I was getting creeped out of the ML cause he was obviously grooming her when she was in her teens. I get that he didnt outright harrass her or what not, but seriously, touches that are longer than necessary and all those flirty lines and teasing? If he was ugly, it'll be harassment!

The ML is 20 smthn years and coming onto the 14-year-old MC like f*ckin weirdo. The author tries to wave it off saying that the MC is mentally 28. But the ML doesn't know that!! He's just targeting her because she looks "too beautiful for her age". Like srsly??? There is this one scene where she spars with him in the forest and she pins him down and says "It feels good to be on top of him" clearly meaning that being able to pin someone of a higher position gave her a power rush. But the guy pinned her down and was all like oh yeah this is what happens when u entice a man???? And wouldn't let her go even after her slamming her fists against his chest. That scene felt particularly alarming to me.

not to mention that scene after the fight with the foreigner who has a metal wire he looks at her feet??? And gets excited? And the proceeds to think to himself not to look at her enticing feet and then looks at her thigh???? Ayyo how is that any better????

then there's also a scene soon after in the car where he tries to convince her that he is the only man she should be near while she repeatedly says all men are the same so she will stay away from them all???? Like isn't that grooming?? She clearly expresses that she has no interest in him romantically or sexually unlike ml.

I was a little surprised to found out that Li Jinniang is Ye Jian's cousin (Demon king, we love you for taking your little sister back home), I suspected that Ye xinfan wasn't Ye Jian's biological father but I never expected a blood relationship between Ye Jian and Jinniang, at first I thought he would become A-yuan's love rival but author-san deceived me haahahah. To have a brother in-law like a demon king... wow Xia Jinyuan work hard because it will be quite hard to snatch the demon king's meimei haahahh. I loved the moment where Ye jian meet her grandpa and her father. Her father become soon a daughter s*ave like Jinniang become a siscon and work together to bully the rascal who stole their little princess. I loved the moment Father Fu found out about her daughter being in a relationship with colonel Xia haahahah.

The author gave an excuse to this that she once had this work, etc., but that cannot excuse the protagonist halo the author put on to Ye Jian.

I am also not a big fan of how Ye Jian suddenly entered a whole new world of the battlefield at the age of 14? Is that even reasonable? And they made it legal? No way. I would love to see a more realistic person who would work hard to be a great soldier than to see someone suddenly being great at everything. I wish the author did try to solve everything in her junior and senior years of studying than making her part of something serious like the military and politics at a young age with the excuse that she is the protagonist.

The main character is super ridiculously talented with strong family connections and everything, so it doesn't make sense at all that she ended up as a no-one in her previous life before she regressed.