This Way of Transmigration Is Definitely Wrong!


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The worst thing that Shui Ruoshan thinks he ever did?

He wrote the story of “The Strongest King in History”.

The unluckiest thing happened to him?

He transmigrated into the novel he wrote.

The most depressing thing happened to him?

His current character doesn’t exist in the original story.

The most frustrating thing?

The current progress completely overturned the original plot.

Other than that, the most unreasonable thing was he is actually being sheltered by the villain BOSS.

Those YY, those level-ups and also ‘cool text‘ in the story that he wrote, why the Hell did it suddenly changed ‘flavor’?

Must be because his way of transmigration was not quite right!
He wants a redo!!!

Note :

– YY is OP-ness of MC

– ‘Cool text’ is story with OP MC without much difficulties and drama

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09/14/19 Isohungry Translations c152
09/10/19 Isohungry Translations c151
09/07/19 Isohungry Translations c150
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09/01/19 Isohungry Translations c148
08/31/19 Isohungry Translations c147
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08/17/19 Isohungry Translations c145
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08/06/19 Isohungry Translations c143
08/03/19 Isohungry Translations c142
07/30/19 Isohungry Translations c141
07/27/19 Isohungry Translations c140
07/23/19 Isohungry Translations c139
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irrykat rated it
August 10, 2018
Status: c58
I've finished all 58 of the currently translated chapters. I love this kind of plot, but as I went on it grew increasingly unsatisfying. The author spends a lot of time repeating themselves, and the world-building is pretty spare (and it shows). The plot moves as slow as a glacier.

I think the most egregious part of this is the MC. I was not expecting a genius, but he grows increasingly dumber and childlike to the point where it is painful/embarrassing to read his actions and thoughts.

It's a shame because sometimes... more>> you can see areas where the novel can shine by actively leaning on the 4th wall or with humor.

The naming of the cat in chapter 43 is an excellent example of this.

Sadly, this is pretty rare.

The translation is pretty good quality. The translator did a pretty good job. Sadly the plot isn't up to par. <<less
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Hoshiandme rated it
December 3, 2018
Status: c54
While I would love to give this plot more stars.

the MC of this story is such an idiot. He’s such an idiot that it’s become too much. I can’t read this idiocy anymore. Although it is funny at times and hilarious and the novel isn’t meant to be really taken seriously.

But the idiocy of the MC is too much. His actions and behavior is so fucking stupid. That I wonder what he was like when he was an adult back in human society. Because his actions are entirely uncalled for... more>> and would be mocked and looked down upon in the world.

And what I dislike the most is that he CREATED THE WORLD AND ALL ITS CHARACTERS.

Yet he acts like the world doesn’t involve him and everyone else doesn’t involve him and fails to understand anything. Which further emphasizes his stupidness. I thought I could bare through with this novel since it indeed is funny and pretty interesting.

I’m I just can’t handle our stupid MC who acts more childlike.

gods. I fucking hate him too.

ML personally cooked some meat he caught for him. And he then immediately decides he can’t eat it. Going with the conclusion with “I came from modern society and can’t handle the blood and gore before my eyes.”

LIKE WTF. You think meat comes from clouds and rainbows? Holy fuck. You are hungry and the food smells good sinceit was ACTJALLY seasoned. Holy shit.

The MC I can’t handle him. The comments saying he is cute and adorable.


i can just say he is the type who is stupidly cute.

and I can’t do or handle stupid ok. I DONT DO STUPID CHARACTERS. <<less
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YellowNoodle rated it
May 8, 2019
Status: c117
Protagonist is an idiot

He acts like a child and his characterization is confusing. If you're an author of a novel surely you'd write out details on cultivation and how to use your spiritual power. And you may not understand it immediately because it's fiction but come on, that's not an excuse when you put incantation magic to the test so why can't you do it with all the other aspects of cultivation?

And almost dying twice in the beginning didn't penetrate his thick skin that this world is real but seeing... more>> the ML hurt did.

His actions are unreasonable and I get that he can't integrate fully into the world but come on, focus on the important aspects like why the heck did you transmigrate into a person who you didn't even write about?

I think that's a big wake up call that this is an actual world.

His endless ramblings going off topic and worries for ML is annoying too, like, bruh, YOURE THE FRIGGIN AUTHOR. And although he does acknowledge it as time passes but he still "can't help but worry" making it "contradicting and fraustrating". Like you know what the ML's secret is (secret is a spoiler and you'll find out if you read it) and you obviously wrote about him to the point of being perfect. Surely you can worry about him and help but not complain to the point where you mess up his well thought plans right? Right? Helping is fine but dude, ML obviously has thought out a counter attack for the worse case scenarios and you're like an unexpected variable making things worse, especially when you're trying to outwit the cannon fodders.

Anyways, scenes are repetitive especially when ML met his family again, like, I think I skimmed through it.

The only thing going for the novel is the amazing translation.

Shame the story is meh.

Characters meh.

World building meh.

Plot holes, a ton.

Unreasonableness, a majority amount.

Overall you'll get a 2 star story, extra star is for translator hence a 3.

You don't have to give me a genius MC but at least give me on with the common sense of a 20 year old. It's human nature to try and survive and live yet this guy, this friggin guy, just waltz straight into danger.



Thank you translator and respect them for not wanting it on wattpad or any other website. Its also rude to directly translate from the English version to another language. Just reading mtl is a pain in the butt and it's hard enough that there are a ton of typos. You're mooching off hard work. <<less
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afuruba rated it
November 14, 2018
Status: c51
I just want to say, I am very much interested in this story and would love to give this work a higher rating, but everytime I try to read and immerse myself in the story I always get distracted (in a real bad way) by how the translator always has a parenthesis right after every pronoun just to indicate who it's referring to.

Please don't get me wrong, I very much appreciate the translators hard work and effort. I just really can't concentrate on the story everytime I see the parenthesis... more>> with the explanation on who/whom that pronoun is for.

To the translator, I love you and I very much appreciate your translation efforts, but please, if you can please not put that parenthesis w/ explanation right after every pronoun, your translation will be a hundred times better. They are just causing unnecessary distraction to readers.

PS. Please take this comment with a grain of salt and know that I am by no means hating on the translator or picking on his/her work. I am just stating my experience while reading this novel. <<less
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May 12, 2018
Status: c178
The story is very interesting. While transmigrated to a novel theme is not original (and the author stated it in the novel too!), this one is unique enough to not be mistaken with another novel of the same theme. The translation is very good & easy to understand, I'm looking forward reading more of it, thank you translator-sama!

... more>>

The main story itself completed at chapter 169, but the author also make an alternate ending, chapter 170-178. Either ending is good, but I admit I like the 1st ending better, only we got to understand more of MC circumstances in the 2nd ending.

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rhianirory rated it
January 23, 2019
Status: c97
the story has its interesting points. The downside is the MC. The MC starts out fairly clever but his mentality seems to reduce rather quickly after transmigrating, becoming more and more childish as the chapters continue on. I really don't like stupid, naive, emasculated MCs who only exist to be rescued and screwed with and who basically act like a shoujo heroine with a JJ. I also prefer MCs with at least half a brain. However, since I now measure all idiot MCs against the one from ugly mans big transformation, he doesn't seem all that bad in comparison. I rate this a solid 3 and for a story with an idiot MC, it's about the highest you can expect from me.
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Celissiye rated it
February 14, 2019
Status: c30
There are so many MC that are supposed to be adults or at least young adults but are literally as dumb, naive, and childish as a five or seven year old. This MC is one of them. I mean, a little silly is okay, the MC doesn't have to be genius, but there is a line to tread here, and this MC is well below it. Additionally, all the antagonists are dumb and petty, fitting for MC's level of IQ and EQ, no real challenge.

At the start I liked the... more>> idea of a 'contract' between the MC and ML, and whatnot, but that fell through and after the first few chapters I realized there would be no complexity to the story or the relationship between the MC and the ML. MC randomly throws out junk to protect himself? Randomly picks fights with characters that are mean to ML with literally the ability of a toddler? If you prefer this type of character, go for it.

See, now, they couldn't actually use a child because then all the sexual innuendos get creepier, but it would make more sense to me, personally.

I do like that the MC is the protective type rather than rapey type, I guess, but still run of the mill and uninteresting.

Side characters? Who cares, ML will just get jealous if MC looks at anyone else. <<less
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NotShamelessHeHe rated it
May 3, 2018
Status: c12
It looks interesting and definitely not the 'boom! Love at first sight' kind. It has good variance since the MC just suddenly transmigrated to his own novel,


The villain has trust issues and MC had to work hard earning it.


I'm looking forward to this though! Thank you translator- sama!
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shouahang58 rated it
April 5, 2019
Status: c143
I love how the MC is protective of ML, and how he keeps thinking how he won't tell ML that he is the author of the world they are living in. And I somewhat like how ML keeps testing the MC to see if MC would betray him like the other characters in the original novel.
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ResidentialPsycho rated it
July 28, 2019
Status: c35
The MC transmigrates into a web novel he was writing and encounters the main antagonist from that series. Completely out of nowhere with no character development after a little "test, " this villain decides he will completely trust the MC and that he wants to care for, possess, and look after him because he "belongs" to the villain/ML.

... more>>

The villain actually underwent a rebirth plot and actually already experienced the novel planned by the MC, so he's much more experienced than what the MC believes. He sees the MC as his special reward after his rebirth.


The MC's personality is spunky but extremely flat with minimal character depth. Although he actually wrote this novel himself, he's completely forgotten his own critical plot points and details and can't make a realistic story to save his life, which is odd because making up stories was kind of his job. Although the ML is supposed to be blackened from repeated betrayals, he opens up to the MC exceedingly easily and suddenly develops unfathomable feelings for him. His actions don't match his background, and their relationship is incredibly forced.

As for other characters, I don't think anyone has a name so far other than the novel protagonist. Cannon fodder is just cannon fodder, and everyone aside from the MC and ML are mere decorations with no point to their existences other than to show off the ML.

The plot moves painfully slow, and I'm not sure if there is much of one at all.

As for the setting... Well, if even the MC hardly understands his own setting, how could I? There's hardly any imagery or descriptions about anything anywhere other than describing the MC as a shota and the ML as some dashingly handsome warrior.

If you're looking for a series with the slightest bit of depth or logical development, this isn't it. The action is exceptionally weak, too. The MC and ML's chatter is only annoying to me, so, even if you're only looking for a series with light-hearted fluff, I can't recommend this. Unfortunately, I can't see anything to like in this series. <<less
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cole rated it
April 13, 2019
Status: c120
AAA this is so cuuute!! One of my favourite bl novel ever! The MC is an adorable, a bit tsundere shota (physically) while the ML is the typical OP black-bellied, possessive but interesting character.

The ml's protectiveness and possessiveness towards the MC is hella cute and the fact that he's obedient to the MC but ruthless to others just makes me go uwu.

The pace is just right, not rushed. Just a bit slow on the romance progress as the MC is physically a kid but no worries as on later... more>> chapters the long awaited 'actions' would finally bloom. (Lol)

I definitely definitely recommend this! Light and heartwarming but still keeps you on the edge, although you would feel a bit 'eh' on the MC at the start, it gets better on later chapters. <<less
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CMClol rated it
March 5, 2019
Status: c101
Despite the MC being childish and supposed to be 20 I feel like it matches his new body which is that of a child. He has his moments like verbally beating down someone since he has zero offensive capabilities. It's refreshing to see an MC act this way since most Isekai genre I read has the MC have ridiculous op powers from the very start. SRS gets his own powers but he isn't aware of them.
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Rukachi rated it
November 7, 2018
Status: c80
If you’re looking for a story with deep plot and character development, this is probably not for you haha. If you’re looking for something cute and fluffy, then come at it. Our little MC is absolutely adorable and I just want to hug him at all times. Our ML is aloof but only cares for MC. The plot is indeed rather slow. The author focuses a lot of the characters inner thoughts and the interaction between ML and MC. The romance is quite slow too, at least according to me... more>> because

at this point in time, I think he’s simply possessive of MC because he’s a special existence to him. Not quite love. Furthermore. MC is a shota atm lmao

. Anyways, I look forward to reading more chapters! Thank you Banana for doing an awesome job translating. <<less
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Windemerald rated it
September 13, 2018
Status: c66
At first I thought what the heck is this!

But then after reading it more. I realize it is actually a pretty good novel.

Its so funny yet there are a lot of plotholes.

... more>> Shui Roushan despite knowing the plot still acts unpredictable and yin suye is a rebirth ML in the story so he has trust issues.

This is really too much and yet I am curious as to what happens next.

The recent update. I just hope yin suye doeant think that shui is suspicious as he (Srs) was there when he (jsy) killed her. <<less
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