The Royal Assassin & The Princess

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“Kenzo, a skilled assassin in ancient Japan, falls in love with Princess Akemi, forbidden by her tyrannical father, the king. Their secret love blossoms, but they are separated when the king’s soldiers capture Akemi. Kenzo embarks on a perilous journey to rescue her, and after overcoming numerous challenges, they are reunited. Together, they escape the king’s grasp, vowing to forge their own destiny filled with love and freedom.”

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王室の暗殺者と王女
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09/21/23 FantasyNovels4U oneshot
Review
2 Reviews


JamesBunny
JamesBunny
Sep 22, 2023
Status: c1
C+ for effort, writing a story is hard, HOWEVER:

1. This feels rushed even by one shot standards, would of loved to see several events elaborated on more.

2. The beginning has a major plot hole (possible translator error but we are told to not review that) ... more>>
Spoiler

ok so “He was to infiltrate a rival clan's stronghold, eliminate their leader, and bring back a stolen artifact that held the key to the kingdom's power.” ——> “As Kenzo slipped through the shadows, he saw her—the princess, Akemi” ——-> “He had stolen into Akemi's chambers to retrieve the artifact.” ——-> “The king was a cunning man who saw more than he let on, and he suspected that his loyal assassin had betrayed him in the worst way—by falling in love with his own daughter.”

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chande
chande
Oct 08, 2023
Status: Completed
This story felt like a summary of the assassin's tale rather than the story of the assassin itself. Everything happened so fast without any details. There's also the lack of dialogue between the characters so the story felt so plain to read. And although the story had a happy ending, it didn't feel like one at all.

Spoiler

Because they would still constantly live on the run for as long as the king's still alive.

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