Yeah, so, I just came here to comment on the title.

58... that title is a total of 58 words! A normal title is less than 10, but this novel really went above and beyond in its naming skills, huh?

Well, I suppose that the title's purpose has been achieved anyway. I read the first few chapters out of curousity and it was actually pretty good. The translation wasn't bad, albeit a little confusing at times. The story progression isn't rushed... but there also isn't much plot to rush either...I like FL... more>> a lot and the ML is fun to read and actually has a little personality to him.

Honestly, this story just seems like a typical love-dove, feel good story. Of course, I'm basing that judgment on that on the very few chapters that I have read already as well as the novel's current tags. If you want a story with substance, this is probably not your story. Still, I like it a lot. I'll continue to read it as this review now. <<less

The premise is interesting but so far the ML has the type of personality I dislike even on female protagonists. Instead of being feminine he's just kinda spineless. I think if you don't think too hard about things it won't be a bad read. Personally I thought way too hard about it. I'll refrain from rating this till i've read further but I will say I like the FL already.

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I am surprised the capture targets were willing to out themselves as not virg*ns like that though. Also him kneeling was probably the same as admitting guilt which was dumb. If he'd tried to stand up for himself a little it would have being nice.

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I don't know if it's the fault of the translator or the author, but the constant switching between third and first person makes this almost impossible to read.

The story itself isn't terrible, although the various names also disrupt the emersion (who would name their child Muffin, or why the hell would a country be called Sacrifice?).

One thing that the title and summary don't properly convey is just how feminine the protagonist is. The fact that the genders of the MC and heroine are swapped might almost not matter. It reads... more>> exactly like a regular story from a female perspective. IMO that twist went so far that there's no point to it anymore. <<less

The MC is rubbish and not just because he is effeminate. I went in expecting that and he is one of the worst i've seen. A good effeminate male character isn't a totally spineless wimp, which is what he is. A Brother's Price which is somewhat similar with the romance dynamics has a good effeminate main character. Who is submissive and feminine but is willing to fight and kill when necessary which this guy isn't even in the most extreme circumstances.