My Enemy is Actually Secretly in Love with Me

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When Chu Bai woke up, he realised that he could hear the thoughts of his enemy.

The enemy before him still had the usual arrogant and indifferent expression yet internally he is actually: “Ahhh Bai Bai looks so cute drinking water!”

Chu Bai instantly spat out water over his keyboard.

Wh-Who said you can call me Bai Bai!

Associated Names
One entry per line
死敌居然暗恋我
Related Series
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  1. Cute danmei short stories (Completed)
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  5. BL novels I finished reading

Latest Release

Date Group Release
05/07/19 KK Translates c3 (end)
05/07/19 KK Translates c2
05/07/19 KK Translates c1
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SayMrrp
SayMrrp rated it
July 8, 2019
Status: --
Well, I feel that some of the other reviewers are taking the story too seriously... This novel is a cute and fluffy novel that isn't really supposed to be deep and logical. It's a simple and fun story. The ideas are good, and they have the potential for a extremely complex and great story, but I don't think the author was trying for that, resulting in this adorable and simple story.

A fast and fluffy read.
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Efu-sama
Efu-sama rated it
November 10, 2019
Status: --
This story makes me wonder what if those korean drama where there are two male god fighting and regard each other as rival were actually secretly in love as well LOL.
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laexdream
laexdream rated it
May 7, 2019
Status: Completed
It was very cute but short. The MC is a hot-headed boy who thinks the ML is his rival in everything, whereas the ML is silently in love with the MC, and thinks he's cute no matter what he does.
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chocolatechipcookie
chocolatechipcookie rated it
August 1, 2019
Status: --
Look guys, this is a short story. What do y'all expect? This is supposed bw he loaded with fluff and it is. Wished it was longer tho.

this is a short, don't expect too much. Please. Like it's only 3 chapters? What do y'all seriously expect aside from fluff? Personally, I like this. This is a nice light read after going through a sh*t ton of mary sue/gary stu recycled long-ass stories. I was lazy to read a long ass story, and I certainly don't want to read summary spoilers so... more>> this was nice.

Mind reading thing is nice, hopefully there's another one like this (I know that there's another one with a similar mind reading plot except the gong has it *That was nice but the mind reading thing wasn't used to fullest, actually left me wanting for more ;- (* want to the shou to have it)

P.S

Those people fuwa. Fuwa and ezis are too unreasonable

I have a lot of words to rebuke them but I'm too lazy so 🖕

*secretly thinking that they're bl haters and are trolling*

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suwaa
suwaa rated it
May 12, 2019
Status: Completed
I would give this story all the stars on the sky. That's how much I love this.

It's perfect, fluff, cute.

If you like something refreshing then I recommend this <3
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ezis
ezis rated it
May 8, 2019
Status: c3
Five stars for the concept, but generally, this was a little too underdeveloped... and too short, with extremely abrupt ending. The translation, however, was good.
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FanGirlNoha
FanGirlNoha rated it
May 16, 2020
Status: Completed
One sentence- THIS WAS TOO SHORT!!! QAQ

To be honest, my original rating would be 4 since the story was too short and the characters were hardly developed. But it was a sweet ride, so who cares! 😄
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BaiYihan
BaiYihan rated it
April 27, 2020
Status: c3
I like the story but it feels like the ending is sloppy. The ML is a cute tsundere and the MC is dense which always makes for misunderstandings. I do like the way they interact and I wish there were more chapters so the plot could be more explored.
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Aurinne
Aurinne rated it
January 1, 2020
Status: Completed
Yep, it's a cute premise and a cute story. Author tried to do too much in three chapters and so the ending...! Well, there wasn't really an ending, we got to the peak of the climax but the resolution was completely skipped! And that was the part I was looking forward to, all the sweetness of the MC's feelings for his "enemy" finally shifting and having the pair come together! So then a paragraph stating the end result felt very unsatisfactory. Of course, I'm not expecting much from a short... more>> story, but the author spent a LOT of time developing/showing backstory and no time resolving. Sad.

It's cute enough that if you don't ask for anything (I mean anything at all) from a story's resolution, then the set up and development will keep you happy and you can easily just fill in the gaps yourself.

I just was disappointed at the lacklustre ending after a lovely build-up. <<less
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listlessreader
listlessreader rated it
December 12, 2019
Status: Completed
It's a cute and quick read, but because it's so short, it feels rushed.
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The1Rin
The1Rin rated it
November 2, 2019
Status: Completed
I really loved this, it's unique and sweet. But I wish it took a bit more time setting scenes up as it felt very rushed and even if it got a happy end the MC feelings also felt rushed so I wish it was slower and showed more scenes of them actually getting along or MC coming to terms with his feelings for the other guy.
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ike_00000
ike_00000 rated it
June 28, 2019
Status: Completed
Sigh, very conflicted.

I actually really really love this premise. However, as much as I do, this execution fell way off the mark. First of all, not sure if it's translation or quality of actual story, the writing is pretty bad and childish. Secondly, this plot in 3 chapters is too ambitious; it strongly resembled an info dump. Lastly, in relation with the second key shortcoming I mentioned, the developments were too childish and rush; eg. That accidentally fell into the pool thing was a bit ridiculous.

I hope eventually another novel... more>> will be written with a similar storyline, but better execution. I'm not sure this one is worth reading. <<less
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numba1nobody
numba1nobody rated it
April 13, 2020
Status: Completed
It's cute and pretty short.

It's good tho but would have been better if there are a bit more chapters.

Anyways go ahead and try it.

idek guys but this doesn't have any yaoi in it...

whatever but I'm not gonna remove it just telling ya.
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mxdberries
mxdberries rated it
February 23, 2020
Status: Completed
Very cute, liked the concept of love at first sight & accidental rivals but it was rushed. It also took me a moment to realize that they weren't in a flashback/memory and instead transitioned back to the present, wish they gave a little more of the relationship.
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dday0425
dday0425 rated it
February 6, 2020
Status: c3
I think this story is adorable. Both the MC and ML are very cute, ofcourse, they're highschoolers. The plot is very simple, yet it's okay for a 3 chapters-story. I love how the story isn't dragged too long with this simplicity of plot, and it's actually very fun to read.
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt
January 31, 2020
Status: Completed
Very fluffy, very cute. Translation + writing was good enough that it made you want to read more!

The resolution was a bit abrupt but it's only a 3 chapter story.

... more>>
Spoiler

It would have been awesome to expand on the concept a bit more. The idea that the stoic/intimidating ML is crushing hard/starry-eyed underneath is super adorkable (mensao), haha. It would have been hilarious if the MC had continued to read the ML's mind and/or interpreted his unhappy face for other classmates and reacted like a tsundere, and everyone else could be like: what is this weird couple LOL

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Clearing up the pond thing:

Spoiler

Author wrote that the Fine Arts flower pushed the MC into the pond cause she thought she was protecting the ML from the MC's attack attempt. He didn't fall by himself. ML was pissed at the her after that cause he probably knew the MC didn't know how to swim.

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If you like the type of ML who is stoic on the outside but super adorkable on the inside...

Spoiler

[Superstar Aspirations] is a great long fic. That ML has an alt ego completely similar to the ML in this fic. He's a fanboying, fluffy, "girlishly in love, " little baby cinnamon roll on the inside. It's hilarious.

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RAGA
RAGA rated it
January 7, 2020
Status: c1
This had a lot of potential that it just didn't use. The premise is good and the characters are funny and interesting (even the side characters), but the story started and built up in the first 2 chapters and then got resolved way too fast in the third chapter. For all of the animosity the MC had towards the ML, he let go of it way too quickly.
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Kiskaiya
Kiskaiya rated it
July 14, 2019
Status: Completed
Have to admit, this was sickeningly sweet, like rot your teeth on too much sugar sweet. I enjoyed the flow and change of pov. Cute, short, sweet and easy. Worth a read if you need a filler novel when you can't decide on a new novel or genre.
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Seafall
Seafall rated it
June 24, 2019
Status: Completed
The translation is good but the story, for me, is mediocre.

If you want a refreshment from reading too much BL novels, then I recommend this. It's simple and cute.
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fuwa.fuwa
fuwa.fuwa rated it
May 7, 2019
Status: c1
A typical MC and ML but the plot is just too cheesy and has no deep whatsoever

  • A second [young master] means he is a rich kid, isn't he? But he lives in a dorm with 4 people shared-bedroom... I thought he would live in nearby apartment rather than cramped in together with the person he hates
  • He supposed to be the smart student, campus idol, gets lot of confession. Then, he found a girl he's interested in, and wanted to pursue her, until...
  • He bought flowers, heard that the girl is in [English building] (in or somewhere, the building is big!), and he came to near the building and saw [the girl confessed to the person he hates] (which is actually the ML)
  • He was in rage when heard the confession, and [charged toward the ML, wanted to punch him but ended up into a pool] because the ML evaded the punch. Did this suppose to be [smart student]???
  • And that pool, he couldn't swim and probably almost drowned in, so the ML (who actually liked the MC) saved him, ta~raa. Weird, because I feel this is like pushing the common plot that few times happen in a BL manga (but usually it is a high school level story)
  • After that, he caught a cold? Drank water or pill, and somehow, he could hear the inner sound of ML (who is like "uu, MC is so cute", "MC is pretty today", etc.)
Then I stopped reading it

If this is shounen-ai, and they are supposed to be the MC and ML, after MC hates the ML he will love back the ML because he hears the inner sound of the ML. Okay, I'm done.
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