The Devil Who Breaks My Neck

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The Empire’s beauty – also known as the Devone Fairy, Herace Devone.

During her family’s rebellion, she loses everything.

Ezekiel, the illegitimate child of Duke Serpence, had a huge role in preventing treason in the Empire and hence was appointed as the Duke.

“I want the extinct Devone family’s daughter, Herace.”

So, the traitor, Herace becomes the Duchess.

“Live. Just live. I will take care of everything else.”

After Ezekiel’s numerous attempts, Herace gradually opens up.

The two of them, who fell in love with each other, will have children.

Three months had passed since Ezekiel had left for war, and when he returned, he had an unfamiliar woman next to him.

“Greet her. She’s the woman who’ll be here in the future.”

The woman’s swollen belly was no doubt at its limit.

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내 목을 꺾는 악마여
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  2. Alexa, play Criminal by Britney Spears
  3. Yandere males
  4. my fav grovel novels
  5. Sad and tragedy novels

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15 Reviews


doomscur
New doomscur
Apr 09, 2024
Status: --
the devil sure did break her neck, her soul too. I don't know how I feel about this one. "It" did cursed his family but ML chose to do all those things to fl. He is not good. And this novel is a novel within many novels but the thing that is not satisfactory is that the author chose the god dang same storyline for all the side couples. Its a repeat. Its like the author only knows that life and for me, they ended up being fillers rather than... more>> unique.

ML abused and imprisoned fl.

fl's father abused fl's mother

ml's father abused and imprisoned fl's mother

the boat guy abused and imprisoned his wife

etc. Ya'll get what I'm saying? And when I say the same plot for the side characters, its legit THE SAME.

the ending of the novel made me frown. I feel like FL will regain her memories and the cycle will continue- with her being tormented.

i don't know. Detach your emotions when reading this novel. This novel is not angst, its more "da fuk? Huh?"

I give this novel 2.5 stars <<less
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satan at work
satan at wor
Aug 20, 2021
Status: c4
I read a review of this novel and I'm devastated. I won't even acknowledge that man as the male lead.

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Spoiler

He has done everything to MC that a person could hate. He slapped her, r*ped her repeatedly, abused her verbally, confining her. This is not angst for me. Just a tr*shy dude and his wife's sufferings. And he also brings a pregnant girl to the house without explanation. The ending was not to my satisfaction either.

There was a lot of reviews about how much they hated him.

And he did all that because of a misunderstanding?

That's so cruel of him. I don't think I will stab a man cuz I thought he was my stalker. But he wasn't. Now I can't just apologise to his corpse. Can I ? That's won't change what I did. So as what the male lead (more like a villain) did too.

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Hailol
Hailol
Aug 22, 2021
Status: c13
I am giving this a 1 star because of how much I hate the ML. Usually when I read angsty novels, I try to forgive the male lead because there is no point in hating them forever because they will somehow end up with the FL. HOWEVER, this is the novel, the novel where I ABSOLUTELY want the ML to SUFFER AND REGRET the rest of his life. I want him to be in PAIN. I CANNOT stand him, I despise him, I won't ever forgive him. I am warning... more>> you before you read this to prepare your heart, do NOT expect anything from the ML. <<less
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Dr. Baggels
Dr. Baggels
Dec 24, 2021
Status: Completed
This is THE BEST angst novel I've ever read but don't get me wrong, I LOVE this novel to the bone so much but that doesn't mean I like the ML I despise him with all my soul. And PLEASE read the tags before reading this bcuz some things might be triggering for some people. Do take note that just bcuz a story involves crime in it does not mean the story encourages crime. I mean, people dont condone m*rder but still watch things that contains it. Its basically the... more>> same thing.

Some of yall gotta realise too this novel isnt even about romance or romanticising abuse, it's about the consequences of unhealthy obession, jealousy and grudge. Like you tell me whens the last time you smile bcuz of the romance in the novel, probably up until the first sentence of the prologue.

Also for those who thinks this isn't 'angsty' just shitty I think yall don't understand what angst genre means

(Angst -- refers to a genre of stories with prevalent physical or, mainly, emotional torment of characters.) Literally what happened in the story btw so I think it filled the angst requirements. BUT don't get me wrong I totally understand why other people hates this novel it's just not your cup of tea ofc. But to call it shitty just bcuz you're not into the plot is kinda not fair.

Reasons I love this novel and not because I support abuse:

1. Main reason is bcuz it managed to make me cry from the first chapter to the last so yea it was hours. It was satisfying 👍

2. The translator did a magnificent job in translating I really love them for that.

3. I like to focus on the characters' emotions and the way they affect mine which is why I'm absolutely in love with the way the author potrayed all of the characters' despairs. Like the anxiety, stress and the whole emotional burden each of the important characters went through that slowly descend them into madness and comes crashing into a one big destructive mess is just perfect immaculate build-ups for me.

4. The plot itself isn't bad there are some plot twists but its not as important? Sure it was mindblowing for me but its more like 'omg its like that??' like it doesnt affect the situation much cuz the ML still acts like a crazy bull whether with or without it.

Regarding the ML:

He's literally the worst ML I've ever come across 🤡 (lowkey want Herace to just die so he can regret everything he had done to her but I want her to be happy ❤️) I won't defend this novel because I can understand where the bad reviews are coming from tbh and I don't really think the author deserves the hate cuz everyone has the right to make any type of stories unless it's illegal or unless the author romanticizes what Ezekiel did. Spoiler on the ending (i kinda wanna change my ratings to 4 star cuz of it but idk how to change so) :

Spoiler

I read this from the spoiler forum btw so basically the ending is that after Herace killed herself, Ezekiel made a deal with the demon to save her in exchange for a curse be placed on him (idk if its a curse but yea), Herace was revived with no prior memories of the sh*tty things he'd done which is kinda not fair for her I think bcuz she deserves to know what he did

Also the curse is that whenever Ezekiel touches Herace his flesh would feel as if they're melting from his body. And that whenever she whisper to him or him hearing her voice it'd feel as if his ears are one fire. (Im not sure much abt these curses cuz I be forgetting things but I know it has something to do with physical pain so kinda same)

Also that later Herace will be pregnant again and she said she wanna name him Erzen which will forever torment Ezekiel with guilt till the end of his life knowing that he's the only one who remembered he killed Erzen before (which is why I kinda went 'eh ok' yk compromise with the ending since a lifetime of real physical pain and guilt that used to send him spiralling into madness, will slowly eat him up alive, is one of the worst punishment someone could go through and tbh its the only thing that keeps my grudge for him going fr)

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Men like the ML doesnt deserve death bcuz its too much of a peaceful way out. I prefer him to be t*rtured in one of the worst way possible till the end of his life. Which is why the ending for me, is acceptable. He can have Herace and he will treat her right but he will also have to go through indescribable pain he signed up for as a result of his sins for the rest of his life.

I'm saying all of this from a reader's view and not a human, being part of the novel. Surely I said I like the build-ups of the emotional traumas but that doesn't mean I condone and support what the ML did. I like this novel based on the way its written and the feelings it evoked, not based on my morals therefore its fine for people to enjoy this novel. <<less
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Dragon_Reader
Dragon_Reade
Aug 27, 2021
Status: c21
A typical, abusive and shitty novel.

Angst with logic is one thing. Senseless violence against MC is another. This is not angsty novel - I repeat, NOT ANGSTY.

Just shitty.
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gothiccqueen
gothiccqueen
Oct 28, 2022
Status: c25
I love angsty novels, don't get me wrong. This one however, made my blood pressure rise with every single chapter. For those who have read The Remarried Empress, I'd compare the ML (if he's even deserving of that title) to Sovieshu but infinitely worse.

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Spoiler

The fact that Ezekiel r*pes Herace several times, absolutely humiliates her in public, and doesn't recognize Herace's child as his son (which is a whole other clusterf*ck of an issue, makes me absolutely loathe him.

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Ultimately, I decided to read spoilers for the ending of the novel because I wanted to see if it was worth toughing it out. It's not. It's really not.
Spoiler

You could argue that Ezekiel's punishment is completely suitable, especially given the physical and s*xual abuse that he commits towards the FL. Yet the fact that this b*stard STILL ends up with Herace in the end AND she loses all memory of her abuse just doesn't sit well with me.

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I've read a ton of novels, and Ezekiel is by far the least redeemable ML I have ever seen in any novel. <<less
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Kajoli Akter
Aug 10, 2022
Status: --
This novel is... unrecyclable tr*sh. Especially the ml. He is the 2nd worst ML I've ever seen. But the person I hate most is the author, not the characters.

People have right to write anything, I don't think so. I'm strictly against those novels' that encourages crime. And this novel is one of those. I have seen women like FL, being in the worst part of their lives because of their husbands. I've seen those husbands, claiming hitting their wife is a form of showing love. So I can never ever... more>> tolerate this kind of plot.

So I request the author, please do not make the FL end up with ml. Men like ML don't deserve any woman in their life let alone good woman like FL.

If you can ignore the ml's tr*shy behaviour, this novel is good. But unfortunately the ML is tr*shy 100% in the novel, that's why I gave it two stars. Other than that, the novel is okay. <<less
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astropia
astropia
May 31, 2023
Status: c74
This one is hard to rate (and it may change depending on the ending). I understand all the 1-star reviews, and I even agree on some level. I also think it's an interesting piece of art with deceptive depth. As a piece of literature, it's actually pretty good. However, I think it fails in two important areas: details and framing.

Any review will tell you how much of a piece of sh*t Ezekiel (ML) is, and oh YES I agree. He's downright evil, beyond redemption, unpleasant and nauseating to read. This... more>> doesn't have to be a bad thing. An author can write a satisfying ending through either a redemption arc or making him eat dirt. In my opinion, they go wrong when they imply it will be the former.

Unless you look closely at the tags (which can be misleading- r*pe can refer to the ML, but not necessarily), the description paints this picture: hot yandere ML wants FL, gets FL, then misunderstanding happens, then he's mean and there's angst. If you're familiar with webnovel tropes, the expected trajectory: he realizes he's wrong and after enough groveling, FL forgives them and they live happily ever after.

The first problem is that he isn't just "mean". Everyone agrees with that- he's worse than your everyday tr*sh ML. He's abusive physically, verbally, psychologically, sexually. Severely. We are treated to long, unnecessarily graphic depictions of abuse. We are made to feel all of Herace's pain and humiliation. But he's the ML! How can we want happiness for this evil bastard?

Spoilers for chs 40+:

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And while you'd expect the turnaround to come after he "finds" her, the abuse only ramps up from there. He was already beyond redemption to most readers, and even when he has YEARS to reflect and change himself, he decides the problem was he didn't control her ENOUGH? Bruh.

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This is where the framing issue comes in. Spoilers for chs 65+:

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The author's motivations become clear when Erzen dies. We still think with disbelief, somehow, things will turn out ok, even though they shouldn't and realistically cannot. But the mu*der of a child cannot be redeemed. "Miguel" spells it out for us- this was never meant to end well. We thought we were reading a dark angsty love story, but we were really reading a greek tragedy. We're reading a man destroy himself and his world because he fell prey to his own evil desires.

In some ways, this is brilliant. When a webnovel can be compared to Faust and the Decameron, something is being done right. The author led us to believe Ezekiel was a good guy deep down somewhere, but he never was. His motivations were wrong from the start, and then the consequences came back in a poetic way.

However, defying expectations is a double-edged sword. Many come to webnovels for escapism. When the aforementioned safe trajectory (status quo-angst-regret-happy ending) is broken, some readers will be disturbed. The abuse of Herace is gratuitous- scenes are more detailed than they need to be, and it keeps going on for more chapters than it needs to. As art, it's effective at conveying Ezekiel's evil. But harm to innocent characters can also cause real harm to readers. I saw this in the comments of chapters, reviews, even translators dropping the story because it got too distressing.

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You anticipate heavy themes when you read Goethe, but I don't think TDWBMN properly conveys that expectation. I'm not sure whether that was intended or not- is this subversive art or someone who just took yandere tropes too far? Either way, I can't give it a high rating because of that. But the writing and translation quality is too good for a low rating. So I stick with a very conflicted 3 stars, for now. <<less
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W8_wut
W8_wut
Dec 26, 2022
Status: c12
It's frustrating to be honest... At the first 5 minutes of this novel, I feel like I want to slap the ML and throw him somewhere he'll feel hell. I only reach chapter 12. Less than 1 hour I did a lot while reading this. Pun©# the air/bed, silent scream, cried, disappointed (to ml), angry, hate, disgust, annoyed, sympathy, and of course confused.─=≡Σ (╯°□°) ╯︵┻┻

Btw according on the other comments.

1. Bruh is dumb

... more>> 2. He's so not worth it.

3. He's a worse than tr*sh;

4. He scoops all the negative words in the dictionary.

Like can you believe? He tormented FL because of the misunderstanding? Bruh like to make conclusion out of nowhere and calling it a day! Didn't even ask or investigate?

Not only did not only bring a bit*** to the estate, but he also forced out delicate FL and abuse her!

I stop reading it because it hurt my head. But the kudos to the author, It really brought out many emotions— of course, mostly of them are negative. The story is good but just really frustrating.

I'll recommend this to my friends so they'll get frustrated.

┬─┬ノ (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°ノ) <<less
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busybee168
busybee168
Aug 10, 2021
Status: c2
I love angsty novel. Look interesting. Thank for picking up this novel.

So far so good. Can't wait to read more =)))))))))))))))
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Momotofu
Momotofu
Jan 15, 2023
Status: c46
Lets just say right out of the gate I am waiting for the ML to realize his folly and live in regret but in Ch46 he continues to be a piece of crap and a jealous son of a b.

(breathes in heavily)

Great translation, lots of angst if you’re into this stuff. Word of caution: read this when you have nothing to do later or you will be full of ire and everyone around you will suffer your wrath.

Im chopping off one star to sharpen into a ninja star... more>> and lobbing it into the ML’s thick skull cuz he is so s*upid he doesn’t use his brain. Just die you mf... <<less
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yuu030
yuu030
Apr 24, 2023
Status: c74
Four stars to the translator and none to the novel. It's translated beautifully, but the novel itself was just too hard to read. In the beginning of the book I was so mad I wanted to smash stuff because of the ML. It's clear by midway that the ML has a problem. He's seriously delusional and needs help. The duchess is only like a wilted flower, it doesn't get any better for her, and the ML, well he's just living in his own lie. Despite the misunderstanding he and the... more>> duchess has he just couldn't bring himself to believe her. I believe that he truly loves her, but in a twisted way. And maybe it was because of It that he turned into the monster that he is (seeing that he was normal up until the incident) <<less
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Civetta
Civetta
Jan 09, 2024
Status: c74
I'll start by saying that as a fan of dark/twisted romance, I really really enjoyed this novel. The translation is beautifully written, and the story is absolutely heart-wrenching. The trick is to not approach it as a romance, but rather a tragic cautionary tale with elements of psychological horror.

We see things primarily from the FL's point of view, but I'd argue it's not really her story. She's more collateral damage in the ML's tale of self-destruction. The driving force behind the plot is his descent into obsession and paranoia that... more>> ruins any chance of having the happy future he so desperately wanted and could have easily had. There's no room for redemption or a happy ending because it'd undermine the entire point of his character arc.

Where it falters a bit is that he spends so long being obnoxiously petty, needlessly violent, and willfully obtuse at the beginning that I can't fault anyone for nope-ing out before any of that comes into play, especially if you're expecting the typical "FL forgives the regretful a**hole" storyline.

Also that's not to say the FL doesn't have her own arc or agency! The author does a great job of portraying her angst and suffering without it negatively impacting the pacing. Often I get frustrated when a plot comes to a dead stop to let the FL to wallow in self-pity for a dozen chapters before anything of note happens, but this one keeps things moving by having the FL fight to hold on to any sense of control as she loses more and more of herself. Whether it's kicking and screaming, refusing to cooperate with the ML's demands, or plotting her next move, she's rarely passive.

The only reason I say this isn't really her story is because everything that happens is a consequence of the ML's actions, while the FL is simply reacting to him. They're interesting and heartbreaking reactions! But the plot can't hinge on her decisions when Ezekiel steamrolls over her every attempt to live a life separate from his.

Overall this novel reminds me somewhat of the manga Red Fox. Very different story, world, and stakes, but a similar dynamic where one obsessively pursues love at the expense of the other's humanity until they're both trapped in a hell of their own making with no chance of a happy ending. Which is exactly the kind of twisted romance horror I'm here for. <<less
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Roroqui
Roroqui
Nov 08, 2022
Status: c27
Yes the "ML" is the tr*shiest tr*sh, but is he the ML? We shall see, the situation is heartbreaking and awful ngl but it hooked me up if only because I can't wait to see this dude crash and burn, I'm very curious where the situation with the demon child and the "price" will go. I really want the lovely FL to start stomping on a few people.
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LadySayuri
LadySayuri
Nov 14, 2023
Status: c74
tempted to give 3.9 (4☆) but held myself back. Dont get me wrong the plot itself is bad which you should know before reading it from the synopsis & the tags, but for what it is, it delivered its story well. The writing (translation), story flow, world bldg, overall logic, even the characters dev, basically the novel itself is good it got me hooked up but just need to skip chapters 58-69 for my sanity and Im glad I did

It's a dog-blood plot but nevertheless the novel itself wasnt bad... more>> honestly. Its really just the story plot and the ML's inferiority & s*upidity was meant for that, but the way the author wrote it is smooth enough that I can really feel my blood pressure & pulse, I even got a headache after reading this in one go probably from the crying

anyways I just feel like the current score is not giving credit enough to the writing its a tragic angst novel it made me cry what do you expect

I dunno about others but Ezekiel is utterly unredeemable he fell into the devils temptation himself and yet cannot face what he did. He deserves the tragedy that had befall unto him and more, frankly I even feel like it wasnt enough. Not sure if saying this too soon as I havent completed the novel tbh im not sure if I even want to, I think 74 is a good stopping place <<less
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