Since I Became a Commoner, My Engagement Was Annulled!

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A baby of a nobleman and a baby of a commoner switched places, all by a fairy prank.
Anna, a noble lady, who doesn’t resemble her family at all, was worried because she couldn’t use magic.

Until one day, a fairy appears right in front of her…

When she was 14, Anna found out the truth and ended up living as a commoner.

Naturally, her fiancé, who she has been engaged to since she was a child, is going to leave her.

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Kizoku Kara Shomin ni Nattanode, Konyaku o Kaishou Saremashita!
貴族から庶民 になったので、婚約を解消されました!
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PersonaJXT
PersonaJXT rated it
July 15, 2021
Status: c86
I've read everything in the raw WN up till the end. I've also read the first ~11 chapters of the manga. My review is based on that. I've not looked at the translation here so I won't comment on its quality.

I hate this because it had potential, but the main character, Anna, was so useless that I had legit problem finishing it. Because seriously, Anna is such an utterly useless waste of space and her only reason to exist is to cause further drama by her inaction and call to... more>> inaction more than anything else.

Spoilers ahead as I rant because I need to get this off my chest.

Spoiler

Anna finds out that she's a changeling! What does she do about it? She gives up her normal training and decides to cook (somewhat relevant, if only as a backdrop) and learn other magic instead (basically irrelevant). Does she tell anyone that could help? Nope. Does she tell anyone that she trusts? Nope. She just agonizes over it while doing very little else, causing her problems down the road.

Anna is struggling to get along with her bio family! Does she do anything to try to get along with them? Not really, but the story just goes along as if she did. They just sort of magically get together, even her dad who appears out of nowhere Anna basically forgives in the span of like a single day (she says she doesn't forgive him, but her actions show otherwise). Anna causes friction with her family, but doesn't do anything to help and everything just works out on its own without her.

Anna's friend Sara is looking/waiting for her childhood friend! Anna runs into someone from Sara's hometown who says he's looking for someone. What does Anna do? Literally nothing. Doesn't even tell Sara. It's not till he stumbles in months later sick and dying that Sara finds out that Anna even met her childhood friend.

Anna finds out that there's something shady and dangerous that her friends are involved in! Does Anna tell them? Nope, resulting in them nearly getting killed. She just got lucky that Rock was actually competent and could think well despite still recovering from illness so he avoided problems that he didn't even know about.

Anna's friends are going on a dangerous mission! Anna is told not to do anything because she sucks. So she does nothing. Everything goes smoothly as a result.

Ed clearly loves Anna and is searching for a way to be with her! Ed tells Anna that he's currently fake engaged to Annette to fend off engagements. He tells her that he's got a plan and that he just needs more time. What does Anna do? She tells him to just get married to Annette and lies that she has her own engagement. Then spends a lot of time moping around doing nothing, because that's what she's best at.

Even at the end, she has no hand in her engagement with Ed. Ed does everything by himself, off screen. He becomes a lower ranking noble, taking one of his father's titles, which allows him to marry Anna. Anna does... absolutely nothing, believing that Ed is going to marry Annette right up until he appears and proposes to her. It's depressing how little she had to do with her own marriage in the story's climax.

Anna basically spends most of the story doing absolutely nothing. Things fall into her lap and others around her accomplish things, but all she does is cause problems and hold everyone else back. She's not smart, she's not proactive, she's not even reactive. She's just there. The most action she got was when she knocked her dad down because she mistakenly thought he was a robber, which honestly just caused more problems for her family. Isn't it sad when the main character of the story accomplishes the most just sitting there looking pretty?

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The non-spoiler version is that Anna is absolutely useless throughout the entire story and just sits there feeling sorry for herself as she continues to be a drag on everyone around her. Things fall into place not because of anything she does but in spite of them. She gets her happy ending without lifting a finger, despite her best efforts to sabotage herself. Over and over Anna shows how useless and thoughtless she is. I have no idea how I got through the entire story with how she drags out the entire drama by herself.

The writing is... okay, I guess. No major problems aside from a few typos here and there and some awkward phrasing. Some characterization is weird (her noble family is just plain inhuman) and it's pretty obvious it's for the sake of the plot, but it's not terribly important I suppose since most of that is off screen and we're just told about it. The chapters are short and the story isn't terribly long. There is a fair bit of time skipping and the story arcs are very different in length, with 14 and 17 years old being the longest. Though 14 can be sectioned off given the time skips, so maybe that can be split further. Whatever the case, the writing is very light and breezy, showing a clear lack of depth and thought put into it.

There are also a lot of plot holes if you stop and think about things. Characters make assumptions that they had no right to make and things happen ever so conveniently for the plot. I hesitate to call it amateur writing, but there was definitely a lack of actual effort. Anna is clearly a problem in the writing with her lack of any real relevance to anything that happens, but a lot of things also happen off screen. Heck, most of the important things happen off screen and we only get told that they happened while Anna just sits there being useless. We're just supposed to feel bad for her as she sits there and feels sorry for herself while everyone else gets on with their lives and resolves everything. She only has one real moment where she does anything, and even then it was to rely on someone else.

The manga appears to be handling things better than the WN so I can only assume that the editor or the mangaka is fixing things as they go. Anna's brother, who gets talked about a lot doing things in the background (told, but never seen), gets a lot more screen time in the manga, for example. His motivations and whatnot are actually expounded upon there, rather than left mostly a mystery like in the WN.

That is to say, don't bother with the WN. It's short tr*sh, but it's still tr*sh. Go read the manga instead, it looks to be okay even though it hasn't gotten terribly far yet. I only read the WN because I thought the manga was interesting and wanted to know more after a cliff hanger, but I regret doing so. I finished it because I try to finish everything I start, but feel it was more a waste of time than anything else.

2/5 stars. Close to 1/5, but the manga bumped it up. <<less
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evanesco99211
evanesco99211 rated it
March 29, 2021
Status: c86
This is one of my favourites now! It feels like a slice of life with balanced content. There's enough character depth, conflicts, and actions, and nice world-building without being draggy. Most importantly, pretty much everyone got a happy ending :)

Other than that, at the time of this review, there were only 2 properly translated chapters, the rest I MTLed until the last chapter (chapter 86 aka Extra 2). The NU status says ongoing but it seems to me that the novel is already completed at chapter 84. The rest... more>> are extras.

Lastly, I would refrain from hating or blaming the MC too much.

First of all, she's not a reborn or a reincarnated person. She's truly a child (or a very young adult) and her concerns are realistic. So what kind of mature thinking or strategy would you be expecting from someone that young and innocent? Sure, there are exceptional few as always but how about the rest?

Secondly, she does not only mope while doing nothing. She does a lot. It's just that her strategy and actions are suitable, or rather, expected from someone with her background, personality, and age. She's just not OP or super smart. Full stop.

And, finally, given her background and situation, she can no longer trust anyone. It's not realistic to expect her to tell anyone about her situation when the risk she would immediately be kicked out if found out before she's done preparing herself is there no matter how low the probability is. <<less
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