When you're in the mood for a quick dose of smut, read this story. This short story is almost all smut. Plot: A h**ny immortal (i.e., someone with an unbreakable body) seduces a dragon who can transform.

Don’t worry about trying to understand the entire plot as the backstory can get a little confusing. Just enjoy the entertainment the author has provided.

Overall rating of 3 stars but adding 1 star for creativity - there is one especially hot scene.

The author tried too hard to write an actual story and took away from the experience. The smut was good, if only the plot and the last 2 chapters were less confusing. There was 0 transition or indication that BY had just upped and left the dragon in the middle.

Honestly it had the potential to be so much more. It had the right foundation for a really good smut short but it fell short because of the state of confusion I was constantly in... Sigh and the MC was the type I like too — silly, lusty and naive. Oh wells, read it for the okish smut I guess

To be honest, I didn't know if it was memories, a dream or the present moment. Very confusing.

Smut with plot. Very confusing at the end.

The storytelling at the end deserves a 2/5 'bad' rating but it's a very short story so.

Plot was ok. Pacing was way off. Smut was ok. Storytelling is ok at best, horrible at worst. Math is wrong. (Does a dragon have two or three 🐓 ?) Love is instant.

Yes, love was instant. Backstory wasn't fully explained. That's fine but also you need too much genre knowledge to guess out the actual story. Should have taken more time to write the ending.

Its a little confusing and I feel like the background story something is missing that explain the present things but anyway even without it the smut alone is superb with or without the back story.👍

Very entertaining.❤️