63 times a chapter (exaggerated) you will see the MC call Old Fu and Young Feng dirty capitalist, evil capitalist etc. While she works like a s*ave for the ML. It's just unbelievable! She's worked at the Transmigration Bureau for years and is their top worker and gets paid exactly...0 dollars. What gives her the right to call these s*um dirty capitalists when she's literally an indentured servant to the ML? She's in her last world before retirement and her total count could be 10 worlds, 30 worlds, 700000 worlds and she hasn't been paid a single cent. Can't forget how she will never get over the ML's beauty, blah blah veins on his arms blah blah he's so handsome. The ML and MC meet once and he's already possessive of her and loves to stop her from working.

Did I mention leeks? Can't forget about those! Leeks leeks leeks leeks leeks leeks. Everyone except the ML is a leek, the ML is special of course because the MC is the leek for him. Imagine not paying your best employee a single cent for 3 trillion years and she voluntarily raises you in her hard-fought villa for free.

I think it would be better to see more interactions between them when the main character was transmigrating through different worlds before her last world because I feel like it would create more chemistry between them. I'm not saying that they're not compatible, but I hope they interacted more before the last world so their romance could make more sense. Although it was mentioned that the male lead knew and was watching her, the main character didn't, so the last world was their first-ever interaction.

got what they deserved, and then it was left at that. No more story after the event that the main character "died." So I didn't get to know the aftermath or the effect of the main character's death on the three male protagonists. I think it would be interesting to see what happened; however, like I've said, they're literally irrelevant (when I say this, it doesn't pertain plot-wise since they're MC mission's targets. I just meant that they literally feels like an insect that brings money in mc's mind), and the author focused more on ending the story. The main character and the male lead's story abruptly ended, leaving me wondering if they got married or had kids—no such thing was shown. The ending was a bit abrupt.

already knew and liked the MC due to watching her journey before this particular world

The ML is not well developed. His character is flat and one-dimensional, and the ML keeps interrupting intense and important scenes because he doesn't want the FL to prick her finger or something asinine.

More spoilers, but he straight up stops time to interrupt important moments, and the book goes from an intense and interesting scene to just two characters flirting. It completely breaks the flow of the story and quickly becomes annoying. With over halfway through the book, I'm not convinced by the romance.

FL basically only uses the system's tracking feature, but ML provides her with extra cheats. FL seems pretty tough on herself, so while ML's aid isn't necessary, it does form a nice contrast as to how much he wants to care for her instead of letting her get hurt for the sake of the mission (no OSHA violations here).

She basically just gaslights, gatekeeps, girlbosses her way through this mission with her expertise in shoddy scripts and psychological manipulation alone, and we love that for her.

ML is a god who has been with her early transmigration days. He'd seen her embarrassing moments of practicing piano until her playing won't scare the birds anymore which is cute. It's revealed in the extra chap.

There's also the thing with how the FL and the white moonlight's face are very similar. They did point that they may be sisters but nothing more is being dug. I would love to hear more backstory of how one became influental actress and one is an orphan. Also how the love targets just quickly abandoned the white moonlight wasn't as how I expected it. A bit lukewarm around that part. But, regardless I still love the story.