So glad to see one of my fave translator starting this webnovel woot! Last year, I actually stumbled on its webcomic-anime first. It's a dogblood revenge story but not overly dramatic, just my kind of jam. ... more>>

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I love how there's no drama between the couple; they are a standard cute and couple who had arguments but never that deep. The source of angst is only between MC and the s*um relatives

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The bun appears a lot. Story will commence when the bun is already born and he's s3uuuuper cute! I love the VO and his meng OOTDs every episode. There will also be a gang/yakuza subplot c/o our goon leader ML. There's never a boring part, each arc has it's own breath-stopping action.

the novel illustration is quite different from the manwha tho but I love the ML and the bun's eyes. and IDK about the cover but our main couple is definitely manly. MC is a total butch shou. (PM me if you want to watch the animated webtoon)

again, this is revenge-dogblood story. but one big difference from the rest: MC AND ML ARE TEAMMATES FROM THE GET GO. Villains are the s*um ex and s*um relatives. Most of all, this is not just some simple faceslaps; MC's faceslaps will totally go haard, like for real. if you have a soft heart... well idk lol. <<less

I started to read the manga because the drawings are good and there is a cute bun so despite the awful translation I read it. And because of the bad English, I also skipped a lot of pages and only focused on the ML and MC parts.

And then I thought maybe the translation of the actual novel is better than the manga, I didn't even manage to read a whole chapter, the translation is as bad as the manga, even worse. It's obviously machine translated.

Even so, Thank You for the... more>> hard work, and I am grateful. <<less

Thank you so much for the translator for picking this up and for a very good translation. The plot is dog blood drama and face slapping in a big way. I love the cutie wowo. There are more details and angst in the novel compared to manga version.

I must say, I don't want to be ungrateful but.. If the translation more polished this gonna be absolute bomb.. At least 4.0 minimum and 4.3 as maximum, MC and ML really well written for me, I mean we not just read about how ML dote MC.. Or how MC get all the love in the world (which is not, MC just loved by 1 ML and no 234ml, hate and like in this novel is clearly seperate there's no grey zone).. We will saw how the first-sight love became... more>> true love (although in that journey they had 3-4 drunk ssx lmao) but author didn't just buried it, they write about ML and MC insecure feeling, the misunderstanding is still ok for me, the problem solving is ok.. But this story also contains many hole and sometimes the pace is kinda to fast and just get lil jump. AND U ALL NEED TO KNOW THAT IT CONTAIN MANY SMUT AHAHAHAHHAHA but sadly as I said :) not to polished (trnnsltion) but it's ok u can understand it, 70%-80%if u never read a mtl, and 80%-95% if u had experience read mtl <<less

Oh my God! What a s*upid novel!!! Too long for how bad it is!!

The plot holes are so big a comet could fly through them!! For example: MC's father has hated him since he was born for being inters*x and having a uterus inside him. How the hell did he know that? There are no doctors who check a baby's internal reproductive organs, and MC doesn't have any obvious genetic abnormalities in his body. In fact, people with this condition will very likely never know unless an illness forces them... more>> to undergo a thorough checkup or said internal organ becomes cancerous and has to be removed. More importantly, if your child has a uterus they shouldn't have, why not just operate and remove it in childhood/adolescence? Isn't MC's family rich? Didn't the attending physician suggest that? Even if MC's father refused to operate on him, why didn't his grandfather who raised him, do it? Or his mother?

So many questions, and that's 👆 just one example. Almost everything that happens in the story leaves you thinking: WTF!!! How s*upid!!! From the supposedly "reborn" villain who can do anything, just because he was reborn, there is no explanation for his sudden acquired abilities, talent for business, surprising amount of connections in the highest spheres of politics and administration of the country (how do you think he managed to completely erase the evidence and existence of a person?? I refuse to believe that the author is so naive as to think that THAT is something that can be done just because you have money 😏), ALL those abilities and more!! even though in his other life he NEVER gave any signs of being able to do any of that, see what I mean by plot holes? 🤦‍♀️ to the MC's s*upid revenge plans, which seem more like he's just improvising all the time, everything has huge plot holes! The ML is a gang leader but when he goes out he doesn't even carry a gun, despite knowing he has enemies who want him dead 🙄 The ML joins the MC and knows that MC's brother tried to kill him and that he is a mobster but he doesn't even assign him a single bodyguard to protect him, etc. Honestly speaking, many of the villain's actions weren't very intelligent and could easily be countered, but for some s*upid reason the MC insisted again and again on facing him head-on with culinary skills instead of doing something more serious, it was completely ridiculous!!! The villain kept ordering him to be killed and even tried to kill the baby, and the MC kept insisting on not doing anything and letting him keep screwing around 🙄 He went so far as to even clear the villain's name himself because he felt like he was winning too easily 🙄...

Honestly speaking, the only thing that saves this novel is the romantic subplot between the MC and the ML and the mpreg, since they have so much chemistry, there's nothing else worth reading... Although the MC's so-called "pride" was extremely annoying at times, such as insulting the ML, yelling at the ML, deny him the right to know his son, hiding things from him, hit him, make decisions for him, and that kind of thing happened every now and then were extremely annoying and irritating, sometimes I felt like being the ML just to tell him to go to hell!!! It could be said that if it weren't for the ML even the romance would be lost in this novel. Even the MC himself said that he treats the ML like a loyal dog that follows his orders, now that I think about it, that's not romantic at all... A relationship that is based on the absolute tolerance of one of the parties while the other not only does absolutely nothing to cultivate the relationship but still treats the other party badly... apparently even the romance in this novel turned out to be garbage? 🤔 <<less