i liked that the reason why the MC was not freaking out on battles n' stuff bcz his original earth was kinda one of those manhwas that monstars invaded their planet blahblahblah

i liked how some of the characters got some great character development

i forgot when was it but the MC said to his siblings that he will bring back souvenirs for them since he was going on a battle or something, a couple of battles later he still didnt back any, even if its trivial the author should pay attention to these things

i really hate it on how the MC wins every time, that seems impossible no matter how strong your companions are, this was my first novel so yes, my second novel was plot heavy and the MC also loses time to time unlike this, it feels like tho whole novel is wishful fullfilment

the author sucks at executing and storytelling if she/he put it in other words it wouldve been much interesting, the storytelling is by far boring, also the MC does not get character development at all which is very annoying

it is funny sometimes, but it is honestly cringe.

At first, the ancient powers are just described as some powers that have legend story about who have them before. The shield power only explained as a power that was owned by someone gluttony in the past, the wind (?) power as a power that owned by a thief in the past, etc. But when MC went to an island to take the wind power, it showed all the story behind those ancient power's previous owners, and they was the hero/people who fought against evil organization that nearly destroyed the world long time ago. Those evil people made black mana continuously that make people suffer, dead, and starving because they also blocked the sun to make the fields couldn't produce any food.

The gluttony one turn out to be someone who had shield power and fought against those evil people in her territory and the reason of her gluttony legend was because she always starving since the land couldn't produce food anymore (f**k, I felt bad because I look down at her before). The thief one became a thief for her people because they suffered from famine. One by one of those ancient power's owner dead by the evil people, and only the rock power one able to stand until the end and killed those evil people.

In his original world, he is not an ordinary working man who spend his time as a normal man. His own world was intruded by monsters and people starting got power to fight them. He himself have that same personality (asosial but still somewhat care for his friends) and got very tired fighting and protecting people. That explain why he want to do nothing in the other world. And I think the reason why he didn't care about his own world when he got transmigrated is because his friends have died so he have no one there (maybe)

Huhu, nvm, thanks for the manhua, I found this masterpiece. Hearts to you all, especially for our lovely translators and god author-nim ♡♡♡.

Toonka, he was such a dumbass when first introduced but now he thinks before acting. Well he's still the same in some parts I guess. But he's one of my favorite character now. Especially in the early chapter of the mogoru x whipper war arc, he genuinely thinks that the person he thought was weak, Cale, is his close friend. Cale who was the first to come to help him in the war... Aw this blockhead is such a pure and poor guy, Cale was scamming you before too.

Clopeh as well, he was an enemy when they first met and he had his four limbs cut off by them. But now he's a devotee to Cale... Kinda sad but he's a crazy guy so it's fine.

The characters aren't just purely justice driven good people or something cliche like that, like Rosalyn and Mary who is greedy to get more stronger, Choi Han also isn't that pure too.

btw you should read this to enjoy White Star's (the antagonist of the story) clownery too LOL. He gets into so much misunderstanding about Cale.