Unscrupulous Enchantress: The Young Miss Has Arrived!

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Luan Hualie is just too pitiful! She was just playing a game when she was suddenly transported into another world to become the Young Miss. Just this is okay, but she actually doesn’t have the slightest bit of power!

However, at this moment she had long stopped being the originally powerless eldest young miss. Mythical weapons and pets in her hand, what is there to fear underneath the heavens?

She rose above the mountains and brought down the oceans, and even more so subdued great amounts of devil beasts and holy beasts!

When she swept away the entire continent with her powerful and imposing manner, who could tell she was originally that ridiculous eldest young miss of Lu Family?

He, the prince of Qin, a black-bellied little shotacon, played the pig to eat the tiger. In the midst of the collisions and crossing of swords, how did his mind and body fall into enemy hands?

He, the spawn of the devil, slaughtered and felled the whole world. Without heart, without emotion, without desire. A long contest, countless fights. Why did a brilliant ray of light start to penetrate that frozen world of his?

He, the beautiful man saved from the slave market, obviously had excellent martial arts. Yet, how was he reduced to the most inferior slave? Faced with her salvation, why were his thoughts in a whirl?

And there was still him!

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Unscrupulous Enchantress: The Eldest Young Miss has Arrived!
无良魔女:大小姐驾到
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KKristen
KKristen rated it
July 2, 2018
Status: c5
I don't know why this has such a high rating.

It is an exceedingly average, Mary Sue, video game transmigration story so far. I don't think I'm exaggerating, and here's why.

Summary:

  • A super martial-arts and disguise expert, who is also the highest-leveled, best player in a fantasy MMORPG, is also a mysterious 23-year old female.
  • She goes into a dungeon that no one else could ever beat before. Her party effortlessly beats 2 floors before they're all murdered by a super AI boss on the 3rd floor. After her entire party is killed, the final boss suddenly bows down to her and becomes her servant. It also gives her a gem that unlocks a door that sucks her into the game world.
Setting:

  • This fantasy world is like your typical xianxia/xuanhuan world: 4 job classes, named and numbered level systems for people, items, pets, armor, etc.
  • Powerful women are equal to men in this country, so they can take multiple male concubines. Obviously the main character will do this later on.
  • The main character transmigrated into the weak and stupid, "trash character, " oldest daughter of the #1 family on the continent.
  • She brings her storage system from the game and ALL her jewels, money, pets, and weapons.
  • Now her personality does a 180-degree change and she's super cold and mysterious.
The writing style is an "information dump":

  • Many long paragraphs with emotionless, encyclopedia-like descriptions and lists of terms, levels, background, etc. Some of these lists are actually numbered.
  • It almost feels like reading a Wikipedia entry rather than a movel. I kept feeling like they should just give up on paragraphs and turn it into bullet points.
  • You will be introduced to 9 cities, 10 characters, 10 magic beast levels, 6 equipment levels, and 4 job classes (all with unique names that have no relation to the others) within 1.5 chapters. This is not an exaggeration -- I counted. Good luck remembering any of them...
Translation:

  • I don't mean the translation is bad. It has very few errors, and a new chapter is released once a week or every few days. It's just the actual writing style that overloads you with too much information and not enough visuals or feeling.
It's possible that this novel will improve later on (after the author finishes writing ALL the definitions for everything). But I'm dropping it after only 5 chapters.
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Alina Moktan
Alina Moktan rated it
July 4, 2018
Status: c6
This is interesting novel where MC crossed another world while fighting boss. In this world, only stronger respect and treated as high, weak will treated as low. MC transmigration into weak Elder Miss. I can't wait for MC become stronger

I am looking forward this novel. With Cool Kickass MC show her talent And work hard to become strong.
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Night Assissin
Night Assissin rated it
September 22, 2018
Status: c24
This novel sure is unique and special. I really like this cool and badass MC. She is strong, powerful, clever, calm and capable. Even without magic, she is kickass and strong. She isn't ruthless and cold type. Male lead still hasn't appear, more ever MC don't need ml, she don't give sh*t about romance. She only think of become stronger and proudly.

It's very interesting novel. At first I though it's was going to boring but I was wrong, it's got better when MC left home to become stronger. I like... more>> how her guards become her loyal subordinate.

High Recommends it. <<less
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Nana (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
Nana (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ rated it
November 25, 2018
Status: --
Chinese web novel author like to make their MC as a waste material, in xianxia where single linggen (root for practicing) is a genius, they put 5-line linggen for MC, and such. But fear not! This MC has her halo/golden finger at maximum level! Kinda exciting eh..
All in all, after reading 80% of the whole novel, I feel that this is a quite good novel, but cohesion between arc kinda lacking, when you read it in one seating, the line isn't connected well. The meat (s*x scene) is there,... more>> not tantalizing enough, though quite explicit but not succulent. <<less
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storybookknight
storybookknight rated it
October 14, 2018
Status: c29
Even for the occasionally nonsensical genre of 'young woman transmigrates to another world where she becomes OP', this story isn't very good. The plot goes all over the place, the MC commits random murders and nobody seems to care, she tells off her evil ex in a tavern and "everyone claps" for her... granted, stories about OP MCs stomping all over their rivals aren't terribly realistic to begin with, but this story is worse than average in that regard. It also just isn't written very well, with a lot of... more>> telling-not-showing, trite turns of phrase, and unrealistic dialogue.

There are a few characters that are a little interesting, and the MC being kind of a moron is a little entertaining, so that saves it from a one-star rating, but overall I don't recommend this story. <<less
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stephanietan24
stephanietan24 rated it
February 26, 2019
Status: c733
Don't bother reading it. The main protagonist is not only a total mary-sue character but the plot is full of deus-ex-machina and plot holes. Although she is described as being smart and witty, many of the things she did make no logical sense at all but somehow she makes it through the story anyway. She's also not as independent or smart as she is described in the novel. While she can hold her own fight, it is not through her own efforts and power. Pretty much all the obstacles and... more>> dangers she ever encountered were practically resolved in one way or another through the assistance from the guys around her (particularly Bai who constantly teaches and couches her). It's ridiculous how confident she is in herself despite not having much power at the beginning of the story. Needless to say, it only gets worse later on as she becomes even more OVERPOWER.

All the male characters in the novel were constantly praising how good she was or how amazing she was even though she barely did anything impressive. She could just talk her way out of her problems no matter how stupid or ridiculous it sounded and somehow still WOW all the guys around her. It would have been fine if it was just a few guys here and there that do this once in a while but NOPE, this kept happening all the time whenever she goes to a new location. Almost all the young, good-looking, powerful male characters (even the cannon fodders and enemies) in the novel were instantly attracted to her and seemingly fell in love with her for no good apparent reason whatsoever.

As for the romance, don't pin too much of your hopes on it. IMHO, aside from Bai, Death God and Wei Mo (the main 3 guys), the romance that she has with the rest of the guys in her harem were disappointing and badly developed. To clarify for readers, she ended up having more than 10 guys in her harem. While the rest of the guys were persistently trying to chase after her and shower her with affections, most of the time, she didn't really reciprocate those feelings. In fact, she didn't even seem like she was interested in the rest of the guys at all but only gave in because of the ordeals they went through together and the stuff that they had done for her. The author didn't even bother spending much time on developing the main protagonist's romantic relationships with the rest of the guys like she did with the main 3 guys. I actually felt bad for them. : ( To top it off, many new characters kept being introduced as though they were important to the story but then got thrown away soon afterwards. You will never hear about them later on. It gets to a point that you can barely remember who is who. There were probably more than 200 characters in the story, to which over 75% of them were not relevant at all. I don't get why the author even introduced them to the story if they barely contribute to the plot anyway. The number of beasts she entered into a contract with was so ridiculous to the point it made me speechless. Literally, all the beasts introduced in the story ultimately became her contractual beasts/underlings in the end with no exception. There were also a lot of useless infodumps that adds nothing to the story, like how much each of her beasts levels up, etc. I'm not even kidding, there was legit a chapter where almost half of the page was dedicated to describing EACH of her beasts level-up (at that point, she had like over 50 beats). There were a lot of dull moments in the story precisely because of useless and stupid infodumps.

TL;DR

  • A mary-sue protagonist that is super arrogant and overpowered
  • Character's actions often don't correspond to their description (smart character don't act smart, strong character don't act strong, etc.)
  • One-dimensional and forgettable casts
  • Too many characters get introduced and thrown away
  • Every guy in the story is attracted and in love with the protagonist
  • Badly developed romance aside from the main 3 guys
  • Infodumps that didn't contribute to the story
  • Things just happened for no reason or badly explained
  • Lot of plotholes and deus-ex-machina
  • The author kept hyping things up in the story but then never fulfils them
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duranathos1962
duranathos1962
April 28, 2019
Status: c69
A partial review for now.

This is full information,

Fast paced story

Every chapter has long paragraph so its worth at least the wait of weekly released.

Very promising.

I binged this thing for a night.
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Marq Mortis
Marq Mortis rated it
July 30, 2019
Status: c85
It has such high rating because it's genuinely easy and fun to read. Even if I don't remember what the hell happened during the most of this shit, and it makes no sense at times, and proportions are wayyyy of because Chinese writers never heard of limits or even tact, but most of the introduced love interests are genuinely likable, and they have a semblance of actual chemistry with the protagonist.

There's a lot of place for improvement, but let's not kid ourselves; it's a Chinese novel, and these, while greatly... more>> entertaining, always suffer from a lineup of scarily similar problems (pacing [by gods, the pacing], overpowered characters, lack of limit as to how many enemies throw at a person, lack of actual deep relationship building between characters, arcs beginning and abruptly cutting from time to time, deus-ex-machinas pulled out of donkey's ass, ridiculous conflicts that, to us, are little more than squabbles of young children in the sandbox and readers getting slapped with new [vital] info partway into the second half of the story, to name a few).

I'm not saying this story is good. Not by English-speaking standards, at least. (I'm not also saying it's bad.) But by the standards set forth Chinese novels? Damn, this is actually some good reading material.

Also, the translators are doing their best, give them credit for that. <<less
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Sarah018
Sarah018
January 13, 2019
Status: c389
Its quite a good one. But I think the MC is quite dependent on her beasts and white tiger. I mean white tiger does every single for her and though her isn't strong enough all she had to do is to fuse with beasts. I mean in this super powerful beasts help her become powerful and everyone falls in love with her, I know its a reverse harem but seriously its missing the emotional part. Even if she faces some difficulties or powerful opponents we know shes gonna be alrigt... more>> coz she has powerful MLs. <<less
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EmpressRouge25
EmpressRouge25 rated it
March 4, 2019
Status: c205
Ok. It's a really interesting story. There are a lot of entertaining aspects, but there are also some stupid parts. I'm barely halfway through the book and I can't remember who is who.

Edit- So I got to chapter 205 and I must say that even though I'm desperate for stories with similar genre as this one, I can't take it anymore. So I'm taking a break and possibly re-reading it later. (The fact that I have to take a break should tell you something. It's a tedious book to read.)... more>> <<less
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