"The usually kind and elegant prince was furious and led his army to level the entire garbage planet."

"In his last life, An Ji left because of the ridiculous “I don’t want pheromones to decide my love", and he didn't know until now how precious a 100% match was."

"The thirst for an alpha was written into the genes of every omega. For an omega that was in heat, every cell in his body was screaming for an alpha.

He wanted to let the other person pamper him. He wanted the other person to ferociously take possession of him.

In his previous life, An Ji fought against his omega instincts all his life.

He called on omegas to be independent and self-reliant; to reproduce with whomever they chose, and even advocated relying on inhibitors to get through their estrus period. In a world ran by alphas, he wanted omegas to toss aside their subservient position and take control of their own fate.

He set out with high spirits, great energy, and lofty determination, but he failed.

He failed utterly and completely."

How could the omega be so innocent in his first life if he is supposed to have been lost for 10 years on the garbage planet surviving?

???

“Why are you quibbling with an adopted son?” An Yanming opened his eyes and said in a steady voice, “If you don’t like him then just send him away.”

The adopted son omega who would "take the place as the new omega light", is r*ped and is expelled from the family.

And the novel justifies it because he was a cannon fodder that deserved that karma.

First off, I want to complain about MC’s ex being arrested and yet there’s really no closure. I wish the ex was able to explain himself more to MC because there seemed to be a misunderstanding, yet not at the same time. During the intro, they all stated that the ex wanted to cut out MC’s brain to experiment and try to manipulate spiritual powers since MC was SSS level. However, the ex states that he just wanted to be able to control MC and make sure he never left him since so many people kept on saying that he as a beta as undeserving of such a good omega.

ML merging with his puppy and old dog forms should have been more described and placed heavier emphasis. In fact, I feel like this would have been a great addition to the story and brought the audience in more. I would have liked to see more interactions between MC and ML about their past life and have them explain their emotions in the past. The fact that the author simply says after ML goes out for a mission and they had to use mental power and blah blah blah... I already lost interest. Why couldn’t we go through this part with the ML? All we have is the MC’s confusion and POV, and at the end, we don’t even get to see them talk about their past life considering what MC witnessed after he passed away. MC was always curious about why ML would lead an army to execute the beta rebels, so I would have liked to see ML answer that question.

In fact, that part of the story could have went like this:

Hearing the question from An Ji, Rong thought back to his mission one month ago.

Being as powerful as he was, he had never faced such a detrimental event where he felt threatened. Everyone thought that the mission would be quick and easy, but who would have known that an accident would happen amongst the vast universe — causing them to face against an enemy that could not be seen nor detected by their technology, neither were they able to do physical attacks to the enemy. Instead, they had to rely on spiritual attacks and use their mental strength to defeat the enemy. At the end, Li Rong almost gave up as his spiritual strength started to run out.

However, as Li Rong began to lose consciousness, he saw an empty vastness of white. In that vastness, there was an omega that constantly tried to pursue him.

The omega would say, “Handsome, would you like a drink?”

He was faithful and loyal to An Ji though, and stated, “Get away from me.”

Once the omega was removed from the scene, Li Rong was unable to see any other people. However, there was a shadow visible.

For some unknown reason, he called out, “Li Rong?”

“When did you know?” the old dog asked.

“An Ji told me, ” puppy answered.

“... ” the old dog reacted.

“Will you be inside me forever?”

“I don’t know. However, I feel my consciousness fading away.”

As the old dog said that, his shadow began to travel farther away from the body of Li Rong.

“No, you can’t! Wait!” the puppy shouted and chased after the shadow.

Eventually, the shadow stopped and his running slammed right into the shadow — merging the two souls of old and young.

Once the merging of the two souls happened, old dog took control and saved everyone from the unseen enemy.

However, all of these, Li Rong would not tell An Ji. Instead, he wanted An Ji to know about his heart full of love and adoration.

*Honestly, I probably wrote more than the author for this scene in the novel. I’d love to expand it even more, but I’m gonna cut it short because there’s no point since y’all probably got my gist already.

An Can could have been expanded. Honestly, you’re gonna tell me that even though he loves and is so possessive of An Ji, he would let An Ji run rampant with Li Rong without causing Li Rong to be jealous? I feel like conflicts between Li Rong and A Can should have been brought up because there’s so way 2 alphas who look at one person as their saving grace will not be competing with each other. An Can just disappeared after An Ning got r*ped... Author, add more plot! These will make your story better! Honestly, I feel like the author cut corners here. I’m extremely unsatisfied.

1. Start with MC growing up in the tr*sh star - 10chapters.

Story only mentions it 😭

2. Reuniting with family & running away - 3chapters.

Story only mentions it, with zero details😭

3. Reincarnating back at the specific point. Remembering what happened & changing the key immediate scenario - 5chapters.

v need a more in-depth look into the past life.

4. Meeting the ML, changing things with the fam & caring abt his brother - 10chapters

Author went through this so fast 😭

5. The whole party arc & the adopted son issue - 10+chapters

v need more intrigue!!!

6. Add another 10chapters of fluffy chasing & romance

romance needs some actual chasing n falling in love. V got an official couple from the get go. It's better than having angst but v miss some of the thrill!

7. The exBF & Beta Organization thing - 10chapters

Again. Opportunity for intrigue!

8. Omega/gender equality initiative & school arc - 5+chapters

Opportunity for political intrigue & fun school arc!

9. Ending, tying up loose ends & Extras - 5chapters