This story makes me wonder what if those korean drama where there are two male god fighting and regard each other as rival were actually secretly in love as well LOL.

Well, I feel that some of the other reviewers are taking the story too seriously... This novel is a cute and fluffy novel that isn't really supposed to be deep and logical. It's a simple and fun story. The ideas are good, and they have the potential for a extremely complex and great story, but I don't think the author was trying for that, resulting in this adorable and simple story.

A fast and fluffy read.

Look guys, this is a short story. What do y'all expect? This is supposed bw he loaded with fluff and it is. Wished it was longer tho.

this is a short, don't expect too much. Please. Like it's only 3 chapters? What do y'all seriously expect aside from fluff? Personally, I like this. This is a nice light read after going through a sh*t ton of mary sue/gary stu recycled long-ass stories. I was lazy to read a long ass story, and I certainly don't want to read summary spoilers so... more>> this was nice.

Mind reading thing is nice, hopefully there's another one like this (I know that there's another one with a similar mind reading plot except the gong has it *That was nice but the mind reading thing wasn't used to fullest, actually left me wanting for more ;- (* want to the shou to have it)

P.S

Those people fuwa. Fuwa and ezis are too unreasonable

I have a lot of words to rebuke them but I'm too lazy so ?

*secretly thinking that they're bl haters and are trolling*

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It was very cute but short. The MC is a hot-headed boy who thinks the ML is his rival in everything, whereas the ML is silently in love with the MC, and thinks he's cute no matter what he does.

Yep, it's a cute premise and a cute story. Author tried to do too much in three chapters and so the ending...! Well, there wasn't really an ending, we got to the peak of the climax but the resolution was completely skipped! And that was the part I was looking forward to, all the sweetness of the MC's feelings for his "enemy" finally shifting and having the pair come together! So then a paragraph stating the end result felt very unsatisfactory. Of course, I'm not expecting much from a short... more>> story, but the author spent a LOT of time developing/showing backstory and no time resolving. Sad.

It's cute enough that if you don't ask for anything (I mean anything at all) from a story's resolution, then the set up and development will keep you happy and you can easily just fill in the gaps yourself.

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I like the story but it feels like the ending is sloppy. The ML is a cute tsundere and the MC is dense which always makes for misunderstandings. I do like the way they interact and I wish there were more chapters so the plot could be more explored.

I would give this story all the stars on the sky. That's how much I love this.

It's perfect, fluff, cute.

If you like something refreshing then I recommend this <3

Five stars for the concept, but generally, this was a little too underdeveloped... and too short, with extremely abrupt ending. The translation, however, was good.

A sweet little fantasy but because it’s so short, the ML will appear a bit too OTT and the MC will appear too accepting

It was really cute! But 4 stars because it had so much potential but was cut short (´༎ຶོρ༎ຶོ`)

I really loved this, it's unique and sweet. But I wish it took a bit more time setting scenes up as it felt very rushed and even if it got a happy end the MC feelings also felt rushed so I wish it was slower and showed more scenes of them actually getting along or MC coming to terms with his feelings for the other guy.

Have to admit, this was sickeningly sweet, like rot your teeth on too much sugar sweet. I enjoyed the flow and change of pov. Cute, short, sweet and easy. Worth a read if you need a filler novel when you can't decide on a new novel or genre.

Sigh, very conflicted.

I actually really really love this premise. However, as much as I do, this execution fell way off the mark. First of all, not sure if it's translation or quality of actual story, the writing is pretty bad and childish. Secondly, this plot in 3 chapters is too ambitious; it strongly resembled an info dump. Lastly, in relation with the second key shortcoming I mentioned, the developments were too childish and rush; eg. That accidentally fell into the pool thing was a bit ridiculous.

I hope eventually another novel... more>> will be written with a similar storyline, but better execution. I'm not sure this one is worth reading.

EDIT: Changing rating from 2 stars to 4 stars! I think maybe the first time I read it I read another translation or something?? Or maybe my standards have dropped after a year binging on NU haha. Or originally my expectations based on the synopsis were way too high. Either way now I think it's a super sweet short story. I wish there was a full long novel written with this premise, but oh well. Recommended, anyway it's only 3 chapters! <<less

I don't read such floof often, but how cute ah!! Want more, want more! But it is completed boohoo.. Definitely recommend this! So cute, so cute.

A short and sweet story to clear the mind after reading too many long novels.

Good translation.

A short story. Cliche, but it's cute. I do have to say though, the execution of the story is terrible. Bad pacing despite the potential, but it's quite good for a short novel, and don't take it seriously, since the plot probably isn't meant to be expanded.

Decent. Cute. Short. Straight to the point. Simple. If only it has a few more chapters maybe it could become greater. It feel rushed but actually not really. There's no holes in this story. The Flashback, feelings, and the present day all explained very well. It's nice!

The first chapter was the funniest. I swear I kept laughing and snorting all throughout the chapter. It was a short and sweet read.

One sentence- THIS WAS TOO SHORT!!! QAQ

To be honest, my original rating would be 4 since the story was too short and the characters were hardly developed. But it was a sweet ride, so who cares! ?

It's cute and pretty short.

It's good tho but would have been better if there are a bit more chapters.

Anyways go ahead and try it.

idek guys but this doesn't have any yaoi in it...

whatever but I'm not gonna remove it just telling ya.