The Daybreak

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“Do you wanna make a bet? — If You survive, live for me and die for me.”

Halka, a high school student who was summoned to another world, became a magician to survive.

Disguised as a man on the battlefield, she flew to a rage towards a knight who wanted to die and after giving him healing magic that chipped away at her own life, she collapsed.

When Halka woke up, the beautiful knight whom she had saved on the battlefield came to visit.

As proof of Halka winning the bet, the knight forced her to enter into a master-servant contract with him……!?

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Daybreak: The Crossdressing Female Magician and the Golden Knight
Futsugyou
The Magician in Male Attire and the Gold Knight
払暁
男装魔術師と金の騎士
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11/06/19 Rainy Translations v2 side story (end)
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10/31/19 Rainy Translations v2 epilogue
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09/25/19 Rainy Translations v2c9 part2
09/18/19 Rainy Translations v2c9 part1
09/05/19 Rainy Translations v2c8
08/25/19 Rainy Translations v2 illustrations
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Pp789
New Pp789 rated it
August 8, 2020
Status: --
I think it’s an okay story. It’s lovely but there are some parts I find illogical ex. The FL’s actions

Her need to save everyone is just... weird.

The ML is kinda cute so if you want a light-hearted story I guess it is okay

I think that the author and translator did a really good job at making me feel things LOL the way this describes the feelings is quite realistic and emotional

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I just hate the fact that as soon as the ML realizes that FL is a girl, he immediately realizes that he’s in love with her and that she is so frail whatever. I mean do you need to say that she is frail right after you know she’s a girl. She is still a powerful magician.

I also don’t really get how the FL think she ‘saves’ the dragon when she kills it

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Nyamu
New Nyamu
July 29, 2020
Status: Completed
Its a great story.

samspd deducted points for the pre-war arc because it could be expanded upon. I "somewhat agree". I feel like "ending" the war right after the prologue removed a lot of possibilities. At the same time this would turn it into a different genre (More of a war story like say... Altina?) so its "forgivable (?) "

As for me, my problem is the ending. First, it feels "rushed" and the romance feels "incomplete". To go into fine details would be spoilers so I will say that most stories... more>> go with Build up -> Crisis -> post crisis -> Epilogue

The post crisis part feels rushed and leaves many questions unanswered.

The second part I don't like is probably more of a personal preference and has to do with the MC's name. The prologue itself tells you her name is "Haruka". But she changed it to "Halka" to disguise herself as a man. With this having the romance tag, it is obvious she gets together with someone in the end. Yet her name in the end remains as "Halka". <<less
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Jevanka926
Jevanka926 rated it
June 21, 2019
Status: --
Please give this story a chance! The girl is an amazing girl and the knight seems nice. I want to see how our MC will make the ML feel like he's worth it. They are precious jewels T_T
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samspd71
samspd71 rated it
July 24, 2019
Status: v1c4
3/5 - C Tier - It's worth a read if it's your type

I can't help but feel that the novel skipped what could have been one of the best parts. I'll call it the 'Pre War' arc, an arc that failed to exist. An arc that could have been used to build up the character as well as her strength and weaknesses. The prologue tells us just how she came to be a part of the war, but the arc could have shown us much better. The novel says why... more>> war broke out, but the arc could very well have said things better, showing the world. Even more, there could have been a point where the two characters meet in passing before the war.

The Pre War arc isn't exactly a necessity, but it could have been served well. Then again, after reading the novel more, I've realized the theme of the story wasn't what the arc would have entailed. A pet peeve.

The novel is too early in its run to fully judge, but there are few things to be noted.

(1) It's written and translated well. Although not descriptive in fights nor landscapes, everything else needs minimal imagination or brain straining to understand. Its vocabulary is fairly higher than most light novels on this site.

(2) Sometimes it says things, things that I suppose are meant to pull at one heartstring or another. However, they fall short in a multitude of ways. Sparsely, it says instead of shows and sometimes it shows when it could simply say. Other times we merely get a mention in passing, but much too small to care about.

(3) The prologue as a whole just works.

(4) For now, the story is quite laid back. The world seems to slowly open up through the eyes of Halka. However, there is a plot that is still in its initial beginning and I assume things will slowly change while unraveling.

(5) The MC is competent and has what could be described as a 'heart of silver'. She isn't averse to killing people, but she also sometimes gets overly dramatic over things that would normally not affect people that have lived through as much as she has.

(6) For the time being, every named character that has appeared has had a personality of their own. Some more than others, very few a gimmick.

As a whole, the novel is currently worth a read. <<less
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AvariFey
AvariFey
November 25, 2019
Status: Completed
This was a painfully beautiful novel. The pure anguish conveyed through the thoughts and actions of some of the characters made me feel like my heart was ripping in half. I loved this story, it captured the complexities and burdens of the MC's situation and the humanity of the characters in a story short enough to read in one sitting.
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Devil Heart
Devil Heart rated it
November 24, 2019
Status: v2 side story
It was so amazing I don't know if I regret reading this novel because it felt like a treasure or I feel regret that I didn't find this novel earlier because it felt I'm missing out something if I don't read this novel

I feel so emotional after reading this novel I could say it's the best short novel I ever read I feel angry, happy, sad I was so choked up in emotion my tears doesn't stop falling

Each and every character is so life like I was so attached to... more>> them especially 2nd male lead I just wish he could find someone else someone as wonderful as our heroine or someone who could make him leave his everything to her or someone who very opposite to our heroine but love him regardless

I felt this novel bring out the complexity of emotions that peoples always take lightly off even me just realised that only because we didn't experience it ourselves it shows different perspectives of life that I couldn't feel more grateful of thank you <<less
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donaiseiyuu
donaiseiyuu rated it
November 9, 2019
Status: v2 side story
A transmigrated Japanese woman disguised as a boy fights in a war and inadvertently becomes a hero. She also acquires a devoted knight.

The premise is simple but beautifully well done. The translation is amazing, and the story is introspective about the costs of war and duty. Of course, the best part is the relationship between a woman and the knight who swears to serve her. Most other novels paint it as romantic and the epitome of chivalry, but what this one does is examine the burden of having someone's life... more>> in your hands.

The flow of the story is also amazing. It is neither too rushed or too slow. In all, the perfect two volumes. The ending is slightly bittersweet but real to the story.

P.S. There is a love triangle here between the magician, knight, and her hired butler, but I think this is one of the few novels where the triangle works for the growth of the characters. Usually, I detest love triangles in general.

Thank you to the translator though. They seem to be having some issues with their translations being stolen, which is horrible. But I hope they don't give up when they have so much talent! <<less
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LazyDays
LazyDays rated it
October 18, 2019
Status: v2c10
VERY GOOD!

It starts off like a fantasy story, but really it's an emotional one about one's reason for existence.

A juxtaposition to the happy go lucky isekai story, this heroine despairs at her fate, of what purpose she has in this utterly foreign world. Filled with nihilism, optimistic fatalism and a love for the sole anchor of her world, she sets out to war... Which is at its ends in the prologue!

With a supporting sad dog of a ML and a fleshed out cast, you got a mature isekai!
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sharl
sharl rated it
December 21, 2019
Status: v2 side story
This was an excellent isekai novel. Even though the usual isekai tropes are not present (growing one's skill, meeting new friends, going on an adventure etc), it showed the more unspoken side of isekai most stories just brushed off lightly - how someone reacts when everything s/he has ever known and and loved was suddenly ripped away. The romance wasn't the main focus either, and considering the setting, it seemed appropriate. Even the ending felt apt - given the setting it would be out of place to have a happy... more>> ever after. Not to say it was a bad ending; 'bittersweet' would be the word.

Highly recommended. <<less
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umichan
umichan rated it
November 20, 2019
Status: v2 side story
GOOD

P.S This is the Light Novel

P.P.S. This is my first review and its probably really bad but... (;﹏;)

... more>> A really simple straightforward short story, that has a superb translation (like god-tier level).

The story although short has direction and a lot of emotion which I find you don't see much in JP/KR ETC novels as they are usually amateur writers whose perhaps coming off from translations seem very flat or just sort of jumping on the bandwagon of the isekai trend with an OP MC with no sense of actual direction, story or character.

This short novel however although not 'perfect' is a delightful read due to the believable emotions you get out of the story, they don't feel forced y'know like having a character have to go through a 'Dark Arc' where they numb their sense of self etc, it usually (for me at least) comes off very forced and just for convenience sake for either A. Cool protagonist Background or B. How MC became OP unfeeling cool mega awesome guy.

I personally just feel Haruka's raw emotion of frustration, anger, grief, selfishness all seem accounted for and feel believable and right.

I also wholeheartedly agree with samspd71 comments about the novel however, I am more forgiving in small errors as I know that the author of this work is an amateur and it is technically a short story etc.

The characters you can't really talk about much, except the two leads; however that is fine as the story is essentially about them. Secondary characters don't really come off as plot convenience characters or as 2D.

Their characters aren't very deep such as with the leads but are still believable albeit very short cameos, but that is only really due to it being a short story and there really is no need to expand on the secondary characters all that much.

I do feel though with Alfred, it was not unnatural or make you feel 'oh this is wrong'. It just feels like a mistake you overlook but are still able to understand the story? Maybe if the story was longer Alfred could of developed more.

I agree with LazyDays saying it was a story about one's reason for existence, in a less heavy way (its quite lighthearted but not to the measure it is 'fluffy') and that it is a mature isekai (as in the sense it feels more grown up instead of 'let's rule the world *pew pew*') Overall I really enjoyed the direction of the story and the pacing (not too fast not too slow).

Also the artwork matches well with the story! <<less
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Soul Reaver
Soul Reaver rated it
July 26, 2020
Status: Completed
I really like this story. I like that it shows the importance of considering other people's feelings and, also, be true to oneself.

Plus, the translation is great.
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crim
crim rated it
June 25, 2020
Status: Completed
This was both very well written and heart-wrenchingly beautiful. It was definitely not as light hearted as expected, and no regrets in reading it. It was refreshing in it's realism of actually being summoned in another world, being taken away from everyone you know and that know you. Not many novels describe this and this one does it amazingly.

Halka is a very strong person, or well, she learned to be one for herself, and for the people around her. Despite that, her strength is aided by her weakness. She is... more>> a weak person that is driven to live, for at least one person to remember her as 'her' and not the persona she has created.

I found the two main characters' relationship ironic in a way. In the beginning, you would think Halka is the one who saved Richardo from despair and loneliness. But it's mutual. They save each other. This is somewhat so heartbreaking.

I find the old teacher's guilt and hope to atone, to at least bring some hope to Halka, really pitiful and saddening. That part was probably one of my favorite. It really left me with the impact the old teacher genuinely regretted summoning her and learned from his sins. Finally! One person who acknowledges how messed up they are in their deeds and seek to atone for their sins for the rest of their lives.

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Especially the part where she describes how he tried to recreate things - like the bear - from her world. Broke my heart, man.

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Anyways, definitely reccomended! I binged it in one go. You won't regret reading this amazing story! <<less
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chromaQ
chromaQ rated it
June 3, 2020
Status: Completed
This is a deeply moving story about humanity, identity, and how dehumanizing it is to the individual forced to be the "hero, " who is a flesh-and-blood person who has their own needs, motivations, and dreams.

This story is very much unlike most "transmigration" stories, it is so much better than that. But if you're looking for a short, lighthearted story, you may not want to read this one. If you're looking for a heroic, human protagonist, I highly recommend reading this story: it is one that I will re-read many... more>> times in the future. <<less
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Waterylime
Waterylime rated it
May 31, 2020
Status: Completed
This is one of the best translations I have ever read. At times I had to question weather the translator was not actually the author. This story dose not follow the topical trops for this genre. In fact it takes a look at what is usually glossed over. The author's pacing of the story and the switching of POV are skillful executed with out making the reader feel disoriented, bored, or rushed. The ending while painfully bitter sweet dose not leave you wanting over all it is a very satisfying.... more>> On a personal not I am upset that it took me so long to find this story and truly only found it because the manga was only on chapter two and I desperately wanted to know what happened and couldn't stand the wait. I am very glad that I didn't wait for the manga and instead read the original story. <<less
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noovice
noovice rated it
May 29, 2020
Status: v2 side story
I'm quite conflicted with what happened just before the story ended. It was a good read overall so I'm giving it a 4 out of 5. Nice job translator-san.
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Bunnylla
Bunnylla rated it
April 14, 2020
Status: v2 side story
I really love the story! I've got no words to describe it. I just simply love the story, the characters, EVERYTHING!

Thank you so much for translating this!
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
January 7, 2020
Status: Completed
Have you ever been in an unfamiliar place by yourself for a long time?

Can you imagine having no way to return to your friends, family, and any people who know who you are and care about you?

I haven't read many isekai-type novels, but I completely believe the translator when they say this is very unique.

... more>> I found the point-of-view of the narrator very realistic and human. It's relatable on a wide host of levels.

I also really enjoyed the strength of the heroine. Her strength isn't one that never shows weakness or imperfections; she makes mistakes, has willful and selfish moments, but she also makes up for them by facing up to her fears and using compassion to understand and share the burdens of people around her; we are all human after all. In turn, the people around do the same for her.

Although some parts were a bit dramatic, this is a very wholesome, sweet, and decidedly romantic story where the ML falls for our MC despite her disguise.

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2nd ML is pretty cool too, really liked him a lot!

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Really fantastic translation, 10/10. Everything flowed very well and was very vivid. <<less
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IrisEllings
IrisEllings rated it
May 3, 2020
Status: v2 side story
This is a lovely novel that greatly highlights the two main titular characters, the Golden Knight and the Cross dressed Magician.

Our unreliable heroine is the most developed character in the book: her maturity, her depth of emotions, her humanity and her conundrums of being in a world entirely foreign to her is laid bare to the readers.

If you're looking for a novel that delves heavily into romantically fluffy action, you'll likely be disappointed. This novel portrays the raw sides of sacrifice and the ideals of someone strong and admired by... more>> the masses.

Haruka is an admirable character and she really shows what it means to be human and to have unnerving conviction despite one's setbacks. 10/10, I won't forget this novel. Many thanks to the TL, Sephi who did it too. <<less
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TBTNK
TBTNK rated it
April 4, 2020
Status: v2 side story
The story was wrapped up well and ended in volume 2. I’ve read the translation of the Afterword of author in Volume 2 and she said it’s the final volume. I don’t know why another reviewer said there were three volumes and gave a very low rating. The translator did a very wonderful job in translating this novel. This is not a short story even though there are only 14 chapters. Why I said so because each chapter is so long. The author did a wonderful job to demonstrate each... more>> character’s thoughts and dilemma in details. It’s full of emotions and it’s like a roller coaster ride. The romance is a slow burn and the love rivalry is a healthy one so it makes you feel a bit heartache for the second ML. <<less
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linnil
linnil rated it
February 23, 2020
Status: v2 side story
This is pretty fun. It's the realistic take for summon to another world. The conflict is pretty good. I really like the MC and ML.
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Cilia
Cilia rated it
December 8, 2019
Status: Completed
this novel is a masterpiece I can't say anything else to describe it I love this novel very much all the emotions the characters felt are transmitted to me so clearly it almost hurt I loved everything about this novel I wish I had read it sooner yet I wish I didn't finish reading it it's the kind of novel that will make me want to reread it for the first time countless times it's quite rare to find novels like this I totally recommend reading it even though I'm... more>> not the kind to reread but this novel just compels me to reread it's really an excellent read it became my top fav in a flash I wish I can rate it 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 or even more it deserves it GREATLY I'm looking forward to read more from this author and from this translator <<less
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Amari
Amari rated it
August 10, 2019
Status: v1 illustrations
i am obsessed with this story so far. It’s a good read. I wish there was more detail in the back story. Really like it and hoping for it to continue. The manga is good so far too.
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