Secret Potion

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Jaly found a mysterious book inside their school library. It’s a book which teaches one how to make a love potion.

And she will use this love option on her crush who has never noticed her before.

Will it be effective? Or will it embarrass her in front in front of her ultimate crush?

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Diary of an Ugly Girl (1)
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Date Group Release
08/20/17 Sharramycats oneshot
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Mikodami
Mikodami rated it
August 3, 2022
Status: Completed
This (very) short story is actually pretty funny, kind of satire, if you don't sweat it too much. Since it's kinda fantasy, it's not really logical but from a story telling pov it's okay. And the conclusion is -- even if predictable to some extent -- unexpected.
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chande
chande rated it
May 20, 2022
Status: Completed
MC and ML really suited each other... in a bad way.

Spoiler

Both used a love potion to attract each other. I mean, what happened to normal courtship? Why resort to love potion when they didn't even try to do it themselves first?

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JJthePandaBear
JJthePandaBear rated it
February 18, 2018
Status: oneshot
I really don't wanna be mean about this, but this story was ungodly bad. Like actually. I myself am a teenage young'un who often craves for the good ol' cheesy romance. But I'm sorry, I just cringed so so hard to this. Just... Nah...

The plot just goes in a straight-line, y'know? Nothing extremely special about it...

I suppose some people like it though and that's understandable; this story just don't float my boat.
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