"What about Feng Zhao, the Treant Queen, Feng Yu, Ouyang Lan and the others? Have they really disappeared completely?"

Wan Wei didn't look down at his kind and brave lover who was looking at the starry sky, and suddenly felt that his heart was extremely soft.

His rare, soft voice said:

"No."

"The starry sky you look up to, the universe, is their final destination."

"They went home. Using their remaining thoughts and powers, a new cycle was opened."

After a long time, Mo Yang looked at the starry sky and smiled. His smile grew wider. Finally, he said loudly to the starry sky:

"Come on!"

My dear comrades!

"Goodbye!!"

My dear friends!

I just noticed the cover of the novel. It's the starry sky! _༼ ༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ༽_

001, another guide and 006, Mo Yang's guide are fighting.

It's specially funny when the author wrote the fight of the guides, because you see, guides are described as glowing metal balls. And imagine two glowing balls smashing at each other, it'll only look funny. They look more of a decoration/display than a fight.

It looks more funny because they also verbally tr*sh talk each other while smashing the other 🤣. I can't get enough of these ball guides.

The fact that the author herself refer to this as her "more serious writting" (In terms of plot I presume? the tone was really un-serious) is surpirsing, considering that this book is about how a man who should be in jail for mu*der goes on to save the world from an alien invation that happens in the form of an infinite flow game whilst escaping the police and later on bossing them about because he has plot armor so he and the ML are the only OP people to save us all. Even the secondary characters recognize this fact in a very deadpool way (They call themselves secondary characters and that they need to follow the MC and ML because they're the true protagonists lol several times)

How clever can your book and characters be when in the third act we're all calling Inspector Song this, Inspector Song that and he never suspects a thing!!!! You never told them your name!!! wake up dude, you're supposed to be a super cop! one that, at 33 YO, went to numerous pursuits and life-and-death situations an almost retired special forces JUST AT 33. You wouldn't know his age unless he told you (which he does)... he seems so much older with his tunnel vision and self-rightouness added to all that experience, this dude became a cop in the womb. He becomes suspicious of their identity in the next arc but still remains oblivious, the same dude that was looking straight into an invisibility card and being damn sure that the suspect should be where he was staring. (And he was! the card tricked you buhu)

The ML is just there to be OP. There's nothing and I repeteat NOTHING that he cannot do. He can literally open a persons brain in the middle of the garden? jungle? place with plants? and sew them up again (without needle nor thread) and not leave blood traces or anything!! He dissects ppl like they're literally insects, and I'm not talking about his psycho mentality of "everything other than my research and mi bit*h is beneat me" I mean LITERALLY.

Also the chemistry is non-existent. He loves the MC because he's the MC.

The MC reminds me of the conspiracy gods in American Gods. This dude is kinda amorphous. Not physically, we're reminded of how incredible handsome he is every paragraph of every chapter. If the secondary characters or npc don't say he's handsome, he would reminds us himself. This is how self-centered this mu*derer is.

Then why do I have problems with him? It's his personality or kinda lack off one that makes it difficult to connect to him. He's supposed to be an author... of what? we don't know, in the beggining he says que never wrote romance but that changes in the first arc when he says he's written romance but never actually experienced it... so, which is it???? what kind of books does this bit*h write??? he's a CEO, the whole book starts because some conspiracy happened and some corrupted ppl mu*dered his father and made it look like a su*cide to swallow their company... what f*ckin kind of company???? it's said that he has ties with the military by the Tang side but... tf? maybe this intel is revealed after chapter 120. I'm 30 chapters short of finishing this but I'm really fed up. (I will finish it eventually. I'm not in a hurry thoince the chapter titles are summaries for the whole chapter and full of f*ckin spoilers). About his skill set as a human being, he can do anything and everything the plot requires. He should put that in his resume.

This is so blatantly s*upid.

In an author note around the 90ish chapter that f*cking as*hole of the writter went on and said "I don't plan to make the dream world to weak"...................... tf?????? what do you mean by that? is chapter 90ish and you still don't f*ckin know the full strenght of your goddam antagonist??? if you don't know then who??? you have no storyboard for this shit??? It shows actually. It really shows that this person didn't have much of plan when writing this... Which leads me back to the affirmation that "this is a more serious work" in what f*ckin sense? plz send me help.

The first game is a heartthrob game that has players capturing "love targets". It's essentially a school life dating sim but many players will take advantage of the settings to sexualise the NPC students and "capture" them.

We find out later that the NPCs aren't actually 18yos. They are acting, and have their own reasons to act that way. The "players" are also conditioned by their systems to be ignorant, so most of their heads are filled with cotton. The hidden setting of the first game is such that the actual preys were the players, not the NPCs.

The author did villainize the pe*verts, but there is a still inherent predatory theme that got brushed off lightly, so it might be uncomfortable to read.

Till chapter 140 I found it hard to believe they could turn the tide. So when I saw their crazy powerups and teamwork shown from the human race, it felt ridiculous. However this kind of alien vs earth plot has always been hard to conclude in a happy end.

Even the author said that "If aliens really invaded earth, I doubt we could come together and stand our ground. However, I'm writing a fantasy novel here." And thus, I'll close an eye and rate it as a fantasy novel.

Although humans are often selfish and greedy, when it comes to facing a common enemy that is life threatening, it was quite meaningful to read how everyone, despite their differences, worked together to defeat the ultimate boss.

there was an emergence of a special character or item

I don't think the MC ever used the wedding card item he obtained from the Happy Town instances. I was hoping he'd summon his childhood friend using the card at one point lol

Basically all the NPC are from worlds that were devoured previously by the system. Therefore the NPC in the first world's love game are not genuinely 18. Just like the MC forced to play the love game, many of them are trapped to be s*ave to the system world and several of them were 24/25+ or even older but their world died and now they are stuck here. The system is an evil organization that would slowly corrupt the world and then devour the people.

There is female character who goes on same missions several times with the MC, and she was a big actress who got cancer before the dream world came.

But there is no explanation at all about what happened to her after the dream world disappeared (either she got sick again or remained in good health) as well as several other side characters who seemed to just disappear.

A small example, there is a character named Zhou Api, whose name sometimes changes to Zhou Apu, and yes this is just the smallest example

For example, the story is in character A's pov, but half way through the story the translator suddenly says that it is actually character B's pov, even though the original is still in A's pov.

This was really confusing, and it made me have to reread the mixed up parts again and again