The Transmigrated Cannon Fodder Overthrows the Male Protagonist

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She was an average company employee, but she unexpectedly died in a car accident. Fortunately—or not, her soul synchronized with a shameless system called “Take Down the Male Protagonist” which is classified as a “Capture” system. To be exact, the main point of this system is to capture the male protagonist’s… pen*s.

“Come here! We need to deepen our mutual understanding and have ourselves a good pillow talk—no, no! I mean, let’s just have a good chat about life!”

“Where is the newbie package?! What about my employee’s benefits?! Hey, System, don’t pretend to bug out all of a sudden, hand them over!”

“Hmm, let’s see…the employee’s benefits are pretty good… pretty good… But, you mind telling me what the heck are these ‘Ten Great Tools’? This… What on earth is this scent that’s coming from my body?? And just what is this ‘instant recovery constitution’ that supposedly will let me ‘play to my heart’s content without being broken’?! System, get your ASS out here! We need to talk! Are you for real or just pulling my leg?!”

“I never agreed to take down these male protagonists! Not a single one of them follows the prescribed storyline. I don’t want to end up under them; they are simply too awful! None of their words can be trusted—not a single one!! Out of all their lies, the worst are ‘Be obedient, I won’t move.’, ‘Believe me, this will be the last time.’ and, ‘I just want to kiss you!’

“System, the settings must be incorrect! These guys are completely unlike the plot description! I’m feeling so wronged here!!!”

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The Ten Great Tools: For Chinese, men and women had 10 great attributes/characteristics that would make their private parts great or ideal for interc**rse. In this case, the ten great tools referred to the ten types of ideal shapes and characteristics of a woman’s private part.

Associated Names
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快穿之女配势要扑倒男主
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Review
42 Reviews


Tristan0000
New Tristan0000
Sep 07, 2021
Status: c62
A fun little smutty QT. As others have said, there is quite a lot of smut scenes--which is great!--but sometimes they become a little boring due to repetitive writing and superficial character/relationship development. I've only read 1.5 arcs, but ML is forceful and very yandere (totally up my alley, but the sexy talk kind of kills it for me). If you like QT, smut and typical C-novel MLs you'll probably like this.
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Meme800822
New Meme800822
Sep 06, 2021
Status: c62
Does anyone know any other novels similar to this one so far I have found Quick transmigration: Entangled thread of fate! Which is good the MC is put in a coma and has to transmigrate into different worlds and make the ML fall for while collecting his s***n it’s similar to this but different to. So are there any others novels that follow this trend with the female transmigrating into new worlds and making the ML fall for her that also contains smut?
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lorry
lorry
Apr 27, 2018
Status: --
This is a unique world hopping novel, and not only because of the gratuitous amounts of smut.
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Seriously, the s*x scenes takes more than half a dozen chapters. ML has a stamina like a stallion and the MC has a recovery rate of a, uh, let's just say she bounces back quickly.

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You might have the mistaken impression that this story is merely just a device to write smut
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especially since as soon as she transmigrated into her first body she gets pounced on by the ML and loses her V card.

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But if the smut was all that made this worth reading, I wouldn't be here leaving a review recommending it. The first world was merely a beginner's stage, with things getting progressively more complicated and therefore difficult for our transmigrator as she goes from one world to the next. The author appears to like setting Korean melodrama plots for each world that the FL has to overcome, so prepare yourself for buckets and buckets of angst.
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Basic recipe for each world: MC transmigrates to a cannon fodder character, receives memories and wishes of said character, tries to fulfill them to compete her mission, and at the same make snu-snu with the male protagonist of that world, in order to "fuel" up (i.e., SEMEN, her fuel is semen) so she could move on to the next world. Don't ask me the mechanics of why that is, but MC really has no choice if she wants to survive. Obstacles to both of this things of course is the fated female protagonists of these worlds. Good thing then that she was "blessed" by the system with the optimum body for sex.

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The MC has to fulfill the wishes of the person whose body she has transmigrated into, with the added difficulty of having to balance between trying to remain objective and connecting to the feelings of said person, as there is always the danger she gets in too deep. She's not one of those genius, omniscient MCs that are always ten steps ahead, but she does well enough and she slowly improves. The MLs are the very opposite of self-aware, frustratingly oblivious to their own emotions, prone to wild goose chases, and the object of unrequited love for the female cannon fodders the transmigrator goes into.
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The comeuppance is worth it though, when the ML finally realizes that he just might have lost the MC forever, it breaks him so completely to the point that he would rather live in a world of his delusion than face the reality that the MC is gone.

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and more and more yandere of the MC as time passes.
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In the latest chapter I have read, it also appears that all the MLs are iterations of the same person, who is in love-hate with MC and is pursuing her, to which MC is still ignorant of, although her system is vaguely sensing danger even if it couldn't pinpoint it

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I will repeat my warning again: ANGST. This story has lots of angst. But if you are okay with going on a roller coaster ride with your feelings then by all means, read this story, because I promise that it is satisfying.
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Fathom
Fathom
Sep 20, 2018
Status: c671
If you like hentai type of smut, this is like a series of short stories with basically the same FL and ML in various worlds and settings. The FL gets sucked into a weird unpopular/abandoned system with a cute AI that is quite manipulative of the low IQ FL.

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Basically, she has to become the FL of each world and fulfill the current character's last desires and wishes before they died. She takes over their character. The strange thing is that every FL character has the same exact name. Whereas each ML has the potential to become Armageddon if her mission fails. While completing her mission, she must also get enough of the ML's essence to get out of the current world she's in.

In the end, if she doesn't finish reliving a set number of missions, she won't be able to go home. So she has to figure out how to basically fix the mess left by the former characters in each world. The stories are always of 1 ML and 1 FL, so it's not as if she's with multiple men.

Arc 1: A young princess that's been abandoned falls into a incestuous relationship with her emperor brother by accident. This story is the typical hentai smut story, where most of the story is smut and the actual plot is kind of weak. It does set the precedent that not all stories will end happily. So far this is the shortest arc and ends relatively quickly. 39 chapters

Arc 2: Another drug related plot line where the ML hooks up with the FL. It's about 2 classmates who never have any intersection normally. The interesting thing about this arc is that the FL actually stays in this world until a natural death age. 66 chapters

Arc 3: A princess with a bad reputation is in love with a medical god type of ML. The longer the chapters get, the less smut and more plot is developed. 118 chapters

Arc 4: The FL has been in love with the ML since she was young, However, the ML has extremely low emotional intelligence and is interested in someone else. The plot actually becomes a bit more convoluted and a lot more dark as certain past events that happened in the original story line are remembered. It was actually kind of heartbreaking at times. 102 chapters

Arc 5: Kind of an odd arc in my opinion. A female demon that is married to an immortal god like figure. Every time that FL is reborn, the ML will kill her. So the mission is for the FL to get her freedom from the rebirth cycle. I found this kind of painful to read as we're not sure if we should be sympathetic or not to such a jerk of a ML. 106 chapters

Arc 6: Survivor Island kind of plot. After an arranged marriage ends in divorce, the FL still wants to chase after the ML to show her real tears. Strangely enough, I really liked the empathy in this story. Although, both lead characters are movie stars, they are stranded on an island with some truly vicious people. 125 chapters

Arc 7: This arc is still ongoing. A female emperor has to find a way to seduce her husband who only wants to kill her. Probably my least favorite arc. Much less smut in this arc, and what they do is really repetitive.

After each mission accomplishment, FL gets some weird awards like milk spraying and etc. The basic hentai stuff. Overall, if you like reading similar stories with smut, you'll like this series. All the arcs are reasonably short. Waiting for updates on the RAWs is kind of long though. Although, the system makes the FL feel empathy to the original FL characters, I don't really feel like the FL truly loves the ML. There's a feel of indifference as she just tries to complete her mission. The smut also gets really repetitive in details, possibly because the ML have such similar characteristics and the FL still acts the same with half hearted refusals and innocent behavior.

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seawaterwitch
seawaterwitc
Jun 21, 2018
Status: c12
I am here for smut and plot.

Because the other novels are to much censored *sigh* or the author to shy to wrote it ?

But these novel is brave enough to pass the boundary.

Thank you for the translator team ????

Ps. If you under age. Please read the other novels. Thank you

or read it with your own risk though. ?
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Mafia Lady
Mafia Lady
Apr 26, 2018
Status: --
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This is very addict and interesting Smut novel. This is not your typical quick transmiggration novel. This novel is so sad, angst, sweet, bitter, tragady that you will crying even thought MC was pretend. I really feel sad for Original Host who had unrequited love for ML.

Plot is more likely FMC fulfill wish of Original Host who love male lead much. Their wish is to guard ML or protected him. I like the most arc is one even though it's sad that MC left or die in arc 1, how ML went crazy and insane that he destroyed world. I really like how MC act. She pretend to love ML and tell him how she love him and willing to follow him to hell. It's her mission to let ML know that Ori Host love him so much and how she did so much or sacrifice for him. She always success complete each arc. She is good at act.

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adrea3311
adrea3311
Jun 10, 2018
Status: c518
Much like the other reviewers have stated, this novel has a surprisingly good plot. The smut is good, but the plot is what keeps drawing you back. There are twists and unexpected results. Darkness (quite a lot) and angst (but not too much). And at the heart, an eternal love story that has to first go through a lot of challenges (and lifetimes) to reach. At first you think the story is quite simple, but as you go along, you realize there is much more going on than what appears.... more>> And that the heroine cannon fodder has a lot of work to do to take down her male protagonists and survive.

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The MC is essentially tasked with correcting the path of each world she goes to by uniting the previous owner of the body with the male lead that they should have ended up with, thereby saving the world, the Male Lead, and herself.

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One caveat for the smut, if you don't like reading about rough and frankly humanly impossible s*x, then there will be a lot of chapters that you may want to skip. They are all labelled with an "H" of some sort in the MTL title. But of course you will be missing out on a lot of fun.

Also, the MTL for this is quite readable on both Bing Translator and Google translate, though the former seems to be a bit better. <<less
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IrisBay
IrisBay
Jul 09, 2020
Status: c760
Every Arc the story was nice, the flow was good and most important every Arc was lustful, wahhhh.....

    1. MC and ML are blood related sibling, both parents are same. Imperial brother loves her sister. It was a not a happy ending. It made me cry. Plus the other chapter after 10years then the hair pin that he made for MC turn to dust, vanish like a thin air. It was a Heartbreaking scene
    2. . MC and ML here are students in same campus, in secret the ML was a mad scientist and MC was inlove to ML since childhood. In the end MC was hurt by ML past and present lives cause MC unwilling to wake up up to 10years, ML take care sleeping MC ask for forgiveness and other chance for 10years. If Im the MC I will forget him and find other man who will love me. He's a lucky assole, that MC gave him other chance. Still this one made me cry.
    3. MC and ML are both royalty from different countries, prince and princess. ML here was a well know doctor while MC is a skilled swordsman. Well, all I can say that was all the things that happened the ML was innocent. MC was just to pure. It was a happy ending. This one also made me cry
    4. MC and ML here are childhood friends. The ML here was a scum, idiot, assole. He really not worth it for our MC. This idiot ML was still a lucky dog after hurting and wasted MC for 2 lives.. He really deserves his punishment MC golden needles. Really a lucky dog. Still made me cry and a happy ending story.
    5. This one was heartbreaking Arc. MC was a demon god while ML was an immoral/celestial god. MC was a wife and loving him for thousands years, even though MC was dies in ML hands hundreds or thousands times but still hoping. It was a sad and nice ending. It made me cry again.
    6. MC and ML here are both celebrities. At the beginning, in MC and ML views are different to each other. And I don't know how to discribe the ML after reading the whole Arc. It was an unexpectedly twist of the whole novel, I didn't expect that happened, expecially the ending of the Arc. I hope the author will give us readers more trill and excitement. By the way, the ML here was the reincarnated of Imperial Brother from the 1st Arc.
    7. MC was an Empress while ML was a concubine. Because of past generation ML hated MC and MC sa full of guilt to ML. This Arc was full of events and stories than SexScenes I think it was around five more or less SexScenes. And it was the longest Arc around 200 chapters. It was a nice ending. Still makes you cry.
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Kyrina
Kyrina
Jun 05, 2018
Status: c750
I began reading this novel just for fun because of its smut but halfway through arc 2, I was suprised to find that this novel actually has pretty good plot!

I would say that arc 1 is like delicious appetizer. It's short and steamy and makes you want more. Then you keep reading and reading because the plot is developing and it's getting more interesting.

Update: Unfortunately number of chapters per arc is steadily increasing. The newer arc is longer than the previous one.

Arc 4 (Scheming President...) is not that good and... more>> quite dark.
The current female emperor arc (Arc 7) has good beginning and good plot, but the story is getting draggy towards the end.

I will drop this novel after this arc end or maybe wait for a year or more before I read it again. <<less
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TheBlood
TheBlood
Jun 08, 2020
Status: c39
I really enioy this novel for its smut, really explicit and detailed. I plan to translate this novel in a few months time after finales, no promises though as may still be busy but hopefully everyone here still has interest by then.

Hello to who maybe reading I'm vermilliontranslations and I stopped translating as steambuns had told me they had asked bird and venus for permission first and I did not hence I let them translate it. Though idk why foxaholic all of sudden is translating it, and it is c40... more>> where everyone else has read 2x times already. Anyways would to thank those who liked and follow for the short and very brief period and wanted to say if it gets dropped I'll definitely pick it up!;-)

Anyhow if your free do come by and email me a dropped novel to translate if you want I'm looking for one atm <<less
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Keisotsuna
Keisotsuna
May 06, 2018
Status: v1c5
Despite being an erot*c novel and still short of chapters (as of now), the story has surprisingly hooked me up and I'm really anticipating for more chapters.

By the way, this isn't all about smut. It has a PLOT. And it's addicting.

This is an amusing story that follows a girl who died and unwillingly became a host of a perverted and funny system. The MC is subjected to a sort of mission in which she has to fulfill the cannonfodder's (the body she's using) last wish. However she never expected thing... more>> to turn into an.... well, erotic.

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Currently, the MC is transmigrated into the body of a forgotten (somewhat abandoned) cowardly princess and her mission is to make the male lead — which is her current body's blood-related brother and the current Emperor — turn away from the female lead, who is actually a two-faced woman who used her charm to become the empress and save the empire from the female lead's rule.

Well, MC gets "newbie pack" which are hilariously befitting for erot*c scenarios, special thanks to the amusing system. Lol.

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Anyway, try this novel out because I'm sure you'll enjoy it. It's a mixture of comedy, romance, smut, historical, and drama. A full package!

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I.D.
I.D.
Jun 28, 2020
Status: c1105
Currently google translating the raws because I wanted more smexy scenes only to be hit with tear bombs and PLOT! I know, I know, after the first arc I too was expecting more of the same. HOWEVER, each world is well fleshed out, especially the one I'm currently in, this story starts as pure smexy, I even look down on the FL a bit because some of her actions are pure white lotus heroine-esc, but as each arc passes she becomes more her own person and her system becomes less... more>> all-knowing into can-I-kick-it-because. It's kinda a slow build if you're looking for more plot then smexy, but give it time to build! The smexy is hot mama smexy and the plot is holy sh*t amazing.

at least for me. There are some reasons you might not like this though:

1) the smexy sometimes gets routine. The heroes all say basically the same thing and do the same and are the same
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because they are all broken off pieces from the main soul, who has a love grudge against our FL

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2) some of the arcs get... dark... like really really REALLY dark
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One arc has cannibalism and gang r*pe, another has the hero spill his background story of being r*ped by his dad as a child and gang r*ped by dad's minions. The latest one is basically a slasher horror novel which makes me want to cry in terror

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3) the system is a f*cking pit
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according to the system itself, it is a rip-off copy from the other better known systems, so it is in need of constant updates, keeps ripping the FL off, and doesn't understand humans AT ALL so doesn't get why our FL doesn't appreciate its work. Many times I wished to reach into the story and snap the system in two.

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4) Our FL keeps dying
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Sort of dying. This is where the white lotus comes in. She "dies", aka goes into a coma, and only when the hero has suffered (cut his heart into two to give her half, killed and stolen the vitality of lots of people for many years to resurrect her, gone insane and spread a virus to threaten the world into obedience) does she come back or decides not to to teach the hero a lesson, my least favorite arc has this happen and it sucks baallllllsssss

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arcs so far as I remember, heads up these are sorta spoilers:

    • FL gets screwed as emperor's sister
    • campus goddess meats psycho scientist
    • Princess screws over mom by asking questions
    • Childhood friend makes the company president have feelings
    • Demon goddess "helps" celestial god ascend
    • ex wife proves herself to secret mercenary film god
    • female emperor tries to prove her love by gifting her own country
    • Taoist girl raises Taoist boy into Taoist husband
    • (Currently on) FL becomes dumb blonde in Chinese horror world
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Anikarp
Anikarp
Apr 04, 2019
Status: c624
Left with no other choice, the MC in this story is forced to travel to world after world to help original bodies and do the nasties.

The plot is a lot better than I expected, more detailed, just like the bed scenes. It is STEAMY. But I never expected to get the best of both worlds. There is just one little thing to be cautious about though, that is to say the male lead in each world isn't exactly likeable.

It usually starts out with him being a jerk, then she has... more>> to win him over, and when it's time for her to leave the world aka death but not really; he goes on a crazy rampage that might or might not include killing all the people and he finds absurd ways to prolong her life.

He is forceful, jealous, very blackened. It can be a hard read sometimes to the point where I can't wait for them to separate. If you don't mind these things then it's definitely a good read! <<less
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Phrille0507
Phrille0507
Dec 30, 2018
Status: c26
It is an okay read, but too much smut makes the story a boring one, kinda get tired of reading pages of pages of smut. Sometimes the bed scene finishes after 4 chapters like WTF!? Male lead is like a beast in heat and forces the FL to have s*x with him!? Female lead doesn't have a say because he need the ML essence in order to leave that world, so smutfest galore. I dunno if the other arc will be better but the 1st one was a disappointment.
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Alina Moktan
Alina Moktan
Aug 20, 2018
Status: c600
R18 quick transmigration novel. If you like smut, recommendation it.

its okay to me, not really into this novel. I don't like male lead of this novel. He doesn't deserved MC and dislike selfish indifference system too.
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housyspecial
housyspecial
Jul 06, 2018
Status: c316
Omg so much Smut! Very detailed, every touch and action.

Prepare for your heartstrings to get tugged.

Once male lead falls in love, he falls hard, like obsessive & desperate for our female protagonist.

However, the process of them falling love is what messes with my emotions, sometimes I'm angry, then super sad, then super happy or super touched.

My emotions are always on a roller coaster ride.

I love this novel, good s*x descriptions, a plot that keeps me wanting more, and our cute, slowly growing female protagonist!
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Novelana
Novelana
May 01, 2018
Status: v1c5
This novel has a different kind of story and plot. Not like the ones who transmigated and they seek revenge or the ones who only want to survive in that world. She actually wants to be revived to her own world because she died in there but what makes it different is that she actually has to play a game! On top of that, not just any game but a fluffy game at that! Really forward to reading this novel more!

Thanks for the hard work and dedication to the author... more>> and translator of this novel! <<less
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elvira12
elvira12
Nov 19, 2018
Status: v5c2
This is a wonderful novel. It has much better plots than your regular transmigrator novels. The smut scenes are good (although it ranges towards the impossibility). The MC is amazing because although she is portrayed as dumb, she has a lot of cunning to. I love the interaction between the MC and the system. I laughed so hard when the system finally admitted the truth about it.

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basically the MC was the first host of the system and she got chosen by the system because the other systems ignored the MC. And the MC got so mad at the other systems LOL

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I swear the author is really good at thinking of all these plots. And I cant help but speculate that maybe

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the one who killed the original MC in the first place was the ML. Because remember the car that hit her? It was a sports car. The only thing Im missing is the reason. But it seems that the real ML was going to different worlds collecting all those MLs and fuses with them. So it seems that the ML is stalking her even in the 3000 worlds. (O_O) '

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Also Arc 3 was deemed as boring but my gosh the plot and twists!! I love it! If it were left alone by the MC, it would have really been tragic.

In Arc 4,
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the MC finally felt something for the ML. In previous arcs, it was never the MC who was in love with the ML. It is always the client who loves the MC. When she takes over the client, what she felt is empathy. Meaning she just feels the original feelings of the client, but never hers. But in Arc 4, the MC finally realize that she is beginning to be moved by the ML. She feels that only in this lifetime was she able to feel as their first life together. (The ML reincarnates to where the MC is as it was their promise to each other on the first Arc).

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Overall, highly recommended. If you dont like smut scenes, just jump through it. <<less
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Icecoldchilly
Icecoldchill
May 31, 2018
Status: c9
Ive been shamelessly looking for good smut novels but most are yaoi (I don’t mind but I do want some good straight smut) or just plain bad novels that with glossed over H scenes. So this one has been pretty good in my book. So far... not much plot but there is steamy smut. It’s well written so I’m hoping there is gonna be some nice plot to added. Unfortunately, I have standards when it comes to my smut sooo I’m hoping this one gives me my fix. Thanks translator... more>> for your hard work! <<less
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sayalr
sayalr
Jun 04, 2020
Status: v5
? I never knew I could cry this much in a smut genre novel.

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This... this is simply not what I was expecting. Although the first arc was somewhat lackluster, the following arcs were... darn it! It just made my tears overflow? especially the 4th and 5th ones. Sheesh...i didn't expect the plots to be so deep?? it's hard to move on to the next arc due to the lingering feelings left on the previous arc.

I'm also noticing a slight foreshadowing on the fifth arc that might give a clue as to what's really the deal with the male and female lead and I'm really curious as to what's going to happen and how the author would tie up all the ends! This is simply well written and the smut is just a bonus?

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Youkonos
Youkonos
Mar 25, 2020
Status: c234
I can't justify this liking this novel. ... more>>
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The whole dubious consent aside, there is an arc where the MC is nearly r*ped, as in all her clothes have been ripped off, she's been beaten for resisting, and she is in a catatonic state to try to protect her psyche... all for the sake of the ML's character development. EXCUSE ME? Is this a novel targeted at women or men? What kind of bullsh*t development is it to have the MC go through such a traumatic event just so it can make the ML treasure her more?

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After seeing the author stoop this low, I have no hope of this even being dumb fun. Suddenly all the dubious consent content gets recontextualized to something a whole lot worse and comes off as cheap and disgusting.

To make things worse, the smut itself isn't even written well. Not only does it get repetitive with how little the prose changes between scenes, these scenes tend to go on for chapters.

Try it if you're desperate for a new smut novel, otherwise skip. <<less
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NVismyname
NVismyname
Jul 10, 2019
Status: c26
Uhh..... well...... it's not all that bad, but it's quite the chore to read through. I know I haven't read that far yet, but the hella long s*x scenes kinda become boring. I mean like, yeah the selling point is the smut. But maybe it's because I've already seen and read too many p*rn that I've become desensitized to it, and it just becomes boring.

But if you were attracted by the smut, by no means don't stop on my account. Give it a try. It's an okay read.

(And props... more>> to the MC for putting up with the system and its antics. I srsly did not like the system. It's too much of a selfish as*hole imo.) <<less
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