The story has some issues. I do feel that there is something here of interest. I'd say the two biggest issues would be how easily the Main Character accepts everything and the Grammar. I can easily get over her accepting everything if the story can keep my focus off of it. The biggest issue Is that it can be kind of obnoxious to read with the grammar. Just slow the pacing down and do some grammar correction and i'd say you have an alright story on your hands. Might even... more>> be pretty good later on.

Edit: 1/7/19

It finally updated with two new chapters on Christmas day and the Second of January, I ended up deciding to reread the story and for the most part, I still have issues with the grammar, Pacing and how easily the MC accepts everything, She literally killed herself and reincarnated but there aren't any emotional scars. The has set up this tragic past but isn't doing a thing with it.

As I was reading I couldn't help but auto fix the grammar, If I knew how to edit these pages then I might just edit them to make the dialogue and writing seem a lot more natural.

As of now, Claire is kind of a blank sleight, And not in the way that it's because it's from her emotional baggage, But because she just does stuff and doesn't really show much emotion. We never really get her reacting to things besides maybe her finding out about s*aves in this world. I find it kind of funny that the character that is a s*ave and more of a silent type has more character than the MC.

It's alright, But with the three main issues being Grammar, Writing and Pacing. It really gets held back, If it was just one of these three things then I wouldn't have an issue with it. <<less