Whisky Chocolate

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Zhong Lan never thought this would ever happen to him as an alpha, but what made it even more unbelievable to him was that he would continue to receive such treatment for three whole years. Zheng Tianyi was his classmate in college, his partner, the father of his child, as well as his living nightmare.

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酒心巧克力
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Recommendation Lists
  1. Translated in HoH
  2. [BL Completed] Omegaverse, Mpreg
  3. some extraordinarily good yaoi / fluffy novels at ...
  4. planning to read soon pt1a
  5. It's Getting HOT in Here [BL]

Latest Release

Date Group Release
09/16/21 House of Hoeni extra
09/13/21 House of Hoeni c2
09/14/21 House of Hoeni c1
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Potion rated it
October 1, 2021
Status: --
This is not for the faint of heart or people who value consent, boundaries, human rights, and actual love with emotions... Love--not to be confused with intense s*x.

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Which was so uncomfortable to read, so instead I started skimming, and then scrolling to the end of each chapter to see how the author intended to end it. Honestly, I think I would have preferred to just read the reviews beforehand, if there were any... so as not to read it. But I was curious...

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Ultimately, while possessive MLs are sort of a guilty pleasure of mine... this really was not for me. I don't see any Love here at all. I don't know what I just read and why the ML even did what he did? It really makes little sense to me?

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The ML is a rich Alpha playboy who goes after all these Omegas. The MC is a poor Alpha who is a bit pretty, and the ML thinks that is a good enough reason to try raping an Alpha. He then gets people to kidnap, tie up, drug, and r*pe MC repeatedly against his wish indefinitely forever. The ML goes out of his way to drug the MC into acting like an Omega... until he is basically an Omega--more on that later.

The MC is unable to escape, but somehow is able to graduate college in three years. Not sure about the matter of anyone finding out, his grades being affected, or him somehow being confined, but still able to go to school... because (should I be thankful for this?) It is so short and this is written like a big summary. The s*x and MC being bullied is written in detail, though. The 'bullying' talk is rather uncomfortable and insulting, rather than from someone who actually has feelings towards the other? The MC just sucks it up literally and metaphorically in order to experience less pain. He basically gives up trying to escape after countless failures described as such in a couple sentences of summary. Because his opinion does not matter at all. Which the MC reminds us multiple times as the ML always gets his way.

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NSFW part of the spoiler:

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The ML gets his way in where the MC goes. What he wears--or often NOT wears--to bed. What goes into the MC's body. All aspects of s*x besides the MC's coaxing maybe, which is still what he allows. Even the MC'S s*x as in gender.

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Continuing to even more issues, possibly one of the biggest issues in addition to kidnapping and r*pe.

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Not sure why the ML decides to torture the MC the way he does. I think it is supposed to be love and/or good s*x, but considering the MC fights the whole time, the ML must be a sad*st getting off on torture idnk. Anyway, the ML decides to r*pe MC on a whim to see if raping the MC can make the Alpha MC act as an Omega. He then does everything in his power to turn the MC into an Omega against his will. The ABO mechanics in this story is weird science even for ABO. The MC gets surgery for a working artificial uterus and v*gina. He also gets a sh*t ton of Omega pheromones pumped into him. Considering the MC identifies as male Alpha, and the ML just had him get surgery done against his will (because being rich is enough for the doctors to ignore MC'S opinions too apparently &/or reasons never mentioned)...I am going to continue to refer to the MC as an Alpha. But I'm not sure how things work, because other people also think MC is Alpha and... I'm not sure if during all this, ML has MC'S pheromones and glands removed as well? I think so? It says ML has the doctors 'extract' them so that ML can have 'double Alpha glands' and force MC to be completely reliant on him due to him having MC pheromones?? As if MC had a choice even before this. The ML then gets MC pregnant (twice!) against his will. The MC is course supposed to take care of the children (but not too much attention or the ML coersively pulls him away due to 'jealousy') and have crazy s*x whenever the ML wants throughout the day.

So ML basically r*ped MC because he's a pretty Alpha in order to drug & physically induce Omega reactions, and then force MC to have a s*x change into an Omega is practically all but name. In which case, why not just go with an Omega who actually want to be with you? Unless this all about s*xual pleasure in destroying & brainwashing a person in submission for the lol's? But no, apparently, the ML is a good husband due to not cheating on the MC (even though early on the MC just wants the ML to get tired of him so he can escape, so cheating sounds great & preferable). He is also great because he fights with his three year old (he forced the MC to have with him so they pass on their genes) for the MC'S attention and the MC is afraid enough he restrains himself in how much affection he shows his son. The ML is also a good husband because despite forcing the s*x, including well into MC'S pregnancy... the MC eventually (*after countless drugging, sticking vi**ators up against his will/artificial "p**sy" that he is not allowed to remove, blocking his ejuculation, and idnk how many times they have s*x daily multiple times a day for years on end...) says ML "always" causes him 'pleasure'. 🙄 Sounds more like torture, but there is a Stockholm Syndrome tag...

In any other story, the ML would be canon fodder or the scum abuse ex, but here... our Happy End is that ML gets his way, including getting his children to look after themselves so he can have more sex attention from the MC... and their day to day life of MC dropping everything to have s*x with ML continues to the extent MC has to plan his actions/day rushing around before ML wakes up for s*x like the wild animal ML is. We are also told by the MC that after 11+ years together. 2 children, and 1 year of 'negotiation' of MC begging in the bedroom or actually any time during the day anywhere in the house having s*x , MC is going to be allowed to exit the house to open a desert shop. Since this is in the extra, we don't know if this actually happens or is just the stage for kitchen roleplaying before the ML changes his mind. Or any details really. The MC can't have 5 minutes alone with his son, so 🤷 unless the ML is going to be there forcing MC to have s*x instead of baking, causing the shop to have no product and either 1. close so ML has MC at home at leidure or 2. Continue at a loss with ML pumping cash in it as a stage for desert shop s*x role-playing... the desert shop is so random and does not seem like an actual thing that will exist as an actual desert shop. Actually, I seem to recall the MC saying the ML likes to give him hope and then twist it, so I'm betting this is a plan on ML's part to get MC out of the house, so they can have s*x without being disturbed

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With that, I don't think you need to it. Do yourself a favor and do not read it unless you are really into 1. Smut 2. BD*M without any consent 3. r*pe

And can ignore: 1. Lack of consent in everything from one's s*x to having s*x 2. Plot holes 3. Everything except s*x in summary info dump. <<less
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Alexm3991
Alexm3991 rated it
November 22, 2021
Status: Completed
The tags are on point. This is a short story with a scum ML who forced himself on the MC, he never redeemed himself

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both MC and ML are alphas. The ML not only forced the MC to have a s*x change but to have children. And then was possessive of the MC against their children

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KatarinaCitcat
KatarinaCitcat rated it
November 20, 2022
Status: --
It's a quick read that takes maybe 7 minutes max, so that's why I am confused about the low ratings due to the horrible "plot." It's smut. Yes it's a r*pey, unhealthy relationship with the ML being a living piece of tr*sh—but to be honest, I doubt most people pick up this novel for good wholesome feelings. People pick this up because they're into forceful, fictional s*x. There's no need to be hung up on characters that you barely get any attachments to (after all, it's only 3 chapters). Just... more>> enjoy the heat and move on. <<less
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Ixzah
Ixzah rated it
October 5, 2021
Status: Completed
if you closed both eyes in the first chapter it's not that bad or this probably applied for ppl who have this kind of guilty pleasure.

Even tho the ML kinda fked up in the head at least he done his responsibility as a husband and father. Not a great father but he knows the boundaries when there's a child.
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WenWen
WenWen rated it
August 9, 2022
Status: extra
This really isn't for the faint of heart. It's just about r*pe and stockholm syndrome. I especially don't like the fact that the chocolate gland was taken away. It's so frustrating how something so personal was ripped out. I kept on reading because I just wanted to see what happened... I regret reading this. It was not enjoyable.
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fluffyredbean
fluffyredbean rated it
December 5, 2023
Status: Completed
Hm, possessive top check. Borderline gaslighting? Check!

But what can I say, if you want to read a short BL smut, this is your go to haha! It's simple and straightforward, typical of omegaverse tropes. The low ratings are probably because the plot is not for the faint of heart... so read at your own risk!

I might be biased because I do love an assertive and borderline psychopathic top. Also b*tching is one of my fave tropes so... hehe
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suitonjutsu02
suitonjutsu02 rated it
November 28, 2023
Status: Completed
Oh wow, I expected some kind of dog blood and angst BUT sweet pwp?? Hmm interesting. Sure it started with ambiguous and questionable relationship but the actual story doesn’t matter, it’s just a plain pwp daily life where the gong is addicted and obsessed with shou
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