Transmigrated into a Heartthrob Novel and Went OOC

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Fang Chaozhou found himself transmigrating into a Danmei novel, as a character who had the exact same name as himself. He became the Second Brother of the Protagonist and he had no clue who the ML was.

In the original book, Fang Chaozhou loves the Protagonist and is madly in love with his Junior Brother; as he blocks swords for him, kills monsters for him, and bangs against any wall for him.

And now…

Fang Chaozhou: Forget it, there are too many suitors, I’d better wash up and sleep.

Since Fang Chaozhou gave up on pursuing his Junior Brother, the Protagonist’s other suitors saw that Fang Chaozhou had become enlightened. They became good friends with him, sharing their little secrets with him from time to time.

Suitor No. 1: Last time I picked celestial grass for Junior Brother and he said thank you.

Fang Chaozhou (surprised): Junior Brother must like you!

Suitor No. 2: Junior Brother went on a mission with me last time, and asked me to pay attention to my safety.

Fang Chaozhou (confirming): He absolutely likes you, as he didn’t run away.

Suitor No. 3: His clothes were torn when he fought the monster last time. I lent him my coat, but he didn’t want it.

Fang Chaozhou (touching his chin): I’m sure it must be because he likes you. He’s too shy.

Later, the Junior Brother came to his door.

His Junior Brother who has a beautiful face coldly asks: Second Brother, someone has been spreading rumors every day that I like others, does this mean he likes me?

Fang Chaozhou coughed twice: Junior Brother, if you have something to say, can you untie the immortal rope on my body first?

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Xuyên Tiến Vạn Nhân Mê Văn Ta Nhân Thiết Băng Rồi
Xuyên Vào Sách Vạn Nhân Mê Nhân Thiết Tôi Bể Nát
穿进万人迷文的我人设崩了
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Monicas
Monicas rated it
January 10, 2021
Status: Completed
I enjoyed reading this novel. Good story line and development of characters.
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hxr10
hxr10 rated it
February 12, 2024
Status: Completed
This novel is solid imo. Sure it does have plot holes, and could've been better polished up. Some aspects that other reviewers have mentioned do tend to be irritating but believe me, the author doesn't make it too terrible for us, or for the main characters. The best aspect is that it was really really funny, I found myself laughing out loud or letting out snorts all the time. Minor complaint about the ending tho, from translator's notes there seems to be 2 versions but I unfortunately I didn't get... more>> anything beyond that hhah. Also the other suitors didn't seem to have completely given up by the end, so I'm quite curious if there'd be any sequels. I wonder if our couple would be able to ascend too and not repeat the fate of ML's parents. Anyways, turn a bit of a blind eye and it's going to be a good ride. Managed to scratch my itch at least.

Just my 5 cents on the main couple:

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I think MC and ML do suit each other better compared to the Sect Master. His ending broke my heart too but when I was reading about how the MC was turned into a puppet and taken back to the lone peak I couldn't help but feel intense pity toward him. He's such a warm, gentle boy and it just felt so sad for him to be isolated in every way like that. He feels like someone who needs to be bathed in love and care, to gently glow in happiness. I disagree that Master Zhongli is a petty and vengeful person, it's just that his EQ isn't very high and he is very strict. Too strict and inflexible for the MC imo. He was learning near the end but his learning curve was taking too slow compared to ML. ML has his yandere moments but he was under demonic possession and though he does have his shortcomings, he takes care and listens to our MC. He isn't strict with him and even when he is, he takes care not to go too far and that's the greatest difference between him and the sect master.

Though I do wish Master Zhongli's ending wasn't so sad. No one deserves an ending like that. I really hope someone writes a good fanfic for him somewhere.

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Nicha010147
Nicha010147 rated it
July 7, 2023
Status: c51
The MC in the novel was always cracking me up with his hilarious antics and adorable nature. Each of the MLs also had their own unique charm that was captivating in its own way.
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teoradom
teoradom rated it
June 8, 2023
Status: c26
The chapters in the beginning was really funny, I never knew I could laugh like that just by reading. Unfortunately, the plot and the pacing of the story was just not to my liking. This story lacks depth in setting, characters and plot.

MC's head being empty is fine, that's the base of the story, at least it adds to the comedic effect. However it goes too far when it's not just him, everyone introduced so far is shallow has had empty heads, especially that Liyue and his son. To me... more>> there is a limit to how lack of depth and ridiculous the plotline can be until it gets frustrating. The ML is also quite shallow where there are only 3 modes to his personality, so far he is only ever in one of these 3 states, cold-jealous-aroused.

The author's writing also did not describe most settings clearly. It's a little regrettable especially since the story happens across many locations.

Ultimately, the Misunderstandings, miscommunication and pure s*upidity from all characters that becomes the foundation of a plot is what kills the story for me. <<less
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Spaciry
Spaciry rated it
June 4, 2022
Status: c91
I fell in love with this story! I've been reading like an addict for days!

MC is hilarious and a big salt fish who keeps getting himself into weird situations and misunderstandings, and the harem guys are one more peculiar than the other. Everyone had a lot of fun.

I just loved the pace of this story and even though the characters aren't super awesome, they're still fun in my opinion.
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Amaruna Myu
Amaruna Myu rated it
March 15, 2022
Status: Completed
I read it without knowing there was gonna be a harem, but even though I disliked harems, there was something about this story which draws me to it.

the plot is fast paced but the romance slow. In MC's "harem" there are only 2½ men that I like.

1) junior brother 2) Shizu 3) crossdresser 4/5) evil father and son

the romance with junior brother was the expected one and was nothing special, but I really like the MCxShizu dynamic: a boy afraid of the master and the master who is outwardly very... more>> cruel and cold yet shows kindness to the boy. The cat also adds to their relationship in my opinion. I would love an entire story on this Master (top) x Disciple (bottom) dynamic relationship. (Kinda like child raising but im kinda into it in novels)

the epilogue part of the novel was expected, for some reason. I already had in mind the idea that MC was actually the original who reincarnated into the modern world then transmigrated to the book. But despite the predictability, I still like the story <<less
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lizbestraume
lizbestraume rated it
March 6, 2022
Status: Completed
i started reading this because of the harem tag and I didn't think i'd be invested, but I was. I still am. now it's one of my favorite novels.

the ending is 1v1 and it's very obvious who MC would end up with, at least. unlike certain novels, the author had designed their scenes to dominate the story. even if they were supposed to be separated, the author would find a way to reunite them. rest assured, you won't feel robbed once you know he'll be the main ml.

the author also... more>> knew how to balance the moments between MC and his harem, but you'll see that one of the harem members got a special treatment since he was petty much a promising candidate for ml. the author dedicated a long period for his and mc's relationship to develop, but the amount of their scenes didn't outnumber the main ml's, which I appreciate, because this could raise any false hopes, tbh. if the author gave him the opportunity (ies) to cross the line, I'm afraid us readers won't be able to let him go...

just to be clear, the main ML is obviously...
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xue danrong. he's been there literally since the first chapter.

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i'd say MC and ml's relationship progressed in the sort of "that escalated quickly" way. MC refused ML at first, because he was simply lazy to deal with ml's suitors, lmao. it was so ridiculous, but that's exactly where you'll find it humorous.

there's a super cliché twist in the middle, which is:
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drum rolls, everyone, AMNESIA. still, it didn't lessen my interest from reading further. ♡

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anyway, I adore mc's personality. him being a salted fish is HILARIOUS and relatable, so I was hooked from chapter 1. I don't think he grew much, personality-wise (lmao), except for being courageous to admit his feelings for ml, but that's what I like about him. he's so dumb, haha. morever, thanks to his idiotic antics, it's amusing to watch how everyone who at first courted the protagonist (ml) turned to fall for MC. this trope will never fail to entertain me, I swear, lol. though it'll eventually backfire on me...

what saddens me the most from this novel, however, is the ending for:

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zhong li yueshi... the other promising candidate I was talking about. if it ain't the second lead syndrome, god damn it... but he really deserves better, and HE WENT THROUGH A DELICIOUS CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT THANKS TO MC. I mean - I know. he wasn't completely a saint, either, back then. but I can't help but go soft for him after reading the extra chapter about him! T___T

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there's also a twist about mc's past, which I'm not gonna reveal here.

overall, it's a happy ending... and a very enjoyable read when you're stressed.

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MC and ML got married. ML is very devoted to MC. he's like every ML you know: cold, but only warm to MC. obssessive. possessive, blah blah. you'll like him, though, but you might also prefer zhong li yueshi to him... however, I'm happy MC ended with ml. out of everyone, he's the best candidate for me.

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Feiyiguo
Feiyiguo rated it
March 1, 2022
Status: Completed
This novel is soooooo nice!!! It's a must read!!!

The plot is easy to follow, really funny, and all the love interests are very interesting and have their own charms, like I am actually *a bit* thinks it was a pity that MC could only ended up with ML, I was thinking that it also good if turns out to be a real harem lol /hj

MC is a salted fish (a term for a lazy person), hates fighting, doesn't want to involved in troublesome things, lazy to practice cultivation until his... more>> master often gets really angry because of this disciple of him, I see myself in him (lol). But he is very kind and actually a bit clueless.

ML is your typical cool gong, hard to approach, looking at others with piercing eyes and flat expression. He was inteoduced as the number one beauty in the jianghu. Everyone likes him and want to pursue him, but he only has his eyes on MC, really devoted to him.

I repeat it again, this novel is soooooo nice! If you like a novel with many love interests pursuing MC, you might like this one!

MC was transmigrated from modern era to ancient era and became the second shixiong in the sect, the master and every fellow disciples loves and pampering him until he became soooooo lazy. In short, 6 man (yesss 6 handsome man 😍) who used to love and pursuing ML turns to love MC. Many interesting events happens, our ML need to fight these people to wins MC. <<less
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Qy
Qy rated it
December 28, 2021
Status: Completed
Um this is the type of novel I like where there's a lot of regret from the people who liked the MC but I feel like this would be wayyyyy better as a harem
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Yerdeki1Bulut
Yerdeki1Bulut
January 14, 2024
Status: c1
Zhongli, oh Zhongli, my heart aches for him, 🥺🥺😢😢especially after reading the extra. Also, okay, the story is okay, but the memory loss and the events after that seemed ridiculous. Whatever it takes, read it.
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samwhite
samwhite
November 5, 2023
Status: c138
Honestly, after finishing the whole novel I feel a little dissatisfied.

Don’t get me wrong, the comedic part of the novel was spot on, and as I knew about the harem tag, I frankly knew what I was getting myself into.

But after reading through the whole thing, the one thing that left a bitter taste in my mouth is the lack of built-up between the ML and MC. Yes, we do get quite a few scenes where there is progression but to tell you the truth, I did not see any... more>> signs as to why both characters fell for each other on the first place, or how it happened, so I just couldn’t attach myself with their deep affection towards each other. There was also a lack of character development for both sides (which I will admit is just my personal opinion. I like characters who go through things and learn and grow from them, changing them into a better and more powerful person.) and honestly, I found the relationship built up of the shou and a certain side character more enticing and engaging than the main gong. (If you know, you know)

This is honestly the first review I'm leaving after reading any danmei, but I just couldn’t stop myself after reaching the end. (Yes, I didn’t read the extras and I'm not planning to either)

If you are looking for a story with comic relief and big drama, this story might suit your taste. But if you are looking for a story that has a strong emotional built-up, good character progression and a solid undeniable chemistry between the shou and gong, this story might not be the one for you. <<less
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Pcrome
Pcrome rated it
September 16, 2023
Status: Completed
Came here after reading the author's other work (A Hundred ways to kill a heartthrob, which pierced my heart with a hundred swords before sweetly putting medicine onto the bleeding organ to appease the pain) Contrary to the other one, this one is comedic, light -hearted and sweet. Just the dose and therapy I need to heal from the injury my heart suffered from AHWTKAH.

Still reading and will edit after but I will still give 5 starts because I'm reading this not because of the book, but because of the... more>> author. I trust the author.

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HOLY F*CK. THAT'S HILARIOUS! ITS SO GOOOOD! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH FOR THESE REASONS:

  • Hilarious and steamy misunderstandings. The type that would make you blush and laugh at the same time. I love how everyone is subconsciously falling for the MC and assuming things on their own making them think that the MC is coquettish and is a playboy. So the "harem" just have to eat vinegar daily lol.
  • The MC. I love how easy-going and carefree he is. Lazy and unambitious but also kind and charming. He's avoiding being involved in the ml's harem and all the drama with them but unintentionally making the ML and his whole harem fall head over heels for him at the same time his salted fish life was ruined and he just have to deal with all the trouble surrounding the ml. I love the way he deals with the other gongs and save his ass from bursting it's so funny.
  • The harem tag. One of the things I really like about this is that there are a lot of handsome gongs with different flavors going after the MC. Each and every one of them first thought they like the ML (the protagonist shou of the og novel) but ended up being more attracted to our MC. This is the trope I like. Especially when they treat the MC harshly at first, I really want these s*upid gongs to fall deeper for the MC and start treating him with love (and chasing after his chrysanthemum). The way the gongs go against each other and "quarrel" for the mc's love... the MC is like a bastard emperor and the gongs are like the concubines. I can't stop laughing plss.
  • The ML. The main ML is obviously the junior brother. I love how he's very different from the rest of the harem. He's the only one who treats our MC with care. Even if he's cold, he didn't mistreat the MC unlike the other s*upid gongs. He won't hurt the MC just because he's eating vinegar, well, at worst, he would just press the MC down~
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    The plot. At first, I thought it's really gonna be a slice of life Genre with a salted fish MC... WRONG! Every situation is not only hilarious... but also very exciting! With the MC and all the trouble around him, there's really no chapter that would be boring. MC always gets himself caught up with the gongs, he finds way to escape, when he fails, he'll get stuck with one or two of the gongs when he succeeds, he'll be drag in an embarrassing situation and be labeled as a coquettish sl*t or a scumbag lol it's funny. There's also a lot of dangerous situation and desperate times when MC is in danger and ML is protecting him...I like the part where ML is unable to save the MC at first and he was knocked unconscious because he wants to save the MC but the situation is too drastic and dangerous lol. It satisfies my dirty desire for the ML to feel hopeless upon not being able to save the MC and then the journey to turning possessive starts ! (though he was already possessive but not enough for me) I want him to be overly obsessed more and more whilst realizing that if he's not strong enough, MC could get snatch in front of him so easily wahahahha! Lol it's also funny to see the other gongs panic upon finding out the MC got caught up in the collapse of the realm and might have died lol! They were so harsh and mean to the MC, it's a breath of fresh air to see them this pathetic and try so hard lol.

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SyringaCrow
SyringaCrow rated it
December 3, 2022
Status: Completed
Felt incoherent and very confusing in terms of the main plot. Tried to do a switch-up, just made me confused. The sudden stop in translation and trying to then read the already confusing text as MTL made it much more confusing. I also just kinda lost interest halfway through, but that is entirely just my attention span and nothing else.

The word 'autistic' is used for a story that doesn't centre around an autistic character. Felt like a descriptor and less like an actual disorder.
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rosaa1
rosaa1 rated it
November 7, 2022
Status: c12
This novel is deeply triggering.

In ch 6, this particular passage quite disturbed me, but I ignored the red flag hoping it was a one off thing.

TW: s*xual assault

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But his father (Li Yeye), that big devil, was not easy to deal with. After all, when he just met Xue Danrong with one look, he tied Xue Danrong up. (In original timeline) He also intended to r*pe him. In the end, he didn’t succeed because Xue Danrong stabbed his heart from the back. But this big devil did not die even when he was stabbed in the heart. It was clear that his cultivation level was high.

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Unfortunately, ch 12 was very difficult to stomach.

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Li Yeye turns MC into snake, holding him hostage. Later on he transforms MC into ML's appearance and mol*sts him to demonstrate to the ML just what he would to to him.

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Ikkuzaoshi
Ikkuzaoshi rated it
September 27, 2022
Status: Completed
Its ok. There are parts that I like and also parts that I dont like. The story is overall light and comedy. Not overly focused on cultivation or harem. The MC and ML deserved each other, other potential MLs is just bullshit. I really dont understand ppl who likes the Sect Master and ship him with MC.

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The Sect Master is literally the most selfish suitor imho. He forced things on MC and his ideals on ML. MC is very lazy which is his bad, but he literally physically harmed MC and said it was all for MC's sake. MC was traumatised, and all he wants is to run away! The sect master separated the ML and MC repeatedly and forced ML to blacken! Even the extra doesnt makes me like him.

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I really felt heartache for the ML. He is younger than MC and everyone literally pampered him and lusted over him which makes him cold towards other ppl. He started to take notice of the MC but everyone said he is confused. Even the MC believed he is confused and in turn he himself felt he was confused.

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The ML was poisoned with snake venom which makes him clings to MC. His master has detained him and clear the venom but later, the ML is still attracted to the MC. When his feelings grew, the masters and even MC said he was confused and still affected by the venom. He was then 'treated' again and even his memories is sealed by the sect master. But ofc he falls in love agains with the MC but soon separated by an accident. He got paranoid and depression during this time. When they were reunited again, the sect master took MC away from him and even threaten MC to be a daoist companion with him. ML just blacken instantly. He only falls in love but everyone is forcing their ideals on the ML.

Later in the xtra, ML asked the sect master about the snake venom and the master acknowledged that he was never confused abt his feeling bcuz of venom, but the masters doesnt want him to falls in love, so they were separated, memories washed etc.. Really, Fck the sect master!

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The one thing I liked abt the novel is that MC never had his heart swayed between the suitors. He doesnt even kiss any other suitors. He was ONLY tempted/seduced by the ML and thus allowed ONLY ML to do any intimate acts to him. He later realised that he has fallen for ML early on, and thats why he was always soft on the ML. Even when he is restricted, drunk, drugged, and sick, he ONLY wants the ML.

The one thing I hate in this novel is... The MC's lazyness.. He was kidnapped and drugged, yet he still doesnt try to impove his cultivation.. He wasnt given any golden finger like other novels MC, but I actually prayed that he will be a bit diligent after things happens and the ML even asked the sect master to teach him. But no.. He is still lazy... I really wonders how his lazyness is something so attractive that makes the sect master so in love with him.. <<less
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PasserByS
PasserByS rated it
September 13, 2022
Status: c87
The characters are very 3 dimensional. There's no love at first sight thing (thank god)

It's like boiling frog in the water thing. From each and every little interaction, the way MC interact with them made them fall for him a little and little. You just suddenly realized 'ah those dumbasses totally love mc'

Mc:

He is a total salt-fish all the way. He munch on snacks, loved to read fanfic, and liked to hide inside a room. A totally normal otaku in an abnormal cultivation world, he doesn't become op just... more>> because he's a transmigrator. It's more refreshing to read than other transmigrated into cultivation novels. Just one thing; like other harem members, he has low eq.

For harem members, they each has their own personalities. I realllllly like the interaction between them and MC.

Sigh... the only thing I don't like about this novel and other harem novels is that you like this person but the author paired MC with another. My selfish thought was since it's harem novel, MC should paired up with no one or everyone!

Sobb.. this novel, I don't like the ML very much. To be honest, the author still haven't pair up MC with anyone elses from the latestest chapter I've read. But I've seen enough hints (and secretly read some spoilers cause my heart can't handle the excitement)

But at least, if MC is going to be paired up with someone, author should write the alternative endings for other members.

But but but I've heard the one I like doesn't even have a proper ending for him (TvT). It's all pain and heartbreak.

I have to regretfully stop here. You've won some, you lose some. Aren't I very smart?

Ehe, To be honest, I don't even know why I don't like ml. I just don't like him?

But just because I don't like him doesn't mean others won't!

For people who like drama and comedy and s*xual tension, I tecommended to check out this novel! <<less
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Lanemesis
Lanemesis rated it
August 10, 2022
Status: c138
I hesitated for a bit, thinking about whether to give this 5 or 4 stars, but in the end I conceded and gave it 5; although it's not perfect, it's my cup of tea, so...

Up until before ... more>>
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MC lost his memory

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it was fine.

Also, it's already obvious from the summary who the ML is, but honestly, I actually wanted MC to end up with someone else. But well. Harem tag, what harem tag.

Overall it's a good read, nice comedic undertone too, but the
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lost memory arc still bothers me, the fact that MC easily believed the chicken's words is ridiculous. If not for that chicken, MC could've ended up with Zhong Liyueshui (The sect master, not sure if it's really his name, because MTL). Honestly I feel kinda bad for all of the other suitors.

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Szara
Szara rated it
August 9, 2022
Status: c87
4.5 stars. I loved this story enough to read a crappy MTL of it on wattpad. So much broken English.

Like others have stated, this is a story about a guy who transmigrated into a story and unintentionally stole all the ML's admirers. (However, the 'harem' tag is incorrect because it's not a harem).

The story is comedic and light-hearted. There were moments where I actually laughed out loud.

... more>> However, you shouldn't go in expecting a romance, because it's rather lacking in that aspect. As a comedy story however, it's pretty enjoyable.

My favorite ship is...

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MC & Li Yiye, the demonic sect leader!

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He gifted MC a giant dildo as a love token... he's kinda pervy, but a'int nothing wrong with that :)

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I found the ML to be kinda boring, tbh. And Zhong li yue is just abusive... don't know why a lot of people rooted for him. (Y'all have bad tastes). But I haven't finished reading the story yet, so maybe my opinion of them will change later..

The story kinda drags around the 70s and 80s, which I deducted half a star for. <<less
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yuukiouji
yuukiouji rated it
February 27, 2022
Status: c138
Loved this! It’s all about the romance.
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MC could be considered beautiful but he might be considered “ordinary” next to ML (original novel shou). It’s his personality, silly and frank, a little cowardly but easygoing, that ends up attracting the novel’s original seme/gongs + reversible seke. This was my favorite part. I loved seeing MC’s “harem” fall for him. I almost want it to be harem but I also feel satisfied that original protagonist became his ML. I feel like the Master/Teacher arc was the most dogblood. Imagine trying to take back your lover from the most powerful cultivator... like damn. I was happy to know original ML protagonist is strong but he isn’t OP and had to work hard to get there, and even then he’s not the most OP in the end but still gets the guy :3

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This was a fun time. I really enjoyed it. I read as MTL so I cannot wait to read it in full once translated, I know it will be soo much better. The MTL gives you a very basic understanding and I still have questions. And I can’t wait to read the extras 🥺 I’m leaving this review as a reminder to come back and read it all over again in the future, because it was a fun and wild ride.
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This person is dying
This person is dying rated it
January 15, 2022
Status: c10
At first the story felt lazy and all over the place amplified with randomly introduced new casts, but it's just quick paced!

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Tada! Meet the demonic sect/clan leader in just 10 chapters.

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(I love quick paced story, fot me it's easier to follow)

Also because an overused erot*c device happen so quickly in early chapter I thought that the author was kinda cheap for so quickly using fanservice, but it's really not that kind of story!

I can feel that the story turning serious with a bit of unreliable-narrator kind of mystery and it's also somewhat hilarious because of it as well.

The casts (side characters) seems to have important roles and actually not random, among them there are main casts as well (like 2nd male lead, 3rd male lead, tirtagonist, etc). Anyway they all kinda seemed insignificant at first because it's kinda unreliable-narrator kind of fast-paced-ness (again).

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The MC is a salted fish meanwhile the characters around him where all serious good people. They are so serious and good that's why they believe MC's lie and was genuinely worried about him. In their eyes, former MC was not someone who would lie like that. For those who believe they are gullible, they aren't. The author didn't write in detail but I just guessed, like reading under the line, that's why I said it has unreliable-narrator kind of mystery and also quick-paced because author seemed to skip details that the MC didn't care about. Maybe I'm just filling in the blank with positive answer myself, but hey it ain't bad.

I also don't understand completely with the cold attitude of the junior brother who appears in the summary. What is his actual feeling towards the former shixiong (or the current MC) ?He was the original shou rumoured to end with someone else and also spoilered to be the true ML (which is a very interesting point!). But because MC didn't care enough about him (and he's dense, surprise!), there's no more detail and I like this guessing story.

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Overall it's a fast paced, a very original and serious story dissillusioned by not-so-serious salted-fish MC (which make it hillarious) surrounded with ungeneric casts. It's kind of unreliable-narrator but the tag 'misunderstanding' probably enough said about it.

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Story with 'unreliable narrator' tag I've read usually have the MC later realizes that the world or people in it are not what they previously thought and they changed their perspective which also affected readers'. This story might have the MC dense about many points that readers were perfectly aware of til the end. And this story might be taken from other characters perspective a lot in the future. So this story might not qualify for that tag. idk since I only read a bit. I only use that term for my points that it felt like that in earlier chapter. Most story are usually start like that I guess.

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I really really have high expectation for this one. I hope it's really a good story and not because I'm reading into this too deeply.

So...

Thank you for previous translators and current translator for picking this up. Since I never read mtl first, if you guys didn't pick this up, I'll never find this gem. Of course I would patiently wait for the translation version. Once more thank you for your hardwork, I wish you smooth progression~

Also thanks for previous reviewers which made me don't give up on this story. I believe once more I have found a potential favorite novel!

Yay〜 (꒪꒳꒪) 〜

PS. I tend to judge novel too quickly if the translation slow. Please don't be like me. Also I won't regret if it's turned out I'm reading into this too deeply because it's really 10000x more fun that way. <<less
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