The Powerful Minister’s Fugitive White Moonlight

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In her past life, Wen Ning was imprisoned by Pei You, becoming his captive, under his control. Each day was spent either planning to flee or attempting to do so, only to have her wings clipped and perish in despair.

In this new life, Wen Ning resolved to conceal her identity and mask her true nature. She acted sharp and cynical, feigned superficiality, and pretended ignorance—all the while harboring deep and unchanging love for him. In short, she mirrored his disdain towards her in every conceivable manner.
As anticipated, Pei You abhorred her to the extreme in this life, avoiding her at all cost and retreating ninety li at the sight of her, as if he could scarcely bear to look at her. Wen Ning felt a sense of relief, finally able to select a husband without reservation.
News of Wen Ning’s betrothal spread throughout the city, and on that fateful day, she coincidentally crossed paths with Pei You. Determined to play out the final scene, she clung to his leg, tears welling in her eyes. “Sir, this maiden does not wish to wed. My love for you is unwavering, as clear as day and as evident as the moon and stars. I will marry no one but you in this lifetime!”
In Wen Ning’s script, Pei You should have callously walked away without a second glance. Yet, to her astonishment, he remained motionless. Slowly bending down, his warm fingertips brushed away the tears that had yet to fall from her eyes. His gaze and tone shifted from his usual cold and distant demeanor to a beguiling warmth. “If that’s the case, then marry me. What do you say?”

Wen Ning: “…???”

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权臣的在逃白月光
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Latest Release

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08/13/24 Story Seedling c4 part2
08/12/24 Story Seedling c4 part1
07/23/24 Story Seedling c3
07/01/24 Story Seedling c2
06/25/24 Story Seedling c1 part2
06/25/24 Story Seedling c1 part1
Review
1 Review


miu
miu
Jul 26, 2024
Status: c84
I almost gave up at chapter 50 because the storyline kept getting more and more irritating but I kept going because I wanted to see how they got married. Everything was disappointing to say the least. I don't agree with how the author tried to portray the characters, especially the ML. The author made the ML so terrible in the past life to give the MC a reason to hate him but then when she's reborn of course the ML can't be that terrible anymore. But the MC still has... more>> to hate his guts so she manages to conceal the fact that she was his childhood sweetheart and make him dislike her. And his disliking her means he talks down on her and occasionally thinks about mu*dering her.... Honestly, I don't agree when authors think their MLs need to hate to the point of killing women especially when it's the MC. I understand some authors do this because they need to show that the ML dislikes all women equally and only when they get to know the MC better and fall in love then they can start to show affection to make it more believable. However, I don't agree that a person should always be thinking about killing others randomly and having authors think this is an ok character trait for their MLs to have.

And when it comes to the MC, she's kinda an airhead. Even after living 2 lives, her choices make her seem so childish and sometimes even weird. Since she's reborn then she knows certain things that will happen before they happen and has the chance to change them, but, it feels like the author only brings it up if it's convenient for the couple to develop feelings.

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For example, she remembered ML's adopted parents died in a fire and just because ML's mother gave her a bowl of noodles, then she decide to spend a lot of money to hire people to save them. Like, this happens soon after her rebirth and up until this point, the author kept stressing on how much MC hates ML and is scared of ML and wants nothing to do with ML. Yet, when ML's parents are in danger, she first tried to ignore it but then later, reasons with herself that she didn't want ML's adopted mother (who faintly reminds her of her own mom) to die without trying to save her. Ok, fine, the man you hate so much who tied you up and restricted your freedom in your past life and who you wouldn't hesitate to kill if given the chance, you're ok with saving his parents whom you've never met in the first life and only briefly met once in your current life because you're a kind person in this life. Sure. But why didn't you try a bit more to save your ex-fiancé (Shen Jin) who died on the battlefield? In her past life, she married Shen Jin then he got called away to fight and died. Somehow she was made to believe that the reason he left was because of ML's scheme so she hated ML for that. She actually loved Shen Jin deeply, yet, when he is called again to the battlefield then all MC does is tells him to be careful and gives him her purse to hold, hoping he will have more will to live if something did happen to him. So the author spends several chapters on her stressing over if she should save ML's parents or not and then just a few sentences on Shen Jin even though she loved him in her past, cried desperately when he died, refused to remarry, etc. Even if it's been too long in her past life, then why does it seem like ML's parents still hold more weight than her dead husband? And even if it's harder for her to prevent his death, at least have her worry about it a bit more??? Idk, it just felt as if the author was force-feeding the reader this "saving ML's parents so he can love you even more in the future" plotline.

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The MC is portrayed as being more clever but it just feels like she's clumsy. The ML is portrayed so evilly in the past life but the author tries too hard to whitewash him in the current life. The author tries to hint that MC was being manipulated by others into thinking ML is worse than he was but it wasn't even done in a clever way or anything. She'll rather believe a random concubine's words without even asking ML and even when she realized she may have been tricked after her rebirth, she doesn't question why she still hates ML so much.

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There's even a section that mentioned that ML mainly married her in the past life because he promised her when they were younger that he would save her from being married off to an old man. So it wasn't even like he loved her when he came back to the capital and was searching for her. He actually fell in love with her when they first met again in front of the doctor's shop and she pointed at her nose which was something she used to do when they were children. Then he fell in love with her. So in the current life, she avoided him and didn't point at her nose and made him dislike her so he still isn't in love with the "white moonlight". I don't understand the author's reasoning for this part. It feels like she's trying to not make him a shallow person by saying he wasn't in love with her when they were children but fell in love later.

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And yet, MC hates ML so much, but then why did she still agree to marry him again??? The ML still doesn't know she was his white moonlight but found out she was tricking him so he proposes marriage to MC (due to other various reasons) and she actually agreed even though she still hates him. She also has her reasons but she's swayed by the agreement of divorce after 3 years and him giving her a lot of money each month. I just, couldn't believe it when I read it. Like, both he and her still don't like each other even though a lot of things have already happened between them.

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MC realizes ML is not who he was in the past life, that he's not as cruel as she thought he was. ML still doesn't like MC but randomly when MC is in danger then his body automatically saves her even if he didn't mean to. ML also starts to have flashback dreams to the past life too and past events. He sees her in his dreams but even though he believes his dreams are more true than false, he still doesn't get to the bottom of who she really means to him. Like, he's already dreamt of her so many times, he already has the power to dig up her childhood history, it's not like that was a secret, and yet, the author makes him still pretend to be dumb about it. Even though he's so smart he figured out she was lying to him and why she did certain things, he still couldn't figure out that she was his white moonlight. I just wanted to facepalm myself at this point. I don't even want to know when they finally figure it out because it's so dumb. The author even wrote early on that it wasn't hard for him to find out who she is when he had power so that's why she had to make him hate her.

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Overall, the plotline is confusing, the character's feelings and motivations are a mess, and it feels like the story is just trying to draw itself out. It doesn't make sense that ML, with all his power and abilities, can't figure out MC's past when you can just ask the servants, others around, etc. And MC's hate doesn't match with her actions. She's supposed to hate ML but every time the story gives a reason to hate then the author gives another reason to make up for MC's character. It was a disappointing read but if you like these kinds of stories then you can give it a try. <<less
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