3.8

Voyeurism turned to 3P, recommend skipping chapter 5.

Supposedly be some kind of fanfic but that hardly matters. What matters it how it was cut off at a good spot. *Sigh* Is more or less an incomplete smut.

Like how others have mentioned, it's confusing and sounds like a draft. Focus on the smut and make yourself semi happy, I suppose. The smut, for how little there was, was good.

Hmm it feels like a draft written on an impulse. It's too short and jarring for romance, smut or sci-fi, so it ends up accomplishes nothing but annoying readers. I rarely ever say this for anything, but this really was such a waste of time.

I was supposed to click 1 star but ended up clicking 3 stars instead.

Confusing Fanfic which takes many tropes from current tv shows, like Dr WHO, etc. Pure smut. Tried too hard too soon. Throwing in phrases in German, terminology from Dr WHO, etc doesn't make the work a higher level, it only shows how desperate the author struggles to incorporate other works instead of novel ideas... the way used isn't novel. I just can't get into this as a novel or literature. If you want an unsatisfying small piece of smut. Go ahead. Otherwise, don't waste your time. Skip on to something... more>> better. I usually don't rate one star, but this just annoyed me too much. <<less