This Way of Transmigration Is Definitely Wrong!


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The worst thing that Shui Ruoshan thinks he ever did?

He wrote the story of “The Strongest King in History”.

The unluckiest thing that happened to him?

He transmigrated into the novel he wrote.

The most depressing thing that happened to him?

His current character doesn’t exist in the original story.

The most frustrating thing that happened to him?

His current progress completely overturned the original plot.

Other than that, the most unreasonable thing is that he is actually being sheltered by the villain BOSS.

The YY, the level-ups and the ‘cool text‘ in the story that he wrote, why the hell did it suddenly change ‘flavor’?

It must be because his way of transmigration was not quite right!

He wants a redo!!!

Note :

– YY is OP-ness of MC

– ‘Cool text’ is a story with OP MC without much difficulties and drama

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New ShiraJung
June 12, 2020
Status: c85
I spent more than a week to read this, and not even finishing yet. Mind you, I'm a fast reader, I can finish a long novel with 1000+ chapters within 3-4 days and remember every event on it. The reason why I am lagging too much on this novel is because it is too unbearable. At first, I liked how the MC acts fast and reverses the contract but from then on, he became too f*cking s*upid. Like, cannot eat meat because he doesn't like the gore and blood. I... more>> mean, even in modern era, did he think he eats chicken and pork from plucking them from the tree? =, = He is too childish and even more s*upid as the story goes on. He would always want dramas and causes trouble all around, saying crude things to enemies he couldn't even win, making the ML to clean up all his trouble. I mean, I can tolerate it if he is all relying on the ML like many other Mary Sue stories but here, he is not even satisfied with the way ML cleans up. Like, "KILLING IS BAD, DON'T ENNNNN~" Please, if the enemies come taking revenge on them, the one suffering won't be ML but him. He is useless all around but he won't avoid getting in the way of troubles, he himself would go seek them. Then he won't let the ML kill the enemies.

The ML went back to his family house to get revenge and MC wants to see them so bad. The half brother of ML wanted to r*pe the MC and ML wanted to kill him. And tge result? "No~ Killing is bad~" *spit blood* *facepalm* He also wanted to let a stranger follow them and join their party just because that stranger called him boss. I mean, MC knows best that they will be getting hardships from now on and they are secretly revenging the enemies amd such. Moreover, the party leader isn't even him. He can't even protect himself, yet, he didn't even ask ML for permission before blabbering out? ML already has a hard time protecting this trouble seeking problematic child ah!! How could he add another dumb f*ck to the team!?!? Thank the devils ML leave that guy.

In my opinion, he is seriouslysuffering the Prince Syndrome. He thinks the world and everything is for him to have fun, and everything should go according to his way. If not for me stubbornly making sure I

read all the novels I have started to the end, I would have dropped this novel.

Edit : I have reached to ch 144 and I don't even know how many times I've spitted blood because of this dumb f*ck

  1. Spoiler

    I really frustrated to the point where the novel main character reveals that mc's body is the main villain and wanted to kill MC, I really really wanted him to die. His death would save all the troubles and bring everyone peace. I have never wished a character to die as much as I'm right now *facepalm*

Edit again :

I have reached ch 167. Damn. I think MC seriously don't even have IQ *facepalm*


The villain killed ML and send MC back to his era, asking his wish to fulfilled and he will save ML. And MC ACTUALLY AGREED!!! I mean, when he returns back to his world, isn't he technically the GOD of that world now? He could have killed the villain and save ML and went back again with just his writing but this dumbf*ck actually agreed to comply the villain's order. WTF is wrong with yoyr brain la? YOU ARE THE SHAME OF ALL TRANSGRAMATORS.

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Hoshiandme rated it
December 3, 2018
Status: c54
While I would love to give this plot more stars.

the MC of this story is such an idiot. He’s such an idiot that it’s become too much. I can’t read this idiocy anymore. Although it is funny at times and hilarious and the novel isn’t meant to be really taken seriously.

But the idiocy of the MC is too much. His actions and behavior is so f*cking s*upid. That I wonder what he was like when he was an adult back in human society. Because his actions are entirely uncalled for... more>> and would be mocked and looked down upon in the world.

And what I dislike the most is that he CREATED THE WORLD AND ALL ITS CHARACTERS.

Yet he acts like the world doesn’t involve him and everyone else doesn’t involve him and fails to understand anything. Which further emphasizes his s*upidness. I thought I could bare through with this novel since it indeed is funny and pretty interesting.

I’m I just can’t handle our s*upid MC who acts more childlike.

gods. I f*cking hate him too.

ML personally cooked some meat he caught for him. And he then immediately decides he can’t eat it. Going with the conclusion with “I came from modern society and can’t handle the blood and gore before my eyes.”

LIKE WTF. You think meat comes from clouds and rainbows? Holy f*ck. You are hungry and the food smells good sinceit was ACTJALLY seasoned. Holy shit.

The MC I can’t handle him. The comments saying he is cute and adorable.


i can just say he is the type who is s*upidly cute.

and I can’t do or handle s*upid ok. I DONT DO s*upid CHARACTERS. <<less
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irrykat rated it
August 10, 2018
Status: c58
I've finished all 58 of the currently translated chapters. I love this kind of plot, but as I went on it grew increasingly unsatisfying. The author spends a lot of time repeating themselves, and the world-building is pretty spare (and it shows). The plot moves as slow as a glacier.

I think the most egregious part of this is the MC. I was not expecting a genius, but he grows increasingly dumber and childlike to the point where it is painful/embarrassing to read his actions and thoughts.

It's a shame because sometimes... more>> you can see areas where the novel can shine by actively leaning on the 4th wall or with humor.

The naming of the cat in chapter 43 is an excellent example of this.

Sadly, this is pretty rare.

The translation is pretty good quality. The translator did a pretty good job. Sadly the plot isn't up to par. <<less
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YellowNoodle rated it
May 8, 2019
Status: c117
Protagonist is an idiot

He acts like a child and his characterization is confusing. If you're an author of a novel surely you'd write out details on cultivation and how to use your spiritual power. And you may not understand it immediately because it's fiction but come on, that's not an excuse when you put incantation magic to the test so why can't you do it with all the other aspects of cultivation?

And almost dying twice in the beginning didn't penetrate his thick skin that this world is real but seeing... more>> the ML hurt did.

His actions are unreasonable and I get that he can't integrate fully into the world but come on, focus on the important aspects like why the heck did you transmigrate into a person who you didn't even write about?

I think that's a big wake up call that this is an actual world.

His endless ramblings going off topic and worries for ML is annoying too, like, bruh, YOURE THE FRIGGIN AUTHOR. And although he does acknowledge it as time passes but he still "can't help but worry" making it "contradicting and fraustrating". Like you know what the ML's secret is (secret is a spoiler and you'll find out if you read it) and you obviously wrote about him to the point of being perfect. Surely you can worry about him and help but not complain to the point where you mess up his well thought plans right? Right? Helping is fine but dude, ML obviously has thought out a counter attack for the worse case scenarios and you're like an unexpected variable making things worse, especially when you're trying to outwit the cannon fodders.

Anyways, scenes are repetitive especially when ML met his family again, like, I think I skimmed through it.

The only thing going for the novel is the amazing translation.

Shame the story is meh.

Characters meh.

World building meh.

Plot holes, a ton.

Unreasonableness, a majority amount.

Overall you'll get a 2 star story, extra star is for translator hence a 3.

You don't have to give me a genius MC but at least give me on with the common sense of a 20 year old. It's human nature to try and survive and live yet this guy, this friggin guy, just waltz straight into danger.



Thank you translator and respect them for not wanting it on wattpad or any other website. Its also rude to directly translate from the English version to another language. Just reading mtl is a pain in the butt and it's hard enough that there are a ton of typos. You're mooching off hard work. <<less
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afuruba rated it
November 14, 2018
Status: c51
I just want to say, I am very much interested in this story and would love to give this work a higher rating, but everytime I try to read and immerse myself in the story I always get distracted (in a real bad way) by how the translator always has a parenthesis right after every pronoun just to indicate who it's referring to.

Please don't get me wrong, I very much appreciate the translators hard work and effort. I just really can't concentrate on the story everytime I see the parenthesis... more>> with the explanation on who/whom that pronoun is for.

To the translator, I love you and I very much appreciate your translation efforts, but please, if you can please not put that parenthesis w/ explanation right after every pronoun, your translation will be a hundred times better. They are just causing unnecessary distraction to readers.

PS. Please take this comment with a grain of salt and know that I am by no means hating on the translator or picking on his/her work. I am just stating my experience while reading this novel. <<less
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rhianirory rated it
January 23, 2019
Status: c97
the story has its interesting points. The downside is the MC. The MC starts out fairly clever but his mentality seems to reduce rather quickly after transmigrating, becoming more and more childish as the chapters continue on. I really don't like s*upid, naive, emasculated MCs who only exist to be rescued and screwed with and who basically act like a shoujo heroine with a JJ. I also prefer MCs with at least half a brain. However, since I now measure all idiot MCs against the one from ugly mans big transformation, he doesn't seem all that bad in comparison. I rate this a solid 3 and for a story with an idiot MC, it's about the highest you can expect from me.
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Honefuusen rated it
October 1, 2019
Status: c94
Those stars are for the translator.

Frankly speaking, the story is meh. World building almost non existent. Narratives are a confusing jumble of meaningless repetitive explanation and ramble of either MC or ML. Characterization is a mess. Just generally unpalatable story.

A chapter only contains maybe 4 or 5 dialogue of characters, like 90% is that mumbo jumbo narratives. I was expecting better but no progress.

But hey, to each their own. I find this novel incredibly boring but if you like simple no brainer story then this one is a decent read,... more>> especially the translation is quite clean. Props to the translator. <<less
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Celissiye rated it
February 14, 2019
Status: c30
There are so many MC that are supposed to be adults or at least young adults but are literally as dumb, naive, and childish as a five or seven year old. This MC is one of them. I mean, a little silly is okay, the MC doesn't have to be genius, but there is a line to tread here, and this MC is well below it. Additionally, all the antagonists are dumb and petty, fitting for MC's level of IQ and EQ, no real challenge.

At the start I liked the... more>> idea of a 'contract' between the MC and ML, and whatnot, but that fell through and after the first few chapters I realized there would be no complexity to the story or the relationship between the MC and the ML. MC randomly throws out junk to protect himself? Randomly picks fights with characters that are mean to ML with literally the ability of a toddler? If you prefer this type of character, go for it.

See, now, they couldn't actually use a child because then all the sexual innuendos get creepier, but it would make more sense to me, personally.

I do like that the MC is the protective type rather than rapey type, I guess, but still run of the mill and uninteresting.

Side characters? Who cares, ML will just get jealous if MC looks at anyone else. <<less
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May 12, 2018
Status: c178
The story is very interesting. While transmigrated to a novel theme is not original (and the author stated it in the novel too!), this one is unique enough to not be mistaken with another novel of the same theme. The translation is very good & easy to understand, I'm looking forward reading more of it, thank you translator-sama!

... more>>

The main story itself completed at chapter 169, but the author also make an alternate ending, chapter 170-178. Either ending is good, but I admit I like the 1st ending better, only we got to understand more of MC circumstances in the 2nd ending.

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NotShamelessHeHe rated it
May 3, 2018
Status: c12
It looks interesting and definitely not the 'boom! Love at first sight' kind. It has good variance since the MC just suddenly transmigrated to his own novel,


The villain has trust issues and MC had to work hard earning it.


I'm looking forward to this though! Thank you translator- sama!
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please_smile_for_me rated it
June 3, 2020
Status: --
Okay, the reason why I got myself an account here is that I want to defend this novel.

Before I started reading I saw a lot of comments saying that the story and the MC are s*upid. No.

He might be a bit childish but he is also very considerate of the ML. There are also people saying that he's too spoiled for not liking blood and stuff like that. He's from our time. At least I can relate.

I love this novel because it is funny and the interactions between the... more>> two main characters are very cute. They form a strong bond and it feels nice to see both of them slowly opening up. The plot is interesting but not too complicated which makes it easier to read if you just want a sweet romance with a bit of danger and adventure. I also like that it's not too long and the ending leaves you with a warm feeling.

It might not have a genius MC and a plot full of misunderstandings and schemes but it's definitely worth it. ;) <<less
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kcNeko rated it
April 26, 2020
Status: c186
This novel is quite simple to read but hard to digest, like for example explaining a simple 'En' to a bunch of nonsense (you'll know what I mean if you read it yourself). I can't remember how many times I read the mc's s*upid monologue and repeating gibberish to 'blah blah blah'. Though I have to admit, I still didn't drop this simply because I had faith that the story might get interesting. But guess what? It did! For me, the only interesting part of the story was the end... more>> part (chapters 140+).

The novel has small word count per chapter but out of 3000 words, -100 words are the dialogues, 500 words are useful information and the rest are full of nonsense. Btw the MC is s*upid but it's tolerable because SOMETIMES he can be quite smart. ML is so-so. The drama doesn't touch my heart. Justice for the pets for always being forgotten!

The plot has potential but because of bad execution, the story became flat.

Special thanks to the translator for doing a great job translating this!

Did I enjoy this? Maybe, but very frustrating that it gave me a headache.

Will I read this again? Newwwpp.

Recommended? Maybe, limited to bored people who has nothing to do <<less
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shouahang58 rated it
April 5, 2019
Status: c143
I love how the MC is protective of ML, and how he keeps thinking how he won't tell ML that he is the author of the world they are living in. And I somewhat like how ML keeps testing the MC to see if MC would betray him like the other characters in the original novel.
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Platos_Redhaired_Stepchild rated it
January 11, 2020
Status: c168
**** warning *** I tried to read the rest of this story but Isohungry Translation was blocked by my computer security due to phishing

The story starts as pretty standard "Author Transported Into His Own Novel" transmigration story but

the Protagonist has already lived out the version of the story the author wrote & has been transported back in time.

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ResidentialPsycho rated it
July 28, 2019
Status: c35
The MC transmigrates into a web novel he was writing and encounters the main antagonist from that series. Completely out of nowhere with no character development after a little "test, " this villain decides he will completely trust the MC and that he wants to care for, possess, and look after him because he "belongs" to the villain/ML.

... more>>

The villain actually underwent a rebirth plot and actually already experienced the novel planned by the MC, so he's much more experienced than what the MC believes. He sees the MC as his special reward after his rebirth.


The MC's personality is spunky but extremely flat with minimal character depth. Although he actually wrote this novel himself, he's completely forgotten his own critical plot points and details and can't make a realistic story to save his life, which is odd because making up stories was kind of his job. Although the ML is supposed to be blackened from repeated betrayals, he opens up to the MC exceedingly easily and suddenly develops unfathomable feelings for him. His actions don't match his background, and their relationship is incredibly forced.

As for other characters, I don't think anyone has a name so far other than the novel protagonist. Cannon fodder is just cannon fodder, and everyone aside from the MC and ML are mere decorations with no point to their existences other than to show off the ML.

The plot moves painfully slow, and I'm not sure if there is much of one at all.

As for the setting... Well, if even the MC hardly understands his own setting, how could I? There's hardly any imagery or descriptions about anything anywhere other than describing the MC as a shota and the ML as some dashingly handsome warrior.

If you're looking for a series with the slightest bit of depth or logical development, this isn't it. The action is exceptionally weak, too. The MC and ML's chatter is only annoying to me, so, even if you're only looking for a series with light-hearted fluff, I can't recommend this. Unfortunately, I can't see anything to like in this series. <<less
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Windemerald rated it
September 13, 2018
Status: c66
At first I thought what the heck is this!

But then after reading it more. I realize it is actually a pretty good novel.

Its so funny yet there are a lot of plotholes.

... more>> Shui Roushan despite knowing the plot still acts unpredictable and yin suye is a rebirth ML in the story so he has trust issues.

This is really too much and yet I am curious as to what happens next.

The recent update. I just hope yin suye doeant think that shui is suspicious as he (Srs) was there when he (jsy) killed her. <<less
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Emmj rated it
May 20, 2020
Status: Completed
I've never written a review on here before but I felt strongly that I should because I feel that both the description and tags are lacking for this novel. This novel in 169 chapters with extras it's 192. I would give the first 80~ chapters 4.5 stars overall and would recommend them to anyone thinking about reading it. HOWEVER...

First let's talk about the romance. It's a side dish, not a main course.

Overall, this should not be considered yaoi imo. It is closer to shounen ai, but a large portion of... more>> it is nonromantic. The main character is a child so intimacy is present, but it's not sexual. The first kiss is in chapter...

102. Based on the total you might guess why this was a problem for me


Next, let's talk about that yandere. I really like the ML, he's sexy, scary and I would've loved if more of the story was told from his perspective (some of it is and those are my favorite parts). Compared to him, the main character is good, but not as complex as I'd like. Here's my issues with them:

When defending the ML from his enemies the MC is quick-witted and "saves him" when he doesn't speak up for himself. However, the writing in the second half makes him seem like a yapping chihuahua when he does this. I feel like his time would better spent keeping people alive by talking the ML down. In the first half, the MC makes fun of "dog blood" plots saying how s*upid they are. And later, he creates them on his own so maybe the author was running out of ideas/time?


Final thoughts: Read this for at least 50 chapters and enjoy it as much as you can


The ending is weak, but not terrible. If you are used to typical Chinese novels (in my experience) then you will be able to stomach the second half, and if not you will still probably love the first half which is funny, creative, and entertaining to read.

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Jazzy0_0 rated it
March 28, 2020
Status: c120
SO basically I personally love this novel and for me I like the MC personality it is very childish and funny and a bit cringe but I enjoy that kind of personality (on the other hand I don’t really like uptight overly smart and cocky for example quickly wear the face of the devil love the actual novel and plot but couldn’t stand the MC)

I really like the build up of the novel but I’ve read many novels like this so it’s not one of a kind but I... more>> do really like and probably read it from the beginning again 😊 <<less
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PastTimer rated it
January 19, 2020
Status: Completed
I liked the aura of the story at first but soon discovered that the interactions between the MC and ML arises a feeling of petulance within me, the feeling maxed out and I almost dropped the novel when ... more>>

They killed the Imperial Captain, who the MC repeatedly identified as a good man (apparently the only logical thinker amongst them). His name was WieYi if I remember correctly


Because that particular incident happened at near ending, I decided to binge read everything else. And blah blah blah, apparently I did not miss out on anything important. I started paying attention again when

The MC (of the author MC's fictional novel) said the reason of his rebirth


I immediately got transfixed by the new character that was, by the way, 150 chapters late and did not have any foreshadowing at all because the MC author could not dig up any information about him

he's the real owner of the MC's body


I liked him, because, apart from being an interesting character that acts his age, he is also the only person in the novel that thinks rationally too (I'm not denying that all those years has left him at least half crazy) his personality can be pardoned considering his race


and experience and age. I also found his back story cute enough, and that was the only reason I could stomach the whole thing.

Two stars for the plot twists that could have been executed so much better.

One star for the Big Boss Villian.

I really can't handle this genre (dumb protag, and not pretend dumb either) <<less
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volcanov rated it
January 11, 2020
Status: c171
Hu Tian completely ruined the story for me. I suffered through the entire story and the MC's s*upidity and the ML's generic yandreness, but I could not get over Hu Tian getting a good ending. It was too much for me. Decreased my enjoyment of the story. If I could have known what would happen, I would have stopped around ch 152, when they were in the Imperial City.
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tuckwoo rated it
November 7, 2019
Status: c153
I really like this novel so far, it's really cute and I enjoy how the world of the novel had to adapt itself in order to fit with how the author wrote the novel in order to make the plot holes the author accidentally included make sense. I thought that they some were pretty clever and some of them I'd missed myself, 😅 it shows that the author has thought quite a bit about the plot which I appreciate
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