Decent. Like most such novels, it glosses over events and interactions, but still provides enough detail that it doesn't feel like reading a bullet point list.

My main issue is something I noticed later; it begins to read like a non-edited MTL. Genders get flipped, as do character names, and skill names become inconsistent even within the sames chapter. For example, Thunder Aura has about six alternate names like Thunder Armor, while Miniaturization is Dwarfism half the time.

It's a mid novel. The evolution is a bit quick pace as the evolution is very rushed, too powerful and less thought within each evolution. The biggest problem is the evolution monster is that it's very inconsistent with it's idea of evolution.

If there's one lesson to make evolution novel, is that the evolution should make sense otherwise it become a digimon wanna be.