The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf S*x S*ave (LN)

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A reincarnated young man named Marth wants to conquer dungeons together with his elf s*ave, Lilia. However, he hardly made any progress due to him making love with her every day.

Then one day after they did it, Marth was told “Normally human males only have penises that are as big as a child’s finger, no?” such shocking words by Lilia after she was satisfied.

Marth knew that his beast was on the big side but he didn’t think that it would be on the same level as a cheat. With Lilia’s suggestion, he decided to steal some girls over from other parties to increase their number of companions.

He is stealing girls but he doesn’t get his girls stolen.

It’s a brutal story, not a heartwarming one

He goes around forcing others onto himself!

Will he ever archive his goal to conquer the dungeons?

Associated Names
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Dungeon Harem Made with Elf S*aves
Elf Seidorei to Kizuku Dungeon Harem: Isekai Seijijou wa Okureteiru you nanode
Erufu Seidorei
Netotte Nakama wo Fuyashimasu
エルフ性奴隷と築くダンジョンハーレム――異世界性事情は遅れているようなので、寝取って仲間を増やします――
Related Series
The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf S*x S*ave (WN) (Web Novel)
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Latest Release

Date Group Release
06/17/23 AM23 MTL v5 afterword
06/17/23 AM23 MTL v5 extra
06/16/23 AM23 MTL v5 epilogue
06/15/23 AM23 MTL v5c19
06/14/23 AM23 MTL v5c18
06/13/23 AM23 MTL v5c17
06/12/23 AM23 MTL v5c16
06/11/23 AM23 MTL v5c15
06/10/23 AM23 MTL v5c14
06/09/23 AM23 MTL v5c13
06/08/23 AM23 MTL v5c12
06/07/23 AM23 MTL v5c11
06/06/23 AM23 MTL v5c10
06/05/23 AM23 MTL v5c9
06/04/23 AM23 MTL v5c8
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H2oJacKle
H2oJacKle rated it
April 13, 2023
Status: v3c17
story kind of ok. Girls is cute. R-18 scene is so-so sometime it's good sometime it kind of lazy just put it in for making this story had s*x scene

translation kind of confused sometime but still ok to read

but most annoying me is MC mindset (or author mindset?) author said he is 29 years old (and plus more 17 years old) but what I feel like he just 15 years old boy beside of his half-ass naive mindset that you can saw anywhere in Japanese MC he feel like he... more>> just the boy that begging money from his parent all the time.

don't want to keep any money for yourself because you want slow-life shit? ARE YOU FUC*ING KIDDING ME? Over 30 yrs don't had mind set about how money work?!? And he don't had any backup plan if your supply run out?! He just refill his money by clearing dungeons by depending on his only one skill he had?!

he spending so much to spoil his harem but thinking 'Oh I don't need any money' and how TF you will keep your harem happy if you don't have any money!?

money and the solve of all problem with money come out of nowhere just like 15 boy that didn't mind anything about money because he can asked his parent when he running out

another thing is the same thing of other naive sh*t MC is not killing his enemy (human) just kill only monster just running around with story that everyone will be friend later

it's still fun to read but more I read more annoying personality of MC will become <<less
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Pillow Thug rated it
January 13, 2023
Status: v1c10
I'll be honest the translation and structure can be really off putting, but the story is overall not half bad.

The good:

1. The smut/s*x scenes are described REALLY well and is not a forced topic in the novel, although sometimes the translation can really f*ck it up.

... more>> 2. The comedy is decent and can give a chuckle at times. But it is understandable if you cringe at the occasional jokes.

3. The main protagonist: Isn't an incompetent piece of sh*t, is reasonable with most the current actions he's taken, not overly h**ny for no reason, doesn't feel like a self insert, has parents, show's struggles that are understandable and has a better personality than 90% of anime MCs.

4. The female Protagonists/love interest: Are not 1 dimensional, don't instantly fall in love when meeting MC, have personality (unlike most Japanese light novels), have character developments (they're not static), have interesting dialogue, and have understandable motives in their role of the novel.

5. The plot feels interesting currently and isn't simply a content forced on to you.
Spoiler

As the goal is to conquer and search dungeons to destroy a "Necronomicon" (watch evil dead you dumb*ss), to ensure that world doesn't suffer the presence of a powerful vicious mage in the MC's lifetime.

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The Bad:

1. The "Netori" is confusing as f*ck, as the intentions go back and forth like a yo-yo.

2.I know I said "the comedy is decent" but it feels repetitive at times. (Thank god this isn't the main tone/theme of the novel)

3. The translation is half-baked at times and could have some major tweaks such as: fixing the name of the MC "Mars" to "Marth", fixing spelling/grammar in character dialogues like
Spoiler

"There's an air of s*avery about her if I tell you....... But I can't have s*x with Hazuki-chan. Unlike Lilia, she can get pregnant. I've been able to put up with her for a while now, she's like a friend. She's fun to watch, too."

(NOTE: Lilia/Elf girl can get pregnant)

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and fix the transition of 3rd person view to character dialogue. <<less
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TUSF
TUSF rated it
November 20, 2022
Status: v1c9
The smut is pretty half-baked. Dunno if it's just because the author has bad prose, or the translator is just bad (it's MTL, so definitely a huge factor, but not the only one).

If you're going to write erotica, the smut has to at least be well written, but I found it mostly forgettable. Honestly, the author's entire mindset irks me, too. They seem to want to write some NTR (MC stealing another guy's girl) but they clearly don't actually have that kink, and half-ass it the whole way. It's like... more>> they want to attract people into netori, but don't want to scare of NTR haters. A bland compromise that satisfies nobody.

There's plenty more that irks me about the story, and how the author writes, but those are more subtle things, that I just feel don't belong in a smut story. <<less
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