The Fenrir’s Knight Unparalleled Fluffy Circumstances ~My New Boss is a Dog~

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Melodia was a healer and a royal knight from the Fifth Patrol Division. On the night of her 18th birthday, her beastman blood suddenly awakened and she took on the form of a wolf. Melodia, who had no inkling she was a descendant of a beastman for all 18 years of her life, was astonished.

Melodia, who couldn’t use magic while she was stuck in her wolf form at night, was transferred to the Fenrir Knight Squad, the First Cavalry Division where they only had day shift.

From then on, she had an unexpected encounter. To her surprise, her boss was a talking dog. Moreover, the dog, which Melodia had just met for the first time, suddenly told her.

“Hm~ What an interesting girl. I will take you as my bride.”

A doting ML fantasy story with DogxDog(?) couple?!

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フェンリル騎士隊のたぐいまれなるモフモフ事情 ~異動先の上司が犬でした~
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05/20/23 Shanghai Fantasy c44
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03/30/23 Shanghai Fantasy c39
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03/12/23 Shanghai Fantasy c37
03/04/23 Shanghai Fantasy c36
02/27/23 Shanghai Fantasy c35
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chande
chande rated it
June 8, 2023
Status: Completed
I think, this story could be considered as okay but that was it. There's nothing special from the plot itself but the dogs as protagonists (although not entirely) were a plus for me. Aside from that, the conflicts and romance weren't built well enough so I felt a bit bored throughout the story. But overall, it's still okay to pass the time since the chapters weren't that many.
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starcake
starcake rated it
March 22, 2024
Status: Completed
2 stars: This story is barely-okay very flimsy fluff that will give you expectation whiplash based on the summary, setup and foreshadowing that are never fulfilled, poor pacing, and plot details that ultimately don't matter. The story is also shorter than it appears since the main story is over by chapter 37 and the rest is all random very short non-chronological extras that do not expand on the story, they're like the one-or-two page extras at the very end of a manga that are basically mini-gags or cutesy vignettes. The... more>> translation is pretty good at least.

Let's start with the unfulfilled expectations and meaningless setup, which isn't a spoiler because none of it ends up mattering. Melodia is a healer-mage-knight/Magic Soldier, and as badass as that sounds, she is not at all badass. She's the lowest in the pecking order of her squad, and based on her performance throughout the novel, I question why she made it into the ranks of knighthood given that she's easily distracted, unaware of her surroundings, not a good physical fighter or a good mage for that matter, and is such a mediocre healer she can't do more than heal a small cut.

Then she turns into a wolf one night. Shock! She didn't know she's a beastman! And you will be shocked! To read through this entire novel and realize that her being a beastman that is forced every night to turn into a wolf has pretty much zero importance or impact on the story. She could have just as easily turned into a potted plant every night for all that it really matters. Although the summary and early story make a point of the fact that she can't cast magic in her wolf form, the number of times this is actually a problem in the story is zero. There's setup about her parents' background and the existence of other beastmen and more secrets hinted at, and then we find out nothing more. After the main story ended I thought maybe the extras would get into some of that stuff but nope, they're all random filler.

Let me repeat: Melodia turning into a wolf doesn't matter. All the backstory and plot stuff involving her beastman heritage mean nothing, she could have had a secret elf lineage or her ancestor did a favor for a demigod or been a baked potato spirit and just tweak a couple heritage details accordingly and everything would have been exactly the same. In fact, her being a baked potato spirit would have at least been more novel than being a wolf.

She does not ever at any point use her wolf form to do anything meaningful, nor does it cause her any real trouble or raise any conflict. Instead, very literally she just eats dinner, plays fetch, and goes to sleep every night. She does not fight in her wolf form, or use it to escape trouble, or pretend to be a dog in order to sneak somewhere, or anything at all. Her wolf form does not cause her any problems other than oh noes fearing that people will find out her secret and persecute her and now she has to find a job that doesn't have a night shift and that's it. She faces zero persecution and the people who do find out her terrible secret are enamored because omg they love dogs.

For more expectation backlash, the first chunk of chapters had me stopping and going back to reread the tags on this story because it has all the setup of being yuri or shoujo ai at first, with her captain, a woman named Millie who is the only member of her squad who is nice to her and looks out for her, finding her after she transforms into a wolf for the first time, mistaking her for an abandoned dog, and taking her back to her personal lodgings where Millie bathes wolf-Melodia in rose-scented soap, grooms her and tells her she's beautiful, cooks high-quality meat for her, and has her sleep beside her at night, only for Melodia to wake up the next morning naked and confused in her captain's bed.

But! No h*mo, Millie is just a dog lover and Melodia is soon transferred to the Fenrir Knight Squad First Cavalry Unit because with her transformation came super magic powers where she can heal mortal wounds instantly so everywhere wants to hire her.

And nope, those super magic powers make almost zero impact on the story. I think she uses them maybe once. Otherwise, it seems like her magic is just normal now. It's like as the author was writing they forgot that Melodia was magically mediocre at first AND then later forgot that she supposedly gained 50 levels after her beastman transformation.

More expectation backlash: The Fenrir Knight Squad First Cavalry Unit consists of exactly two people: The dog-form duke and his younger brother. I think it's said once and/or implied later that there used to be more people, but they all apparently died fighting the Wolf Witch that the Fenrir family has been fighting for generations, like, I'm pretty sure it said a thousand years at some point. But anyway, their "squad" now numbers three with Melodia.

They are not a cavalry unit. Melodia brings her horse with her, which had some setup in the first chapters of her adopting the temperamental angry horse that nobody could ride, but of course she bonds with it immediately and the horse is transferred with her and we see it approximately two more times for the rest of the novel since most of the time she's just walking around or riding a carriage. There is no mounted combat and very little mounted transportation, and the horse does not play a major or even supporting role in this story despite the initial setup.

As for being a Fenrir Knight, what they do is basically Boxcar-children level sleuthing, handling the cases that the normal knight squads fail to solve like finding missing people or investigating jewel robberies. Secretly though they only take cases that they think involve the Wolf Witch, which as often as not turn out not to involve her. Detective Conan this ain't.

So they're not really what you'd think of as "knights" or a "cavalry unit", and Melodia spends 95% of the story in frilly dresses pampered like a noble lady since the duke wants to marry her and basically treats her like his fiancee and not a soldier or his subordinate.

The Wolf Witch stuff is vastly disappointing. I'll spoiler tag this but it's mostly about what you DON'T learn and weird implausibility stuff.

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The story actually reveals very little about her, and despite dropping hints about deeper connections to the wolf beastman tribe and the Fenrir family, there's nothing more than hints and leading lines where you think are going to be expanded on later but they never are. So what you get is a couple of sentences here and there about oh maybe she's from here, and apparently she cursed the duke's family because of this, and Melodia's family maybe knew etc, and speculation the Wolf Witch has ties to the wolf beastman tribe which itself is mysteriously hinted at and also never gotten into.

The story sets the Wolf Witch up as this huge antagonist who has been preying on the kingdom for a thousand years and who has cursed the duke's bloodline to the point that generation after generation of dukes have dedicated their lives and the very existence of the Fenrir Knight Squad to hunting her down and yet the story implausibly states that her existence is secret and the public is completely unaware of her and thinks witches are just legends. Supposedly the kingdom managed to keep her secret because the ducal and royal bloodlines are related and so the kings have always suppressed news and classified reports involving the Wolf Witch. Oh, and the Fenrir Knights are a private force belonging solely to the Fenrir Duke so the official kingdom military/knights have never been directly involved with hunting down the witch or apparently have any knowledge about her.

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Here is an actual spoiler about the end game, which is beyond incredibly s*upid and undercuts half the already-stuttering drive of the plot:

Spoiler

So they make a big deal out of the fact that they've been hunting the Wolf Witch for a thousand years and have to kill her in person, but most of the time they only end up killing her magical "clones" that they hunt down after a crime/mu*der/kidnapping has already been committed. Then the end of the story reveals that actually, the duke's family has long known that the Wolf Witch's home base is in the swamp, but they gave up trying to attack her there because over the centuries, every attempt ended in failure with most of the people killed or vanished.

Additionally, they never requested help from the kingdom/other knight units to take down this evil, evil witch that's been haunting the kingdom for centuries because of their own pride and also they just never thought to request backup from the kingdom, and they were afraid that the other knights would look down on them or be scared because of the duke's curse that turned him into a giant dog.

So they knew, they KNEW where she was hiding, but never thought to, I don't know, burn the whole swamp down, or work in tandem with the kingdom to at least set up a perimeter patrol around the swamp, or request a bunch of powerful mages as backup to help the knights kill the witch, or... nope. Their whole plan for generations amounted to, "Eh, the swamp is too hard for our single squad to handle, guess we'll just keep doing what we've been unsuccessfully doing for hundreds of years, which is wait for the Wolf Witch to kidnap or kill someone and then try to track her down, even though 99% of the time it's just a clone and we won't actually kill her."

When Melodia suggests they ask for help from the king, the duke and his brother are mind-blown and reluctant because they're afraid nobody will want to help them, because both were totally unaware of how all other knights revere the Fenrir Knight Squad with awe and desperately want to join them. Needless to say, they get way more volunteers than they hoped for and all of the highest quality and everyone gets along famously.

Then when they finally infiltrate the witch's decrepit keep, Melodia admires the giant crystal chandelier overhead, and someone else shouts a warning and the duke and his men barely leap back in time to avoid it crashing down and killing them. The other person is like, "I noticed Magic Soldier Melodia looking at the chandelier so I looked too and saw it was moving and that she must have realized it was a trap, so I shouted the warning!" And Melodia just kind of nods and is embarrassed because really she was just thinking how pretty it was, while at the same time she's horrified because no wonder previous knight units never returned from the swamp, they all must have been killed by this very same, very devious trap!

I...I can't even...

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This story also couldn't decide if it wanted to be high fantasy investigation-adventure or an otome game (albeit one with only one love interest), and ended up going for more of the latter because most of the story is Melodia dressing up, dining with the duke, and stammering and blushing and refusing the duke's inappropriate attentions, which itself was kinda weird because he's giant 2-meter dog that can talk and doesn't have a human form due to the curse, so it's, uh, kind of hard to stop your brain feeling vaguely off-put by him slyly putting his head on Melodia's lap or talking about how much he wants to marry her. I mean, unless that's your kink, which is fine and all, but you're gonna be disappointed if it is.

About him being cursed full time into a dog, and her turning into a wolf at night, and how things pan out:

Spoiler

The curse is broken before they finally hunt down the Wolf Witch (and the breaking itself is vague and unsatisfying in its depiction) and he never returns to dog form. And no, he and Melodia never get it on or do anything questionable in animal form. There. I said it, you degenerates. It's not like I kept on reading with a secret thread of WTF-curiosity as motivation while wondering if the story was going to actually go there, ahem.

In one of the extras, Melodia gets pregnant and gives birth to three puppies but it's from the maid's POV in diary entries and she's shocked and wonders if Melodia turns into wolf every sundown... and bedroom activities are usually at night... and she decides NOPE immediately and stops thinking about it. Also, the pregnancy is summarized in one or two lines, like the maid writes an entry that Melodia-sama is pregnant, and then the next entry states that Melodia-sama gave birth to three puppies.

So there are no details about how the pregnancy works with her changing forms, and the story sort of acknowledges potential bestiality and then immediately veers away from it. Um, great. (Also, no, we never get any actual extra chapters about the children or Melodia and the duke's life after marriage or as parents.)

It gets weirder because the duke has spent nearly his entire life as a dog and retains doglike habits as a human, such as running up to Melodia and licking her face, and being excited whenever he hears the word "walk", and other things that I think are supposed to be comedic and cute but come off as kind of creepy and weird. Why would he get excited when he hears the word "walk" unless everyone around him treated him like a dog and took him on walks? Then my brain starts working too much and wondering how the **** he can walk on two legs immediately, use a sword and dining utensils and other things that require the use of hands and fingers, and knows social cues and how to behave like a nobleman? How on earth have the dukes kept this dog-curse a secret for a thousand years???

I think maybe I've forgotten some of the details of his curse and background because they were probably throwaway one-liners. He was the puppy that Melodia found and adopted as a child, but I'm pretty sure in one of the extras where he's acting creepily doglike Melodia states that he spent his entire adult life in dog form. So I guess he periodically turned into a dog throughout his childhood, and then became stuck in that form when he got older? I can't tell if I don't remember, or if the story was unclear or contradicted itself as it has done with other details.

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The romance is fluff, yes, and I guess sort of cute if generic? But there's nothing there. I never had any sense that Melodia really felt anything for the duke, nor him for her, despite the story insisting that her pounding heart when he was in danger means she must love him as well as the terribly glaringly obvious "secret" backstory that's telegraphed from the very first chapter where child Melodia adopts a puppy that runs away a month later and she has pined after her lost dog ever since.

Even the climax of the story is lackluster and poorly paced despite trying so hard to be action-packed and emotional and also kind of confusing in regards to what's going on and why it happened. I read it three times and couldn't quite figure it out, and I'm not sure if it's the translation (which was otherwise pretty good) or if the original text was just so generic it became vague. It was also quite short considering the lead up. Or quite long, if you consider that the last 8 or so chapters are titled "The Last Battle", and most of those chapters involve Melodia eating dinner with the duke and playing fetch with him in wolf form, and dressing up in her Fenrir Knight uniform for the first time, and chatting with her maid, and... you get the picture.

This story wasn't great. Even with the expectation whiplash it had the potential to be good, but it never fulfilled that promise. I kept reading because I was so repeatedly thrown off in the beginning that I kept reading more because I was confused and also like, Um okay this is very different from what I was expecting but I do like fantasy shoujo and animal transformation stories so I should give it a chance. And it kept adding new plot elements like the Wolf Witch and Melodia's heritage and dropping hints about this and that, and... yeah, 90% of the stuff teased throughout the story doesn't come to fruition.

Here are some loose ends that were set up and foreshadowed but were ultimately never developed or explained:

Spoiler
  • Whether or not the secret Lou Garou/wolf beastmen village still exists somewhere, and whether or not other beastmen (wolf or otherwise) exist in society. This also includes Melodia have a complete and total disinterest in finding out more about her heritage or investigating if there are other beastman and I don't mean she proclaims any of this, I mean that the story literally never even brings this up as a topic. She's just not curious and it's never mentioned.
  • The details of the alleged relationship between the Wolf Witch and the original first cursed duke: We get a sketchy speculated summary of a few lines, and I thought we'd find out the real story with tragic/dramatic details, but nope.
  • The actual identity of the Wolf Witch: Was she also a wolf beastman and/or had ties to the Lou Garou tribe? It's also heavily implied but never actually confirmed that she had something to do with Melodia's parents' deaths, and Melodia's parents left behind half of a secret method to kill the Wolf Witch and a s*upidly vague warning to Melodia to beware of witches. How did her parents know about the Wolf Witch and come across or develop this method to kill her?
  • The other half of the secret magic was in the possession of the current duke's father, who knew Melodia's parents, and while it's made clear that they did know each other, it's unclear how or why, and to what extent they were collaborating against the Wolf Witch. We never find out anything further than that. I guess maybe the parents knew about the Wolf Witch from the duke? But again, how did they get to know the duke when it seems like they would have never normally crossed paths considering their different statuses?
  • For that matter, where did this ultimate light magic come from? How did they discover it, and why did each of them have half of it? It doesn't seem like any of the three of them (Melodia's parents and the old duke) were powerful mages or academic researchers, and nobody else seems to know anything about it.
  • There's multiple hints raised that the duke's bloodline possibly has some connection with the Lou Garou (they are the FENRIR dukes, after all) and the original cursed duke was apparently intimately (?) involved with the Wolf Witch, but yeah no that plot thread is never woven into anything.
  • How exactly the duke's bloodline has been unbroken for generations if they get cursed into the form of a dog since at least childhood and apparently permanently as they get older. Again with the hinting at bestiality but never fully addressing it. The duke's younger brother isn't a dog so it seems like the curse only affects the duke or maybe heir apparent (but the story doesn't say), so maybe the dukes either had children very very young (ew, don't want to think about that) or had siblings who had offspring, and then the duke's oldest nephew inherited the curse? Again, the story never says, and it's a pretty weird and complicated setup if so, and also weird because you'd think in a thousand years, things would have changed in the Fenrir family as far as inheritance goes and the duke would have been a figurehead with title in name only as the second son would be the actual power and... yeah, I've already put more thought into this than the author did.
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That's just what I thought of off the top of my head. There's definitely more but I can feel my brain shutting down from frustration and annoyance at all the loose ends dangling in the wind.

It makes me wonder if the author originally intended the story to be much longer but then decided to just wrap things up, loose ends be damned.

Yet I kept on reading to the end. Nobody in the story really annoyed me and I didn't hate anyone in particular, which is rare, though in this case it's not because the characters are great, it's because they're inoffensively generic. It's readable at best and if you can completely turn your brain off and overlook all the plot holes and inconsistencies, maybe you'll enjoy it. <<less
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WenWen
WenWen rated it
June 30, 2022
Status: c7
It's enjoyable so far but since there aren't a lot of chapters there isn't much to tell. I've rated it as a 3 because the introduction of the story is alright. I'll have to come back to this once they have more chapters.
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