I'm waiting to see where the story goes but it's getting harder to read such short chapters, 7 chapters in and I've read less than I get out of 1 chapter of most stories. Reading a couple of sentences a day is already making the story feel disjointed, I worry about how the pacing can be done.

I feel like I'm reading a 4-koma with descriptions instead of pictures. The chapters are extremely short. No good for me, but maybe others will like it.

I love the premise of average people responding to extraordinary circumstances, like a dungeon suddenly showing up under their house, but I don't know what the author was thinking with this kind of writing style. Each "chapter" in this novel is only a paragraph or two at best.