This has to be one of the most disturbing, disgusting, dumbest and most insulting fanfictions of Naruto I've ever read.

The fact that you not only sexualized a 12-year-old girl having her wear lingerie but also then used her for status only is awful.

Also having a random as Shopkeeper able to infiltrate a clans compound who all specialize it having superior vision and have a history with enemies kidnapping their children is really dumb.

Finally your portrayal of Gai and Lee's hard work into unlocking the inner gate by them not being... more>> "tough enough" is the most insulting sh*t I've ever read screw you for doing that. <<less

I can't understand why so many voted for 1 star only after all this is a fanfiction thus there should be something different from the main story. It isn't the best Naruto fanfiction (I only know 1 other) but it is very good.

But the Translation is very bad you dont understand some passages and there are many mistakes.

It's really interesting, he kissed Hinata because he thought it was a dream. The plot is that a boy who has suffered in his past enters the body of Naruto, so far did not receive blessings or divine powers, only has the memories of the plot. This makes one can get easier in the position of the protagonist, and think What would one do?

The chapter in the earlier maybe bad in spacing, and words used is in mess because it is machine translated or the translation is translating in paragraph not word by word.

The latest chapter some improvement in space with same miss match word and little bit better to read and understand.