As a oneshot, it has pretty good storytelling. But somehow I feel that if there were more details about the time our leads were dating, it would've been more impactful. MC's pov should've been a bit longer, tho it still hurts. Don't even wanna talk about ML 🙂 It doesn't matter what his feelings were in the end because during breakup, he never explained, and decided not to contact MC after that cause of his guilt. Like bro, you will never be redeemable after seeing how much pain MC was... more>> in because of you. It's a good read tbh. Just wished their relationship was shown a bit more so that the emotions could be felt stronger. <<less