After Breaking up With the Boyfriend I Secretly Loved

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After three years of being together, Zuo Li and her boyfriend Lin Zhiluo, whom she had secretly loved for seven years, broke up when his childhood sweetheart returned from abroad.

Lin Zhiluo immediately broke up with her without any hesitation.

Her three years of emotions felt like a joke.

Can’t write synopsis (It’s bad):

It’s essentially a story about closing off one’s heart and guarding oneself against love after a breakup but then facing the violent knocking of someone trying to break in.

The male lead has been decided, but I won’t reveal who it is (I’m just a bit mischievous!)

Okay, it’s pretty obvious, and I won’t say it, but everyone can probably guess OvO.

It should be short, I’ll try to write as briefly as possible

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和暗恋成真的男友分手后
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  1. Not Bad But Could Be Better
  2. When I'm Drunk Translating BG Smut
  3. my recommendation

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Nom de Plume
Nom de Plume rated it
October 16, 2023
Status: c10
5 stars for a few highlights in an otherwise simple short story

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- A likable 'love rival'; no really, only the ex was scummy for not taking his relationship seriously enough. The girl he liked one sidedly scolds him very refreshingly on behalf of the other girl on her return

- A new love full of laughter and respect

- Doesn't have a perfect first time. Man or**sms before they can really start

- story ends at good spot but still feels too short

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There is only one chapter of smut (finale) so feel free to read just the first 9 chapters if you only want the plot. I was a little surprised by something revealed at the beginning of the last chapter. His choice itself was not shocking, just that there wasn't any foreshadowing and it seemed to be an interesting way for the author to kick off the only smex scene hahaha.

Spoiler

She apparently doesn't want children and so he runs off to secretly get a ligation. There are indications that some time has passed so hopefully he has fully passed the recovery period considering what happens next.

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His friends seem interesting. It was a little disappointing that we don't find out more about his life. <<less
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chande
chande rated it
January 13, 2024
Status: Completed
I think this story was quite good so I don't know why the rating was low. These were few things that I like about this novel:

    • MC was decisive and although she still loved her ex, she didn't want to get back together because she didn't want to be a second choice
    • MC didn't instantly fall in love with ML and vice versa. They also took their time to get together
    • MC and ML didn't fall into l*ve making spree right after she broke up and when they just got together
    • ML was a green flag character and he was so considerate of MC
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      He didn't even hesitate to do vasectomy just because MC didn't want a child

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Of course this story also had its flaw such as lacking of details and background story. And there was also no sense of time so everything felt happened a bit fast. But it's understandable since this was just a short story.
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Bookworm_Sueweetie
Bookworm_Sueweetie rated it
December 3, 2023
Status: Completed
This is just an enjoyable fast read short novel. No drama, no complications and the leads were actually funny. If you looking for smut (due to tag), it's not for you. Snusnu was only in the last chapter.

I like the FL (Zhuo Li), she's decisive and strong minded especially after her breakup. Meanwhile, ML (Fu Yuan Xi) was like narcissistic but good guy, he turned like puppy in the end lol

The only con was I still find ML's background being mysterious... and I find both leads didn't really not know... more>> each other deeply. <<less
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