This story was quite sweet but since it's only a short story, I couldn't feel much about MC's struggle to move on from her first love since it only took a few sentences until MC moved on and be together with ML. So, even though MC and ML were quite loving in the later chapters, I still feel that something's missing between them. But then again, it's a bit expected since usually a short story had this kind of flaw: lack of details and the pace was a bit fast.

This one is really nice. How nice is it when you are able to get the one you love, and how painful it is to have your heart broken, and also the young love