Childish Flower

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This is a story where you love me but I don’t love you. A sweet story about an alpha and an omega.

He did not cherish him in the past, wantonly trampling on the other party’s affection, cutting the other party with bruises all over. How bastard was he, that he was able to exhaust the other party’s affectionate, and the other party only requested for freedom.

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未熟之花[ABO]
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Alit
New Alit rated it
November 3, 2019
Status: Completed
This story is a bittersweet one. Made me cry so many times. Seeing as this story is also relatively short the charaxter development and plot are both well thoughtout and executed.
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Heny
New Heny rated it
October 25, 2019
Status: extra 2
Why I Can't give them 10 ⭐️??

I love their story so much. Foremost the story hardship of Mujin when he live alone while pregnant... I'm crying so much. When Gao have misunderstanding and slap his face, my heart feel ache so much
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TheLadyWhoLikesBoyLove
TheLadyWhoLikesBoyLove rated it
March 19, 2019
Status: Completed
1st of all, the summary might be just a sentence but it says a lot in the story. I think it is perfect and there's no reason to change it in future.

2nd, don't be hesitant to read this, this is not your typical omegaverse. The story is so hard to read in a way that every sentences and chapters makes my heart bleed.
Spoiler

its a happy ending

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3rd, the story also shows a lesson. Please learn to open up your heart and that not everything you see is true, and just because someone wasnt able to satisfy your expectation doesnt mean that person decieved you or your love.

It was a great short story, I really like stories like these. I'm really gratefull for the translator for picking this one up. Even though I've read it thru mtl, I will still support the translator.

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I actually hate the younger brother because he's such an innocent jerk, MC saved him when they were still a child and he was still able to be ahppy go lucky even though they grew up and his older brother (the mc) is so shy and timid

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The ML was almost an as*hole throughout the story, BUT if you put your feet in his shoes you'll realize why he acts that way

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our MC was given a justice dont worry, and this story is amazing and simple

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I highly recommend this to everyone

5 stars rating
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redxx
redxx rated it
April 13, 2019
Status: Completed
I will recommend you to read this when you are looking for a short and a angsty read. And I give this novel around 4-4.5stars. Because I am alittle disappointed with some aspects.

So this is basically:

A simple and short ABO story about childhood friends. ML who could not forget his first love and MC who wants his love.

... more>> There's the usual plots you would expect but I won't say its exaggerated or makes you annoyed.

MC is an innocent fluff and ML's behaviour is more than understandable. Some may felt he was a bastard but considering that

Spoiler

it has been mentioned ML really loved his first love (childhood friend, so thats like a decade of love) to the point of imagining them getting married and marked. Isnt his actions justifiable? Other than an unecessary slap to the pregnant MC.

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MTL is quite reliable for those who wants to read ahead. Yes, yes I am the translator so trust me its a easy MTL read...

you dont need to mtl I Am Done 🤪 <<less
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sleepingjay
sleepingjay rated it
June 28, 2019
Status: Completed
The story is pretty much what it says on the tin: a cliche "I like you, you don't love me story". There are points where I thought it would stray a bit from cliches and would be more unique, but in the end it never did.

I did cry for the MC, his pain is pretty well done. I was utterly disappointed with the reconciliation though.

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MC gave ML divorce papers for him to sign because he was done with the pain. ML tried to reject this by saying he loved him, but wasn't able to convince MC (and himself) that he fell in love. So ML just... gave up and signed the divorce. Why did he give up in just one try? I was annoyed by this. He hurt MC so badly, why did he feel that it would be quick to convince MC? He should have given them both time, and thought over things properly before rushing to MC. At this point he was still acting like he wanted MC to continue showering him with love, yet couldn't say he loved MC, even though a lot of his actions say he's falling in love. Instead of self-reflecting, he signed the divorce, choosing the easy way out of the problem.

Then, he still won't give up on MC and kept bothering him. He doesn't really do anything particularly heartwarming, just "husbandly duties" like picking MC up from work, etc. And ML was emotionally manipulative, using their baby to make MC accept ML's presence.

Then during fckng estrus, he "persuaded" (lbr to me it was: forcing) MC to marry him again. When after estrus MC refused the marriage, ML again... used s*x to persuade him to agree. And MC agreed (of fckng course).

It's a disappointment that instead of a proper courting and sincere apologies over a long period of time, there was only explanations and apologies in bed. I felt that ML was a coward who never faced his problem, and though this was acknowledged in the story, it never felt like he actually fixed this problem. He couldn't even talk properly with MC on MC's terms, instead resorting to s*x until MC gave in. I never felt like the ML deserved MC back. Even though ML was the one that supposedly regretted everything, it was still time and time again MC giving in. When ML didn't love him, MC had to follow his wishes. When ML loved him, MC still had to follow his wishes.

This is in no way romantic.

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I don't agree with a bunch of the content, but it was engaging and well-written for what it is. The author's writing style is quite pretty, but the slightly awkward translation does detract a bit. <<less
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Honey B
Honey B rated it
May 22, 2019
Status: Completed
Though The story was well written, I'm not a fan of painful love stories... and it was painful. 😖

The story kept me interested until the end, no doubt about it.

The alpha was typical stubborn, and sometimes rash. The omega is the typical meek type, but so withdrawn that he couldn't express himself well. And he rarely speaks. And therefore a big ginormous misunderstanding blooms and pollinated the whole plot. Though I saw it coming, it was still painful to watch... 😓
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Acidelia
Acidelia rated it
May 13, 2019
Status: Completed
I came into this novel knowing that I should expect a lot of heartache and tears. Yet, even with that knowledge, I was not prepared for all the tears that came out of my eyes.

The MC has such a pure way of viewing the world that I bawled my eyes out while reading- to the point my undereyes became the softest they've ever been.

Anyways, let me warn you that this story doesn't have a lot of 'fluffy' chapters. Instead, what it has, besides agonising and heart-wrenching events, are gentle moments... more>> and growth in both characters and how they see their relationship.

TLDR: 5/5 would cry again. <<less
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rainydayromantic
rainydayromantic rated it
May 6, 2019
Status: Completed
Omg who is cutting onions in here? These aren't tears, they were caused by the onions... yep it's all the onions' fault.

Prepare the box of tissues because this story gives a healthy dose of heartache before a sweet ending. It's a solid and emotional short story. There are some things I would love to have been discussed more, but the author does a good job of focusing on the progression of inner emotions of our MC and ML in the short story format that we are given. Definitely recommend this... more>> one if you are in the mood for a good cry (but don't worry, no tragedies here.) <<less
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Mynbns
Mynbns
July 9, 2019
Status: --
A good one. I cried a few times. MC is so pitiful (。•́︿•̀。)

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Spoiler

Its an HE.

MC is inlove with ML since they were young, while ML is inlove with the brother of MC (they were lovers)

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but suddenly he got a disease and died leaving our ML heartbroken

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after a few years MC and ML met again and MC's mother plotted them to mate while MC is in heat thats why they were forced to marry. The beginning of their marriage is somewhat awkward and peaceful and MC got pregnant. Only to be disrupted when ML discovered that MC could have help his brother with his disease, he thought that MC chose to abandon his brother because he love the ML. A huge misunderstanding!!!!! They fought and MC fell miserable. He ran away and found a job, determined to raise his baby by himself only to be found by ML a few months later and forced to comeback and give birth. An accident occured and MC fell into coma. When he woke up he divorced ML and choose to live alone while he visits his son from time to time. While the ML uses his son so that MC will stay with them. When the heat of MC came thats when ML confessed his feeling and proposed to marry. MC says yes (like sht, he is in heat so he is not in the right mind, ML took advantage of it!!!!)

ML is a jerk, I hate him to the end.

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Pinxter
Pinxter rated it
July 25, 2019
Status: extra 2
I really like this one. The love and pain endured by MJ is subtle yet deep. It always bring me to tears when he was hurt by TC's words. But I also like that he didn't give up and want to stand on his own regardless what. Thank God it's a happy ending. The writer's way of putting emotion to words is deep. Thank you for writing and translating :)
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tashtumea27
tashtumea27 rated it
May 20, 2019
Status: extra 1
The summary is both succinct and accurate. Please read this, you will probably cry and laugh but will love it in the end. It has just the right amount of angst, the story building was done nicely, and the characters are reasonably written.

as another reviewer had said: 5/5 would cry again
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effing muffins
effing muffins rated it
May 19, 2019
Status: extra 1
i thought I was prepared to cry when I started to read this book, I was not.

This story is filled with heartache and miscommunication, so much miscommunication, sounds like a lot of the stuff out there buuut the author has a way of making everything feel so real.

The MC is such a lovable character and he grows so much, you won´t regret reading this!

Note: In my opinion, you know an author is good when they make you go through a lot of emotions in a few chapters
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izayaYY
izayaYY rated it
July 10, 2019
Status: --
I usually avoid stories with love triangles, because of the inevitable angst and melodrama that results from such a situation. I am not a fan of either.

This is a love triangle, but done very well, without going overboard with the drama and narrated beautifully and succintly. And I liked that both MCs POV were shown for a better understanding of their situation.
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Passerby Soysauce-sama
Passerby Soysauce-sama rated it
June 14, 2019
Status: Completed
Ahh. I'm warning you. This hurt my kokoro~ I didn't cry though *red-eyed* Rating this 4.6

The pain and struggles were realistic~ not too histrionic.

I really like how the author simply gave a taste of how (MC) Mujin's personality became like that and didn't dive too deeply 'just to add some drama' or appeal to the ML.

The side characters were treated humanely somehow, unlike most novels I read where family bonds are permanently broken, face-slapping, and all that with the leads... The mistakes remain, though unforgiven, they moved forward without really... more>> clearing ALL things (conspiracies) up just to make themselves feel better. (This is unscientifically realistic in many small ways)

I read this for short 2 hours and definitely worth it. <<less
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readingthings
readingthings rated it
June 10, 2019
Status: Completed
I was a bit nervous that this story was going to be too heartbreaking for me because of all the comments. As it turned out, it wasn't bad. So either I'm immune to certain levels of drama or it wasn't sad at all. Might be because we're given the perspective of both characters. It's an understandable situation really. Add is a little bit more plot devices and we could have had a telenovela here where it would feel like our souls were being torn to pieces. In all, it's a... more>> decent piece of work to read and the translation is good too. The story is worth a read.

For anyone who can't stand heartbreak and likes to read a bit of spoilers like me:

Spoiler

So the drama of this is that the ML thought the MC plotted against him to trap him into the marriage. The ML was in love with the younger sibling of the MC (who died) and was tricked by the mother-in-law to bond with the MC (who was in love with the ML). When things begin to go good the MC finds some stuff and jumps to some really intense but logical conclusions and BAM! Drama. Things happen and we get a bit of reverse role going on. So readers can feel that justice is being made for the MC. This story has a happy ending. Although it could turn into a cannon fodder tragic story. Add in some transmigriation and.. huh... nevermind. I'm getting way off topic now.

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NunuYuyu
NunuYuyu rated it
June 8, 2019
Status: Completed
The story is good. Enough plots and I feel quite satisfied with the ending. Recommend it to everyone, especially to anyone who wants a bittersweet story.
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aovel
aovel rated it
October 6, 2019
Status: c35
I read this story twice to be honest. I had to read it again after I finished it the first time because I couldn't let go of it. It's a pretty simple story, cliche to be honest, but it was well thought out. Even if you've read this type of story before this one still gives all the feels without missing a beat.",)
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Chenqing
Chenqing rated it
September 18, 2019
Status: Completed
An easy to read story, but it's quite predictable.

There is some angst but I'm not really feeling the romance. Neither the MC nor ML is a flat out scum. MC is kind, but a bit too passive and ML is too cold for my liking.

Another thing I didn't like is how the author wrote MC's relationship with his family. I understand the motives of each characters but I don't really get the feeling. Its unsatisfying. I feel like this part should have been elaborated more but instead the author just... more>> focus on MC and ML relationship.

There are explicit scenes if you're just looking for an ABO smut.

Overall I rate this 3.0 because it can still be a short enjoyable read and it's not prolonged with too much unnecessary drama. But its not something I would reread. <<less
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agathe
agathe rated it
September 11, 2019
Status: Completed
It’ a big 3+... cute, somewhat sincere/ realistic (?) - a bit different (?)... it’s nice yet deeply unsatisfying

- maybe the MC is too enduring and negative... Or probably the ML is too passive...

there’s too much blame / self blame - and then maybe i’ll contradict myself thinking the innermost feelings of the characters do not seem that realistic - there not too far from there, but there’s that I don’t know what something which feels a bit of...

culture might be a part of it, but not only...... more>> I guess ?

it still feels way deeper and true than many, many other titles :) <<less
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FattyTabby
FattyTabby
July 10, 2019
Status: Completed
I have some anticipation for this story (come on, who don't like a little drama and a sprinkle of angst?"

Yet, why the ML is so... disappointing?
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