take it anymore! MC after being reborn is suddenly an expert in 4-ways chess - expertly guessing her opponent's moves and manipulating situations in her favor... And each time, her opponents rise up like c*ckroaches, and find ways to blame her, and the scums around them wouldn't take a second to think and join the blame-bandwagon... and yet, MC escapes unscathed each time! And similar situations keep on repeating again and again, and the schemes aren't smart either, it's just all he-said/she-said kind of...

Not to talk about the ML... more>> - everytime he enters the scene, there are para upon para to emphasize how cool/unruly/bloodthirsty/handsome/unparalleled he is, how everyone shivers around him yet MC is the only one who can face him... He doesn't care about anyone or anything, everything's either boring or amusing for him...

Not worth it spending more time... <<less
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Erina B
Erina B rated it
April 9, 2022
Status: c8
Disappointed. I start reading this because of good reviews but this novel is disappointing. MC suddenly becomes OP at the day of her rebirth and scheming but still being passive. Her father is so shitty and not reliable. It made me think how he became marquis and maintain his position with his IQ. She said Madam Ming taught her how to know the poison scent but Madam Ming herself die being poison. Ning family committed mu*der one after another in one day and also the victims have their own status... more>> in family but it's like nothing had happend in another day. They didn't even investigate it. MC's fiance being snatched one day before marriage? It made sense? In ancient time? And from the start with her original status, where did she found her all mighty fiance? Everyone saying that the marriage of Ziyan was as the matter of fact. They didn't include the original Ziying in their words. And ML. He came to MC family backyard out of now where and know MC is scheming and suddenly become thinking MC is interesting. What? Are you kidding me? He doesn't even know inside and outside of problem. MC isn't likable at all. All ridiculous. It wasn't that she is good at scheming but villain are one dimentional braindead pepole only know how to talk nonsense. Everything didn't make sense that I can't continue reading anymore. <<less
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Kassandra
Kassandra rated it
March 12, 2022
Status: Completed
This was a nice read when you just wanna spend time.

Plot is okay. It's quite similar to the Femme Fatale novel (also from TapRead), where it involves the previous dynasty.

Mainly, the first half (maybe more than a bit half) is about Xueyan fighting and scheming in the inner yard. And the latter half, about being a consort and the fight to the throne.

... more>> Characters, I wish the sisters at least had a closure. And her cousin, Xueran. Felt complicated about him the most to be honest. But he's nice.

Character design, like one of what the reviews said, Xueyan's development is a bit abrupt. But we'll ignore that for the sake of enjoying the novel. I'll also say there was development but it didn't strike me that deeply.

World background, I didn't pay attention that much but it's good. They mainly centered the novel to Xueyan's POV.

My only complain, well, not really a complain but anyway, what I wanted to know is how she got into her sister's body. Like, how? I thought it would be revealed at the end but no. [Sigh]

And how I wish there's extra chapters for the twins. Like, I wanna see their cuteness!!

Recommended if you're craving some of historical scheming genres. <<less
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chande
chande rated it
June 30, 2021
Status: Completed
I actually like this story enough to give it 5 stars but I can't ignore this story's many flaws, such as:

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    • MC's sudden change of nature. Ning Ziying (original MC) spent her life being a pampered, gentle, and naive maiden. It didn't make sense when suddenly she became so adept of scheming after being reborn as Ning Xueyan. She could even predict her enemy's move with such high accuracy. Scheming needs experience and cleary MC didn't have any experience at all as an innocent Ning Ziying. It's understandable if she came back to the past but she actually came back as Ning Xueyan at the current period. So when did she learn how to scheme so perfectly?
    • In her childhood, Ning Yuling and her servants stripped MC (Ning Xueyan) and almost killed her. Why was nobody aware of MC's birthmark at that time?
    • The schemes of MC's enemies were a bit repetitive. It's either making her lose her reputation or directly killing her. And the enemies were like a c*ckroaches. They just won't die and kept coming back again and again with similar schemes.
    • The translation is a bit messed up. Sometimes, the names were also mixed up especially MC's name and her sisters. And the terms were also a bit confusing. I think some of chinese terms shouldn't be translated to english and the translator should leave it as it is.
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Although this story isn't perfect, it's still my cup of tea. I love rebirth, revenge, and face slapping story the most. Actually, the plot isn't something new but nevertheless, I still enjoy it.

MC is one of my favorite character in this story. She's not OP, doesn't have any cheat, and she doesn't depend on ML to solve her problem. Mostly, she carried the scheme herself. That's what I love about her.

As for ML, I actually didn't like him at first. I thought he's a bit boring. But when I know about his childhood and also about how he treated MC later, I change my opinion.

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ML was depicted as a bloodthirsty and cold man without any feeling but actually, his childhood was harsh. His mother died in conspiracy and he spent his childhood in the battlefield. After he came back to the capital, he still had to face his brother's scheme who wanted to pass the throne to his own child instead of ML as the rightful crown prince. It's understandable if he grew up to be like that.

But he became a bit warm after falling in love with MC. She understood him the most. Maybe because she also had a bitter past like him. They helped and depended on each other. She completed him and vice versa. Although he was domineering, he's not r*pey. He actually waited until MC recovered her health before having their wedding night.

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As for other MC's suitor, they were equally s*um so I'm happy that MC didn't end up with any them.

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Xia Yuhang and Wen Xueran only used MC as a chess piece. Xia Yuhang suspected that MC (Ning Ziying) was the eldest princess of the previous dynasty and wanted to marry her in order to gain the previous dynasty's treasures and military tally. But when he doubted MC's identity, he didn't hesitate to kill her. Later, he regretted it because he realized that he actually loved her. He guessed that Ning Ziying was reborn as Ning Xueyan although MC never admit it. Later, he had the audacity to proclaim that he will treasure MC if she was reborn but he easily took back his vow by scheming against MC with her other opponents. What a hypocrite.

Wen Xueran was actually an interesting character. He was a decendant of the previous dynasty's royal family. In other word, he was MC's cousin. He initially was Ning Ziying's fiance but he didn't care about her and even left her to die in the hand of Xia Yuhang, Ning Ziyan, and Madam Ling. But when Ning Ziying became Ning Xueyan and had a change of nature, he fell in love with her. However, he still chose his ambition to revive the previous dynasty over MC and even wanted to make her his chess piece by letting her marry ML as a way to approach ML in the future. Like Xia Yuhang, he also regretted it later. He confessed to MC but MC didn't want to have anything to do with him. It's understandable because she was also Ning Ziying and in her previous life, Wen Xueran left her to die although he was aware of her identity. He also tried to take MC away forcefully but of course he wasn't ML's opponent.

To be fair, ML also used MC in the beginning but it's a fair deal. MC occasionally helped ML but he also gave something back to MC as a compensation unlike Xia Yuhang and Wen Xueran.

As for Ao Mingyu and Ao Mingwan, although they also loved MC, they didn't want to give her a main wife position. At most, they just wanted to make her a concubine. In the end, they even wanted to take MC away forcefully and hid her somewhere. Of course they were failed.

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The ending was quite satisfying but I still want more. At least it was a happy ending. But what about:

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  • Ning Yinglun. Did she marry Ao Mingyu in the end?
  • Madam Ling's family. Did they just let them off? In the past, they also contributed to Madam Ming's demise.
  • Heng Yuwan. She tried to seduce ML and helped Consort Xia's rendezvous with ML. She also supposed to marry Xianyun's cousin because of her failed scheme. Did she marry him in the end?
  • Ning Huaiyuan. Why did MC let him off? He tried to assassinate her in the past and almost killed her.
  • Ming Yuanhua (MC's nominal cousin) and Heng Yuqing. Heng Yuqing clearly liked Ming Yuanhua while Ming Yuanhua secretly liked MC but it's unknown whether she could marry Ming Yuanhua in the end or not.
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For a reminder: the novel actually had 679 chapters but most web only published 678 chapters. Chapter 679 was a side story from Wen Xueran POV.
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Shortk
Shortk rated it
July 7, 2020
Status: c399
I don't know why this has such a low score. I actually quite like it. I think anyone who is tired of the rebirth break evil family find evil like hot guy husband will probably be the ones who dislike this but I suppose I have a fairly good tolerance for that formula ONLY when it's enjoyably done.

When it comes down to it, this isn't a masterpiece, but I would say I still like it. Blame my taste but the MC is smart (Mary Sue idk but as long as... more>> it's not being written annoyingly and it isn't here imo), the maids have personality, general common sense exists, and it's just like a comfortable rebirth revenge story to read, if not slightly exciting sometimes as well.

If you want the OG then go to the rebirth of the malicious empress of military lineage (which is very well written - it's the origin of this wave of revenge rebirth novels imo) or if you want like a long f*cking masterpiece to suffer with go Han Yuxi.

Still, this novel is valid and super comfortable to read for people who like the revenge rebirth novels because it's not overly nonsensical at all and like I've said lol enjoyable to read. <<less
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zetnnik
zetnnik rated it
June 18, 2023
Status: Completed
I give it 2.8 stars. It's the bloodiest dog-blood story that I've read so far. A lot of ignorant, arrogant, and unreasonable villains. The females hated her, while the males all fell for her. 😩 The MCs were likable enough, it's the writer who fell short IMO. S/He tried to write a clever palace intrigue story, but wasn't able to fully show us. The FL's schemes were supposed to be smart/brilliant, but the processes weren't shown. Based on very flimsy details she was able to deduce what the scheme or the... more>> trap laid out for her? It's repetitive and wordy. Too many internal musings and thoughts that were already done in previous chapters or even just previous paragraphs. I wanted to refer the FL back to some chapters/pages and tell her, "OK, you already noticed this and had thoughts about it. You encountered it again and are thinking about it again, you still don't have a conclusion?" <<less
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Sweettia1
Sweettia1 rated it
June 8, 2020
Status: c154
An interesting novel where the FL/Xueyan uses her own knowledge and wits to get revenge. She does not have any superpowers or magical items.

She recognized her limitations and wisely knows when to retreats.

Similarly with other revenge rebirth novels, there is the evil stepmother, ignorant father who only wants power, and half-sisters who tries to bring her down.

An interesting aspect of this novel is the interaction between the ML and FL.

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She actually fears him when they meet and their interactions stem from her owing him favors for him to help her. He does not instantly fall in love with her, rather he finds her intriguing. He looks at her as a chess piece and a way for him to get an important military object in her father's study. She recognizes that she is useful to him and acknowledges that she does not have enough power so is willing to be used by him so she can gain benefits. It is an interesting twist since she is a FL who must depend on her own knowledge to try and escape from the plots by her stepmother and stepsisters.

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Regarding the ML

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He is not for the faint of heart- black hearted, utterly ruthless and focused on his goals. He beheads concubines sent to him during a scheme to show his bloodthirstiness and also takes the FL to a scene where spies were being tortured. This is not a fluffy ML who dotes and acts lovingly.

Chp 124 is the slow start where he feels a touch of warmth. She recognizes her weakness and will do what she needs to survive and get her revenge. She will not abandon him as long as he does not abandon her. He is ruthless but admires her resoluteness and strength. At the same time, she recognizes she is useful to him and is only alive as long as she is continues to be useful.

As of chapter 154, there is still no romance as he usually kidnaps her to act as a pretend concubine and has cold-bloodedly killed people in front of her.

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There is alot of scheming and drama that goes on as Xueyan tries to survive the plots against her while finding out the truth regarding her background and hidden reason resulting in death in her first life while also dealing with a ruthless, temperamental ML.

Things do get repetitive as most schemes revolve around men being caught with her stepsisters/concubines/mother and damage control with marriages. However it does capture you into the story as we read how she manages to deal with the schemes and plots against her slag family.

Translation quality would be rated fair- it is readable but character names are sometimes mixed up, he or she is used incorrectly often, and sometimes sentences does not make sense. <<less
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lorena72389
lorena72389 rated it
January 14, 2026
Status: --
FINAL REVIEW after 600 chapters:

It's a no for me. But at least I read the whole thing! Why did it go from "promising" to "No"? Read below:

1.) These dang one dimentional women of the Ning household

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These women are legit part c*ckroach cuz they never die!!! I really do not see the logic in the villains being foiled again and again and STILL SURVIVING and still scheming!? It was tolerable the first couple of hundred chapters or so but at ch 400? 500? Nah... I got sick and tired of the same vicious women who seem to have immunity from the law and societal norms. This is the main reason why the book became tedious to read. It's the same cycle of villain scheming, FL winning, villain loses... again and again... with the same damn villains

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2.) The "mystery" of the previois dynasty and it's connection to the MCs

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Imagine being kept in suspense for over 500+ chaps about FL's real history (OG body & new body), getting fed tidbits of clues far and few in between chapters... to finally have the whole mystery solved by...a letter? That was kept with FL'S AUNT THIS WHOLE TIME? the same Aunt who was always in the sidelines, being passive, as FL almost gets killed by their own family members... time and time again!?

And here's the kicker: this previous dynasty mystery and FL's connection to it IS USELESS. ML literally says "so what if your a princess of the previous dynasty?" And that's about it. I swear FL's real background was just used as an excuse to have *more* men supposedly fall for her and that's it! The mystery has no purpose, it's not even made public, and even is it was, nothing would have changed!

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3.) Lackluster romance

If you're here for romance ala *Rebirth of Ill Fated Consort*, *Rebirth of Empress of Military Lineage*, *Rebirth of General's Daughter* and all other romance rebirth stories...

Spoiler

Better not read this and waste your time. The romance was teased even at the start with the FL & ML's somewhat frequent interactions, but it really is lackluster. ML of course becomes "doting" once he realizes he loves FL but that is waaaay near the end of the novel.

They have their first kiss at the later half of the novel. They snu snu for the first time at CH 600 or so... Side stories? What side stories? That 1 extra with FL giving birth to twins even seemed forced with how much it fell short as to "fan service" (which extras are usually for)

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Not a fave. I gave it my all and read all 600+ chaps and I was disappointed.

ORIGINAL REVIEW

I just started this, I'm at ch 70-80 or so. I am intrigued by ML and bewildered by FL's seemingly omniscient 100% accurate future telling skills (aka "strategic thinking").

I am also so confused as to why the women in the Marquis' mansion seem to hate FL so much (past body & also current body) ? And that they are just so determined to kill her as if killing FL is the magic key to solving world hunger or climate change or something??

Anyways, everything is fast paced so I have not gotten bored. FL manages to thwart all the schemes so far but dang these evil women must have a regen buff or they must be part c*ckroach or something cuz how are they still surviving even after being ousted as killers/villains? In an era that is so conservative and close minded, how can someone still be accepted by society/have the face to face ppl even after their crimes are made public?

No romance yet, but ML has appeared a few times. I reckon romance will be a long time coming still based on FL's focus on taking down the Marquis mansion first.

Will update the review once (or if) I reach halfway or finish the novel <<less
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AnniePoo
AnniePoo rated it
February 28, 2025
Status: Completed
I've read this a couple times now because I genuinely like the storyline and chemistry of the FL/ML.

He's devoted and she eventually falls as he helps her get revenge on the family that killed her in a previous life. Cool storyline BTW and just the right level of detail without getting bogged down in superfluous detail.

Plot and character development aren't as good as 'Revenge of an Ill-Fated Consort' but I don't think it needs to be. For me, this is a guilty pleasure when I'm in the mood for revenge... more>> without competition from the haram. <<less
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En-Jay99
En-Jay99 rated it
January 22, 2025
Status: --
honestly I enjoy brainless popcorn novels like this at times, especially after reading intense complex plots. However, there is still a degree of acceptable levels of nonsense and this novel should’ve been barely 200 chapters for it to be good popcorn.

90% of the novel is the people trying to trick people into bed or SA so that the MC’s ‘reputation’ is ruined and she can be killed off. 90%.

As much as the face-slapping or MC turning the tables is fun, the identical repetitive ‘evil schemes’ became boring quickly and it... more>> didn’t help that the author would constantly repeat what had happened in the first few chapters to show why MC wants revenge. In every 5 chapters, we would get a recap of why MC ended up this way. As if we’d forget???? Again and again and again and again and again and again. And honestly I skipped half chapters because I knew the rest was just a recap.

The final 200 or so chapters have the couple together and I mainly read for them. Ao Chenyi becomes a doting husband and it’s like he himself discovers his ability to love someone and his life is now full of joy because of someone. The MC slowly heals and finds someone she can actually trust with her heart. They’re both very cute and sweet together. A+ <<less
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Agreta1
Agreta1
November 26, 2024
Status: c40
This novel is an interesting read if you're looking for something light and escapist—perfect for when you're feeling down and just want some "brain candy." It excels in providing the satisfaction of revenge and plotting that you’d expect in a rebirth drama.

However, the execution is uneven. The start feels a little rushed, not giving readers enough time to settle into the story before diving into key plot points. While the buildup to the first arc (dealing with her mother’s mu*derers) is well-paced and intriguing, the resolution is disappointingly abrupt. After... more>> chapters of intense scheming and dialogue, the payoff happens in a single chapter, narrated in a passive voice without any impactful dialogue. It’s an anticlimactic end to what could have been a strong first act.

Around chapter 500, the plot takes a nosedive in terms of logic. The protagonist frequently walks into obvious traps, relying on her "superpowers" to escape unscathed. This pattern detracts from the earlier cleverness of the schemes and makes the story less compelling over time.

A major drawback for me is the uncomfortable pe*ophilic undertone throughout the novel. The protagonist is 14, while the male lead appears to be in his mid-20s, and their interactions reflect a significant power imbalance that feels unsettling. Some Quotes :

ML Asking the doctor is they can snu snu...

"The imperial physician said that she was too young and would hurt her body. She had to wait until she was 15 years old...

"Alas, you are still too young!"

ML fighting against his desire...

"Ning Xueyan had to be allowed to live until she was fifteen years old, otherwise it would hurt her body.

  But just watching like this will hurt his body!"

Overall, this is a decent guilty-pleasure read for the revenge-driven storyline, but the execution falters as it progresses, and some aspects of the romance are off-putting. <<less
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Julz254
Julz254 rated it
August 9, 2024
Status: Completed
This book is really bad like I generally like this genre like the slapping revenge plotting kind of stories and usually I don't really mind plot holes and weird writing as long as the story is good. But this book is;

    1. Too damn long - I don't understand why it's 600 chapters. I feel like this should have been 200 at most.
    1. Weirdly unstructured - Like the timelines don't make sense or maybe I just didn't understand them, Like sometimes from everything being explained it sounds like days have... more>> passed but then the author says just a day passed.
    1. Too many unnecessary side plots - Like I understand its a revenge inner yard plotting book but damn, by the time I was reading like the 50th plot I was so tired and like from the timeline I think by the time you get to chapter 400 not even a year has passed. Like a character shows up and the next day something is happening. Like no time to breath. Its so endless and I got so exhausted
I got to chapter 450 and just skipped to the last 30 chapters. I feel a bit like I wasted my time and I don't have any good feelings about reading this book. Also I don't know if it's the translation but the names of the characters keep getting mixed up and the

bad guys just keep coming back which was so annoying. This is why

I think this book should have been much shorter coz like why are the back guys just being allowed to come back and continue plotting against the MC over and over. Also I thought the ML would have like more character. I started it because I was told that its similar to malicious empress and it's really not so don't read it thinking it will be like that. The MC is like all knowing in this book and the reason she does certain things are mostly just because she is all knowing, and usually I don't mind that but in this case there were soooo many plots I just got annoyed. I would advice you to read this book only if you completely want to switch off your brain and read a book that doesn't make a lot of sense also if you don't mind writing where there is confusion especially with peoples names and if you want to read a book with endless plotting that doesn't really go anywhere coz the consequences for most of the characters don't last coz they keep coming back <<less
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