Drunken Thief Buys S*ave Girl

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A hangover leads to a shared life between a thief and a s*ave girl.

Harris is an adventurer who works as a thief and scout, a job that is often shunned due to poor reputation.

One day he gets drunk and buys a s*ave girl, Tiana. Tiana, who had been treated badly and not given enough food until then, comes to adore Harris, who treats her kindly, as her master. Harris, who had been hoping that Tiana would grow up to be a beautiful woman, is gradually drawn to her because of her innocence.

Harris’ life changes drastically when he begins living with Tiana: warm meals, freshly washed clothes, and interaction with the townspeople who had never come close to him before. On the other hand, he finds himself in more and more troublesome situations, will he manages to escape from them with his skill and tact…?

This is the story of the “rebirth” of a shabby thief, which begins with an encounter with a s*ave girl.

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A Drunk Thief Bought a S*ave Girl
Yopparai Touzoku, Dorei no Shoujo wo Kau
Yopparai tōzoku, dorei no shōjo o kau
酔っぱらい盗賊、奴隷の少女を買う
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icerror
icerror
Mar 17, 2023
Status: --
Relatively okay, despite its shortcoming.

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To start, the chapters are short, too short even. Brevity may be the soul of wit, still with barely 400 words, something is going to give - unfortunately the MC and plot aren't takers. There's no hint of description for the thief, save that he is one. Plot progression also suffers, there are 2 time skip in the 5 pilot chapters - one of which doesn't have any build up and proper payoff.

I have minor gripes about the little girl troupe. The ungenerous word count is already misgiving enough without two thirds of a chapter devoting to the girl.

Speaking of good bits, I think the author did well with world building. Even with how short the chapters are, the world seems alive and cultered: there's celebration and national/religous holiday, how high-class brothel use rose carving to show price instead of something more boorish, a secondary s*ave markets to deal with subpar goods...

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Tldr: short word count kills. Good world building, but the payoff might be killed due to the attention to the little girl. I will check on this later, but for now, enjoyable read 3/5 <<less
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