Translation is very good and so is the writing. So far there were no pronouns or prepositions being confused. There was absolutely no trouble telling who was acting or speaking.👍👍 The narrative so far is very comprehensible as well.

The characters are still very uncertain and undefined. The MC isn't generating giant amounts of empathy or outrage over her situation, though there is a certain amount of sympathy for her. Given how rapidly the novel is moving, the first 10 chapters may well be pure throwaway material to move the story... more>> to the main setting, and establish the MC's history. I know I definitely expect a faceslap or two from the opening.

The plot is very run of the mill so far. Cinderella with minor changes. That doesn't look like it will hold for long, so no deductions there.

There are some things that are annoying. The MC is incredibly passive, so far not even taking an interest in her own background let alone her mistreatment

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I hope there is little to no romance, or at least it being a small part of the story. If her partner is the cute type, I’ll be more comfortable with more, but honestly I doubt it. The fact that there’s no romance tag or any mention of a male lead is surprising. Is this shoujo ai/yuri?

This novel has more than 20 chapters, so you might think that it has a fast paced story or something like that, but it's actually pretty much the opposite. The chapters sometimes have some fillers that I don't find that important, but the story kind of makes you want to keep going, but after a while the writing makes you feel a little bored.

I don't like comparing novels, but if you prefer novels that in 20 chapters the character have grown up, already have a romantic partner, father daughter cute... more>> relationship... Well you won't get all of those in these 20 chapters.

I like the whole concept of the novel, but at the same time I think that somethings could've been easily solved in max 5 chapters.

If I could give stars more precisely I think I would give 3.5 maybe 3.

Spoiler

Just so you guys know the father only shows up in chapter 24 and his reaction finding out he has a daughter is quite... Disappointing? Well, he still hasn't seen her, so who knows. In my opinion it will take a while for them to have that cutsy father daughter relationship.

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It finally updated again!

Tbh I had forgotten about this story, but I remember reading it a while back and really loving it. I'm rereading it now and I love the author's writing style and the translators did a good job. Our FL, Diana, is really adorable and I like her interactions with Senir,

I'm still early in this story but I'm looking forward to (re) reading more of it ^^