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673 Chapters (Completed)
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Weekly Rank: #2000
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All Time Rank: #3964
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All Time Rank: #12150

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Leiyin accidentally crossed into the One Piece World, and accidentally obtained the Naruto System.

Chakra, Ninjutsu, Shinobi Tools, Kekkei Genkai, Sage Mode…

Fire Release vs Ace; Water Release vs Crocodile; Shinra Tensei vs Nikyu Nikyu no Mi; Amaterasu vs Magu Magu no Mi; Susanoo vs Kaido…

This was the adventure of a person, who gradually on the road to the top of being the strongest…

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海贼之神级火影系统
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Recommendations
In Different World with Naruto System (1)
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Latest Release

Date Group Release
05/17/24 System Translation c532
05/14/24 System Translation c531
05/12/24 System Translation c530
05/09/24 System Translation c529
05/07/24 System Translation c528
05/05/24 System Translation c527
05/02/24 System Translation c526
04/28/24 System Translation c525
04/28/24 System Translation c525
04/27/24 System Translation c524
04/25/24 System Translation c523
04/23/24 System Translation c522
04/22/24 System Translation c521
04/15/24 System Translation c518
04/08/24 System Translation c517
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Draghnof
Draghnof rated it
March 26, 2021
Status: c8
The author just do whatever he wants :-/ Usually it shouldn't be a problem since it's a fanfiction and a lot of authors change some things to make their writing easier or some are just mistakes not really wanted by them but here the author just change things for no reason and act like it's normal -_-

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Spoiler

the MC can use Chidori without problem despite not having the sharingan (or something who could replace it) and it only consume a weak amount of chakra.

Chakra control is just there to know if a technique can be used or not but doesn't have any effect on the amount of chakra spend to use a technique.

The fighting style of Kakashi's father became a S-rank ninjutsu.... Just wtf it doesn't make any sense, at least the other points were for the sake of laziness

The author tried to explain why the MC can increase his mana by a lot easily but it's just really weird (he ate a rare species of animal and gained a huge amount of mana.... Butnow that I think about it, since chidori doesn't use much mana increase is not really huge-_-)

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Furthermore the MC is dumb

Spoiler

His needs to exchange money with the system to gain new powers, items,... but the MC forgot to take the highly rewarded Baggy after killing him (or he might have taken him without it being mentioned, if that's the case then he doesn't care about the corpse rotting).... And for some reason he can navigates the huge ship on his own

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And the system is really very very annoying

Spoiler

It appeared after around 1 month with no explanation. No you survived 1 month in a strange world and are now worthy of me, or you ate a devil fruits rather than having it's power you have me, or you have reach the minimum amount of money needed to activate me, or you killed you 1st person and is now worthy of me,...

The 1st thing it did after appearing was to tease the MC in a really bad moment, and it tease the MC each time it is able to :-/

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I don't recommand this fanfiction, I know it's hard to find good fanfiction but unfortunately you must search some more time <<less
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Empress
Empress rated it
February 24, 2021
Status: --
This is bad, xianxia bad. I can predict the MC predictable behaviors. I can also knew the cliches the author going to use a few chapter away easily. It's tr*sh fanfic.

If you're looking for Naruto fanfic then "Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan" is the one you need. It doesn't have the flaw most fanfic has. While reading it, I forgot that it was just a fanfic, it was that good.
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betoran
betoran rated it
August 8, 2021
Status: c50
Well, gotta say... This went from being a good novel to becoming tr*sh xianxia. “Brother x!” This and that. “Courting death” and sh*t like that.

MC can’t decide if he is a morally good person or not. He is ruthless, but, he is dumb as luffy. His choices are ret*rded, his reactions too. His system is a joke and is less a “system” and more of a omnipotent being trolling him. The whole point of having a system is that it has no personality and MAYBE it gets one after time... more>> but never in the SECOND CHAPTER.

People of this novel are ret*rds.

”oh! Random kid who I meet today who looks like a tree branch! If you kill x I will offer you my beyond beautiful daughter! Who even adults droll when seeing her even though she is 15! What is that? She doesn’t like you? Give it half chapter or three chapters and she will worship you!”. <<less
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REAPERali
REAPERali rated it
May 16, 2021
Status: c58
wonder how one piece would look like if it was a Chinese fiction? This is it, typical protagonist goes around killing people, the old man who protects him till he grows is Garp this time, typical people underestimating him calling him tr*sh then he suddenly flexes and they don't believe it, typical arrogant girls who somehow go from mad at him to fall in love in a really s*upid way, just typical in general. The power scaling is also wrong, he is going around throwing Odama Rasengan like a normal... more>> punch in a match, and the guy just gets knocked out?? And with just a transformation jutsu he is going to hunt pirates so that the marine won't find out, but he uses ninjutsu which only he can use and expects no one to notice?? <<less
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Unknownstrange123
Unknownstrange123 rated it
September 26, 2022
Status: --
One of the worst fanfiction in all of one piece fanfic out there. If the name on its own is not a dead giveaway, just reading the first few chapter is enough to know that the MC's personality is literally a standard MC of every Chinese face slapping character. Then every OC that the author create are typical mob or villain you will find on a chinese novel. The best way to breakdown this novel is like this.

• A typical Chinese created novel MC.

• An OC mob and villain that... more>> do not fit in the world of one piece.

• In a one piece world but away from all the significant event that makes every fan love one piece.

• conveniently changing major plot of the original story and replacing it with a tr*sh plot that you can only see from a chinese novel.

Conclusion, don't even bother to read it if you're expecting a fanfic with the fun voyage of liffy together with the oc character in mind.

PS:

the author is one of those stereotypical person who considered luffy's crew as an adventurer instead of a pirate clearly showing how the author's view of the anime and thinking he could do a better job but actually make a novel worth throwing on a tr*sh <<less
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somerandomreadingenthusiast
somerandomreadingenthusiast rated it
April 17, 2022
Status: c200
Although the timeline is messed up, I didn't expect perfect timeline from this so 3/5 isn't based on that, it starts out decent, it goes downhill when he goes to the island and meets Verdan who hates him but is hands over heels for him a few chapters later, then the breaking point is when he joins the marines, this novel would get a lot more support if he became a rogue bounty hunter rather than a marine.
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spiritualgrass
spiritualgrass rated it
March 30, 2022
Status: c80
Quick answer - the story takes place at the time... in all times. Yep.

I literally was confused about the timeline, at the beginning author mentioned that Ace already ate his devil fruit, even garp mentioned something like that which made me think that it's about 2 years before the start of the story. But then a bombshell came out out of nowhere and MC finds a devil fruit called gomu gomu no mi... (~40 chapter) In the original Luffy eats his devil fruit when he is 7 (10 years before... more>> the story, still didn't happen) and now he joined marine academy with smoker and hina. (No official year, but around 14 years before the story)

Edit: chap 80

f*ck IT, the author is a f*cking moron, it seems that all the above is true. Timeline is messed up. Warlords of the sea exist and don't exist at the same time, trainees in hq are basically teens when luffy will start his journey (hina/smoker/ain etc.) When MC comes to one piece Hina is 17. When the story starts she should be 32 (she will remain as a teen leutainant I guess...)

Even if authors statement was true (that ace was already a pirate, for some reason author keeps on reminding the readers about that), MC already spend 3 years training, but still no Luffy. (Luffy appears 2 years after ace)

How tf can you mess up so badly!!! <<less
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Jesters Epilogue
Jesters Epilogue rated it
April 28, 2024
Status: v300
Absolute garbage. I don't even know where did I get the motivation to read up to 300+ chapters. The premise is interesting, but the plot and MC personality is shit.

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Spoiler

There was this OC girl he met at the start. The potential was great but author just threw her away, married to some dude I didn't even bother remember his name.

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Spoiler

Then he became a famous marine, became a spy and joined Doflamingos crew, but then he started blasting Rasengan everywhere. The only thing missing is placard on his neck saying that he's a marine. Well, nobody gives a sh*t anyway, he completed the mission after annihilating the pirate crew.

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AngryNutMonster
AngryNutMonster rated it
August 18, 2022
Status: c214
I really wanted to like this. I really did.

But this author must be built s*upid to have this many inconsistencies and flaws.

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Spoiler

First things first. Bro, why would you use your signature moves when you're undercover? Doflamingo should have noticed that immediately given his vast information network.

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This one is the one that made me drop this immediately.
Spoiler

As someone who has seen the anime, why would you take your girl to the Human Auction? Why would you immediately resort to violence the moment what you knew would happen, happens? I don't care about what happens to you afterwards at this point. I'm already expecting the 'forced me to become a pirate' thing. Bro, you did that to yourself. You are throwing away the life you have built for 4 years. Your teachers, your friends, your colleagues, all of whom are marines. Why would someone who was portrayed to be calm do such a level 0 smooth brain thing?

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The author has effectively thrown this character under the bus multiple times and I am not here for it anymore. I've already given this novel credit by even reading up to this point. <<less
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