Translation quality is fine, but the story isn't good. Biggest issue is the female disciple is underage and the MC is like 25. It's weird how often the author tries to highlight her looks and figure, but then tries to sidestep the issue of her being underage.

The word "clumsy" in the title, is very understated. She's dumber than Naruto, and Naruto likes to eat instant noodles for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. She's not a bad character, but the author made her too dumb for comedic effect and to make her... more>> over rely on the MC.

This novel has way too much modern technology and references to pop culture than needed. The MC has a fridge, a shower, soda, crops/food similar to ones found in our world, and more. I took a sneak peak into a later chapter and he uses "I'm Batman" as a code word. The MC talks about Nobel, the scientist, and lectures his disciple about physics. It's too distracting from the setting of a cultivation world.

The MC is a perfect and all knowledgeable being. Like I mentioned before, he has a fridge. He created it with "formations". The MC has a personalized sword that he created with his blacksmithing skills somehow. He has a shower that can pour hot/cold water. He's one of the strongest cultivators in his realm, comparable to top disciples. He's suppose to be just an alchemist though. Oh yeah, he uses science to have unprecedented achievements in alchemy. Oh and he doesn't like cultivation caves, so he just made a two story modern house.

This would have been okay to read as a novel about a cute romance and not take it too seriously, but the fact that the disciple is underage is too creepy. It comes off as more of a grooming story than a romance story. <<less

The novel is mainly a Rom Com in a cultivation setting. It is generic and bland at best. There are good behind the scene schemes but they are never truly explored and are left to die. So this is mainly about the romantic relationship between the teacher and his disciple.

It would have been a longer novel with more excitement if the author wasn't trying to promote China's reunification efforts in their Xanxia novel... they ended up failing both. Read the spoiler for more.

I can't be 100% sure, but I was able to discover signs that this novel used AI to assist in the writing. The AI hallucinated in small parts of the diaglogue.

Though there is a little bit of ham-fisted references to modern day products, overall the story is cute and the characters are likeable.

The aesthetic is so-far calm and relaxing. The series is completed in its COO (520 chapters) which gives me some degree of confidence that the writer wrapped things up and ended the story properly.

The translation is quite good.

I'm very much looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.

The novel is only good up to chapter 80 and after encountering the demon tree, it is literal cr*p.

Seriously, it uses all the tropes in CNs and it won't let up. One after another we get unreasonable people trying to kill our MC and the protag just keeps on making dumb decisions to continue trying to get the dao fruit. Risking everything he ever had: life, body, limb and even his disciple. (This continues for 60+ chapters)

Anyway, I could go on about the idiocy, but at this point I've... more>> given up. The plot paves the way and our MC is just some godly figure that always makes his way through everything. With zero consequences with his actions and POV switches that just highlights how dashing and handsome he is, you can expect a wish fulfillment.

A bland story that was only interesting due to our MC utilizing formation to make his slice of life comfortable until the red herring reared its ugly head and made it into a shonen.

2.1/5. <<less

Just drop the tag of overpowered protagonist and protagonist strong from the start

He's too weak he's scared to fight and there's overpowered...

The MC good he's cultivation strong and he's talent good but if he just can fight he just running or scared from the fight there's no meaning for MC like this just cultivate to have relaxing life

When he breakthrough the golden core realm was very excited he's base very powerful and in the end he just scared....

I really wanted to like this, but the translation quality goes straight into the bin and to me at least becomes un readable. Terms for realms places and even names get to the point where it seems worse than some MTL I’ve read. I’d say 4/5 for the story but it’s a drop just cause of the translation quality